Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!) - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Finally a update!

Have been waiting for this!
Coming to the update, its amazing👏
Finally shravan found sumo!
Drunk sumo is so cute!
Their confession and marriage in their andazz is superb!
Thanks for the PM😊


Thanks a lot for your kind words and commenting both!😃

PS: Can I know your name please!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

Excellent,fantastic,marvelous and whatnot!

All words fall short while appreciating your story...
The last chapter was very emotional one...
Hats off to you once again.


Thanks a lot Mam for giving your review!
I kept you waiting for really long.
Sorry for that.😭
Thanks for writing all that reminders to me.
But I really appreciate that you kept patience till the last date. I would be there in your shoes, my head would have exploded out in frustration.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Haye abhi kya likha hai I mean this is my fav TS I was eagerly waiting from last 2 and half month around for you next update and today you made my day dear🤗

You know you are one of the best writers here 😃

You have started with one promise which sumo made to part away from him once nanu will leave and ended with the another promise to live together till eternity this is the first thing have read today and it made me cry and laugh at same time thank you so much a ton for such a amazing lovely update😊👏

Their convo was bliss❤️
Shravan was a ⭐️

Swachh bharat abhiyan man you really used it in the perfectly🤣

And the 7 promises they did to each other was emotional and full with sheer love and respect to each other👍🏼

I can't even stop me to read it twice before giving comment dear 👏

Ye to expectation ke super se bhi upar wala update tha I mean nailed it not a single stone you left to touch my heart

Thanks a lot for pm dear

Love you ❤️
Priti


Thanks a lot for your kind words Priti (Di?)
Really glad that you liked it and actually read it twice.

Love to you too!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

It was good ending.. 😛

Sumo was drunk, she was watching Shravan since 6 months drinking.
Shravan's confession was most awaited one..
swach Bharat abhiyan.. 😆
Their 7 vowes of wedding its special in their own way..
Totally worth waiting TS.. 👏

Thanks for PM

Vinu


Thanks a ton Vinu Di for commenting here!
@Bold: This line actually made my day. 😃 Thanks again!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow4
beautiful ending
absolutely loved it
thank you for writing it


Welcome and thanks a lot for commenting!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

OMG this is really wonderful 👏...
Shravan found sumo's letter.. . Shravan finally know tha his father cheated on him by blackmailing sumo...
Drunken sumo is really cute...
Finally sumo spoke her heart out..
Shravan very smartly asked the final Question...
The Seven vows from both very emotional and beautifully written by you 👏...
So after all the difficulty, Shravan and sumo are together Forever...

Love
Smita


Thanks a bunch Smita Di for commenting.
Your comment meant a lot to mee😳
Love to you too!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

Finally you updated the chapter 😉..
Shravan finally knows that sumo loves him..
Sumo never wanted Shravan to hate his father, she just wants him to know the truth of his Mother to start believing womens again...
Sumo drunk 😃 😉 So much fun...
Shravan and sumo's nok jhok is so much fun..
Their emotional scenes are wonderful...
Shravan being a smart and intelligent Lawyer asked his final Question which has been pending very cleverly..
Vows are beautifully written..
Finally they married the way they wanted. .

Love
Shrujani


Thanks a lot Shrujani Di for your kind words!
Really glad that you liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Wow .. finally the much awaited update ..

Amazing it was !! Their much awaited talk in their style ..
got to see bewadi Sumo too .. 😉
But was fun to see them like old times ..
Swach Bharat Abhiyan was nice ..

auron k karan bahut time waste kar diya , bhad me jaye duniya .. Shadi Shraman ki hai and it happened in their style .. In front of the auspicious fire ,they took the vows & gave their promises to each other .. That's all matters .. coz world has done enough damage to them & only Them together r there for each other so that's what matters ..

P.S.- I wish if u could try to write an epilogue too ..


Thanks a lot (Di?) for your comment!
And I think it's better to end it here. And everyone is aware of my speed of updating. Also my exams are nearing so I have no chance of writing before 31st!
So, no epilogue!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww so cute sweet lovely beautiful dear so SHRAMAN like jo bane hai EK DUJE KE VAASTE!


Thank you...please Epilogue!


Love,
Spandana


Thanks a lot Di for commenting!
Really honored!😃
And as I have said before it's better to end it here. Also my exams are nearing so I have no chance of writing before 31st!
So, NO EPILOGUE!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Wow its amazing dear..hehehe drunken sumo great idea..


Thanks a lot!

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