NiVi JR IInd Term Story:
Khuda Jaane... Ke Bann Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda!!
Part II:
Satya is well aware about his identity as "Karanvir
Siddharth Khurana" son of Siddharth-Roshni Khurana, a multi-millionaire by
status.
For my story's sake, I wouldn't get him "married" to Maahi
but he is in a relationship which is only built with an aim to have more
accessibility to Payal so that he can seek revenge for his parent's death plus
be powerful despite the fact he is rich. The second chapter starts where he has
been successful in taking revenge from Payal succumbing her to accept her
rivalry & even ideating the whole accident. A full action revenge drama has
occurred where Payal dies but it injures Maahi (as she could never believe her
"mumma" can be ever guilty of taking someone's life!!)
Karan / Satya rushes Maahi to hospital in quest to save her
life but the doctors claim that her injuries are too deep and she won't be able
to survive... she has sometime in hand thus it is best to talk and calm her.
Ishita was with Karan to be his support system and he felt extremely remorse to
put Maahi's life in danger despite telling her to stay away from Payal "Maine
usse kaha tha... mujhe aur achchi tarah samjhana chahiye tha, yeh kya ho gaya
mujhse!" said a sorrowing Karan / Satya.
Ishita - Please Karan... tumne apni taraf se sab kuch kiya jisse
usski jaan bach sake!! Yeh sab ek accident tha... tumne kuch galt nahi kiya!!
Karan / Satya - Toh phir woh... (signaling towards ICU room)
woh jaa rahi hai hume chodkar!! (He has moistened guilt filled eyes)
Ishita tries to understand him but fails to do so from
psychologic standpoint. She saw guilt but not pain in his eyes thus finally
asked - Tum usse pyaar karte ho??
Karan / Satya looks at her and then turns back to face ICU
gate - Pyaar?? Woh achchi hai, sachchi hai, pyaari hai (he thinks & says)
Shayad Haan... karta hun, uski fikar, uski parwah hai...
(NEXT SCENE)
Maahi (wakes up and smiles seeing Satya / Karan sitting next
to him) - Nahi!!
Satya / Karan and Ishita looks down to see Maahi opening her
eyes. Satya / Karan was puzzled - huh?
Maahi (takes slight
breath) - Tumhari aankhon mein ek sawal tha... uska jawab de rahi hun. Yeh pyaar
nahi hai!! (saying smilingly) Aur yeh tum bhi jaante ho Satya. (Takes a breath)
sorry... tumhara naam, Karan hai na??
Karan & Ishita continued to be puzzled when she
continued.
Maahi - Karan... Pyaar... pyaar woh tha tumhare parents ne jiya
tha!! Pyaar woh tha, jismein fanna hone ke baad bhi, woh hamesha ek saath
rahein! Pyaar dard mein sukoon deta hai kyunki koi hota hai, uss dard pe marham
lagane wala. (She smiles) Hum dono toh pehli mulakat se hi ladte aayein hain,
ek durse ko ek aankh nahi bhate the... par woh shuruat thi... shururat hamari dosti
ki. Maine usse kuch aur samjha kyunki hamaesha ek sahare, ek pyaar ki talash
rahi jo tumpe aa khatam ho gayi! You've always looked after me Karan but yeh
pyaar nahi... (he continued listening to her) kyunki pyaar, love is too beautiful
to feel Karan!! Ek sahara, ek fikarr, yeh parwah woh mohabbat nahi jo tumhare
parents ne jee hai!!
(She takes a breath as pain started) Par koi hogi!! Koi aisi
jo tumhare dil ko chu jayegi, jo tumhari saason mein, tumhari dhadkain bann
jayee gi. Tumhare har ehsaas mein tum usse mehsoos karoge aur dekhte dekhte,
woh tumhara zameer, tumhari chahhat, tumhara bhagwaan bann jayegi Karan... kyunki
mohabbat isse kehte hain! (She smiles) main tumhari dost banni par woh ishq
nahi jo sab se badkar ho!!
Karan / Satya was puzzled to core - Tum aisa kyun keh rahi
ho??
Maahi smiles - Kyunki pyaar nafrat se bada hota hai Karan!!
Aur hum tumhari nafrat ke saamne kuch nahi... Payal mu... (she halts, refraining
from calling Payal as "mumma") tumhari unnke saath jo nafrat jo ranjish thi,
woh hamara pyaar nahi hara paya... iska matlab toh yehi hua na, ki hamare beech
pyaar kabhi tha hi nahi!! Mujhse galti huyi hai Karan...unpe bharosa karne ki galti,
tumpe vishwas na karne ki galti, tumhara saath na dene ki galti, aur iski sazza
mujhe milni thi
Karan / Satya - I never meant to hurt you Maahi!! (he cries)
Maahi - Jaanti hun (smiles) tum kisi ko bhi hurt nahi kar
sakte Karan!! (Life Support machine shows rise in BP and pain starts to hit
her) Go... (Karan was confused) Jaaooo Karan, tumhe 20 saal ka fasla tey karna
hai. Uss mohabbat ko dhundhna hai jo tumhara sab kuch bann jaye!! (Smiles and
looks up at floor ceiling) Kitnaa khouff hota hai shaam kay andheroon mein, Poonch
un parindoo say jin kay gharr nahi hotay. (Looks back at Karan) Ab waqt hai tum
apne ghar jaaoo, apni zindagi mein mukam haasil karo, apni roshni, apni umeed
ki kiran ko mil sako!!
She gives a last smile and lives her last breath as the life
support monitor shows straight line. Karan / Satya was too emotional to say
anything else despite his tears, his remorse took the center stage.
Ishita took him away from there saying - Bass Karan... control
yourself.
Karan - I never wanted this Ishi!!
Ishita - Jaanti hun... par Maahi ne jo kuch kaha, sach tha
Karan!!
Karan looks up at her with perplexed eyes - Matlab?
Ishita - Phir kabhi... filhaal ghar chalo. Ab waqt hai ek naye
adhyae ka, ek naye padhav ka!
Ishita brings Karan to Khurana mansion and makes him go rest
/ sleep for a while but he is unable to. He keeps looking at Siddharth Roshni
pictures and Ishita thinks that probably this can help him calm down. She takes
him to his room and hand over a picture frame of Siddharth Roshni asking him to
keep it with himself and rest for a while.
Karan keeps gazing over it and
finally sleeps in.
Outside, Ishita proposes to move Karan to London where he
can start afresh and both Kritika, Bunty supports her idea. Raj was fighting a
different battle but he too agreed considering this may help Simran also
recover.
"Nanu" Ishita says, "it's time we all live the second
innings god has given us!" She looks at Gangu and says "aap bhi aa sakte hain
agar aap chahein... Karan ko achcha lagega par hum sabko lagta hai, London shift
hona hi Karan ke liye behtaar hoga... ussne bahut kuch dekha hai!!"
Gangu acknowledges and says she will join after some time...
as she cannot face Simran right now. She agreed that this decision of
relocation is right for Karan and will benefit him to learn things anew!
Within two weeks all arrangement was done and Karan was
mentally ready to relocate to London. In these two weeks Ishita noticed that
Karan didn't let go Siddharth Roshni pictures and felt this was more than a
solace for him. The psychologist in her told her there was something else which
was disturbing her brother and she wanted to help.
After Two Weeks, Raj, Karan and Ishita were at Mumbai
Airport ready to depart for London for good. Raj had a little cough attack when
Karan got worried and helped him while Ishita got water. Raj signaled Karan
saying "I'm fine... mujhe kisiki zarrurat nahi!" and he leaves for immigration
and check in counter. Karan & Ishita both were stranded and Karan felt he
is not wanted by Raj.
Karan - Shayad tumhare Nanu mujhe pasand nahi karte...
Ishita turns around to see him and answer wittingly - Mere Nanu
tumhare Dadajee bhi hain Karan!! And think once from his side... 20 saalon mein
unhone sab kuch kho diya aur ab jab milla hai, he feels that he may lose it
again!! Nanu aise cold hearted nahi hote the Karan... he used to love everyone so
much but Sid Uncle aur Roshni Mami ke death ke baad, unke liye sab khatam ho
gaya. Unhe lagta hai unke hote huye woh apne bachchon ko nahi bacha paaye! And
now that he has got you... unhe darr lagta hai ki tum unke saath rahoge ya nahi...
20 saalon ka fasla aasani se tey nahi hoga Karan... give him some time please!!
Karan listens to her peacefully and acknowledges - Tum itni
choti umar mein itni badi baatein kaise kar leti ho!??
Ishita smiles and moves forward with him for Immigration - Psychology
padd rahi hun, intelligent sound toh karungi!! Haha
Karan smiles and they both cross immigration and clear check
in to board the flight. Just when leaving for plane Karan stands still and
looks back... Here Ishita asks "Kya Hua??"
Karan takes a deep breath and says - Darr lag raha hai... (he
looks at her) main kahan hun, kahan jaa raha hun aur kisse peeche chod raha
hun?? Kuch samjh nahi aaraha?! EK bechaini si hai. Kuch samjh nahi aaraha...
Ishita smiles and says - Don't worry... tumhari yeh behan hamesha
tumhare saath rahegi Karan!! Itni mushkil se mujhe mera bhai milla hai, Nanu ko
ek umeed milli hai, hum sab tumhare saath hain, hamesha ke liye... bas aage
badhte chalo, sarhad ke paar ek duniya hai, ek ghar, ek parivar tumhara
intezaar kar raha hai!!
Karan acknowledges and takes step forward.
Background: Bulleya (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXh35CtnSyU)
Meri rooh ka parinda phadphadaaye,
Lekin sukoon ka jazeera mil na paaye
Ve ki karan ve ki karan
Ik baar ko tajalli toh dikha de,
Jhoothi sahi magar tasalli toh dila de
Ve ki karan ve ki karan
Ranjhan de yaar bulleya, Sun le
pukaar bulleya
Tu hi toh yaar bulleya, Murshid mera
(murshid mera)
Tera mukaam kamle, Sarhad ke paar
bulleya
Parvardigar bulleya, Hafiz tera
(murshid mera)
He sits in the plane (first class) and looks out of the
window for that positive hope. He takes out Siddharth Roshni picture and
continues caressing it till he sleeps.
Plane finally lands at Heathrow Airport and his new journey
starts... as walking down for immigration, further down aisle of Airport to his
car, he got lost in his own thoughts.
Main kabul se mitti titli ki tarah
muhajir hoon, Ek pal ko thehrun, pal mein udd jaun
Ve main ta hoon pagdandi, Labhdi ae
jo raah jannat di, Tu mude jahaan main saath mud jaun
Tere kaarwa mein shaamil hona chahun,
Kamiyan tarash ke main kaabil hona chahun
Ve ki karan ve ki karan
He sits in the car with Raj, Ishita and looks out of the
window at different perspectives
Ranjhan de yaar bulleya, Sun le
pukaar bulleya
Tu hi toh yaar bulleya, Murshid mera
(murshid mera)
Tera mukaam kamle, Sarhad ke paar
bulleya
Parvardigar bulleya, Hafiz tera
(murshid mera)
Khurana House,
London, 7:40pm GMT
Finally, they came home to be welcomed by Bunty... "Simmi
kahan hai?" asked Raj
Bunty - Daddy woh Kritika Mummyjee ko leke Edinburgh leke
gayi hai 2 hafte ke liye. Usse wahan kaam tha woh Westin Hotel wala project
plus Mummyjee ke liye therapy center mein admit kiya hai.
Ishita - Yeh lo... Nani ki medicine khud chalke yahan aayi hai
aur woh Scotland mein hain!
Bunty smiles & replies - 1hafte mein aajayeinge... don't
worry. Aap sab fresh ho jayee, main dinner lagwata hun.
Karan entered this large mansion only to be welcomed by a
real beautiful Siddharth Roshni portrait in the center hall which made him
smile immediately.
He kept gazing at it when interrupted by Ishita.
Ishita - Chalo Karan, I'll show you your room... pata hai
Mumbai se bethe bethe maine tumhara room details and sab kuch coordinate karwaya
hai!! (She takes him to pool side bedroom) Waise yeh... Sid Uncle ka room tha... I renovated
it to be yours... Aaoo
Karan steps in and felt a vacuum to emote himself. He felt
miserable not knowing how to react, what to say and all.
"Kaisa laga room??" asked Ishita
Karan looked around and missed something - Ahhh... achcha hai
par... (he wasn't able to locate them)
"Par??" enquired Ishita who understood what he wanted "Par
yahan Sid Uncle, Roshni Mami ki tasveer nahi hai na??"
Karan looked at her.
Ishita smiled and comprehended this much that he was in awe
of them both. Or probably just "her"
"Main ek achchi se picture choose karke yahan frame karwa
dungi, don't worry..." assured Ishita and soon the luggage came. "Chalo, you get
freshen up and come down for dinner... hmmm!" She leaves him with emptiness.
Everyone was quiet at the dinner when Karan joined a little
late.
"Dinner waqt pe kiya jaaye toh hi achcha hai!" taunted Raj.
Karan was tensed and got little upset - I'm sorry Sir...
"Daddu!!" bridges in Ishita... "yeh tumhare Daddu hai Karan..."
smiles and Karan looks at Raj for some kind of reaction but there was blank.
Raj - Bunty, Premier Housing ka project kahan tak pahuncha...
it is one of the best projects by Khurana Group... main nahi chahta koi delay ho!
Dinner ke baad just show me the files.
Bunty - Jee Papa... waise everything is going good and Grand
Heritage Hotel ka kaam bhi shuru ho gaya hai... let's talk.
Karan was lost in all this conversation and felt out of
place. "Guys please..." intervened Ishita, "Dinner toh kar lijiye!!"
Raj - A lavish dinner isn't free Ishita... mehnat karni padti
hai roti kapde ke liye. Aur mere paas waqt nahi hai befazool khayalo mein rehne
ke liye
Karan felt that it was a taunt towards him and stood up -
Sorry but mujhe bhuuk nahi hai... (he started walking when Ishita calls - "Karan!"
and Raj too taunted him)
Raj - Khane ke table se uththe waqt excuse me' bola jaata
hai... (he looks up at him) kuch manners hi seekh lete! (And he continues eating
food)
"NANU!!" said an upset Ishita
Karan had moist eyes - Sorry!! (And he walks away)
"Karan ruko... please kuch toh kha lo!" says concerned Ishita
"Sach mein bhook nahi Ishi!" answered a back facing Karan
and he walks back to his room.
Ishita - This is just not done Nanu!! 20 saal 2 hafto mein
toh cover nahi kar payega woh!! Why are you so rude to him?? After all woh
aapka pota hai Nanu!! Usse dekh ke Sid Mamu ki yaad nahi aati aapko!
Raj halts eating - Siddharth... (his eyes get teary at his
name) yehi problem hai Ishi... ki usse dekh kar har pal mujhe mere Siddharth ki
yaad aati hai par afsoos... He is no-where and nothing like my son!! Dard hota
yeh dekh ke Ishi... ki mera khoon kya se kya bann gaya hai!! Ke maine pote ko ek
achchi zindagi nahi de paya!! (He cries out and gets up to leave)
"Nanu..." calls Ishita, "Life ne ek dusra mauka diya hai aapko
Nanu... please ab, ab toh samjhiye... aap abhi bhi sab theek kar sakte hain, Karan
ko Siddharth Mamu jaisa bannake!"
Raj feels her words and looks up. Without saying much, he
blinks and breaths out - Usse khana khila dena... ussne flight mein bhi kuch nahi
khaya tha! (and he leaves)
Next Scene
Karan is sitting near window looking at the pool side lost
in deep thoughts and just at a blink he sees a spoon of dal-chawal in front of
him. He looks up at Ishita held a plate of food for him. Before he could say
that he isn't feeling hungry, Ishita took the spoon and feed him.
"Ishi seriously... mann nahi hai!" said Karan while chewing
Ishita - Good... kyunki khana mann ko nahi pait ko bharta
hai!! (and she laughs making the second serving ready.
Karan - Tum nahi manogi!!
Ishita looks up at him - Kaha tha Karan... tumhari yeh behan
tumhare saath hamesha rahegi!! Har halat mein... (she had teary eyes) hum sabne
bahut kuch khoya hai... aur sirf tum woh khushiyan lotta sakte ho!!
Karan - Kaise (asked helplessly) tumne dekha nahi Daddu
kaise mujhse... main unke liye theek nahi!! I'm not fit to be part of this
family!!
Ishita - Karan... blood relations hum khud nahi chunte!! Aur tumhe
samjhna hoga, Nanu ka behavior, unki harkatein
Karan - Maine sunna unhe... main unhe unke bete ki yaad dilata
hun par unke jaisa nahi hun!!
Ishita - Toh kisne roka hai?? Unke jaisa banker dikhao... apni
zindagi mein ek lakshya banao, usse haasil karo... I promise main har pal tumhare
saath hun bas koshish karo Karan!!
Karan listens to her thoughtfully and acknowledges nodding
his head - I promise Ishi... main apne pariwar mein apni jaga paakar rahunga!! Ab
yeh rishtey main pure dil se nibhayunga... main vaada karta hun.
Ishita smiles and feeds him food - Dekhna Karan... tumhari har
koshish mein tumhe tumari umeed ki kiran puri hote huye dikhegi...
Edited by WanderingNomad - 7 years ago
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