"you must not worry about the trials and tribulations he faces. That is God's way of testing him and his will power but eventually it will turn him around and make him a better individual. And she will be the driving force for him, something that he has always needed in his life."
His hands gripped the edge of the dresser tightly as a memory flashed in front of his eyes."Bhaiyaa, when we grow up and if I need you beside me or your help sometime then, will you still come to my rescue like you just did? You wont ever let me down, will you?," he asked curiously. Akash looked into his eyes sincerely and managed to say,"always Chote, ALWAYS," while a wide smile made its way on Arnav's chubby face as his eyes shone with love for his elder cousin brother.
Khushi Jain now Singh, a well educated, well cultured , sensible lass, a perfect daughter to her parents, seldom had to face disgrace in the eyes of her loved ones and most importantly in her own eyes. However today she felt like a wrongdoer, a misgiver.
She stepped inside the mammoth hall which was well decorated for the ceremony. Every bit of the hall matched up to the class and the reputation that the family had earned for itself over the years. However, nothing matched the happiness that exuded from her today and she for one could not wait to welcome' the new bride in their society, she snarled to herself, 'let the show begin...'
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Hello my lovely readers π€ I thank each one of you for the love you have showered to my story and I am touched, its heartwarming to see the love and the support from each one of you. π€ THANK YOU. Here is thread 3 and a teaser for chapter 13, its picked from different parts of the chapter. I am still penning the update, its very long and I have a lot of dynamics to project and present in this and the following updates. And I hope you guys like the story that I have here. Coming to a few points quickly-
1. There was a divide in opinion over the last chapter. I had great time reading all the comments and value esc one of them. I am glad that some of you have understood Khushi/ Arnav like the back of your hand. However the intention of the chapter was NOT to show and present the fight. The chapter encompassed the 'swinging dynamics' in the couple's life. For instance, Khushi's dilemma and her unhappiness over Arnav's lack of trust in her, Arnav and Khushi BOTH kept something away from the other, Arnav shedding all inhibitions and taking a step towards Khushi, the difference in the old and new couple's way of thinking, the forces against each other from the set of BOTH parents, and much more. I dont want to share much, but 'sigh' Meera (Meera060), Haleema (Haleemamk), Niha(Fiestysoul), littbemisstar, and a few others were the only ones who picked up on some of the undercurrents of the chapter. Infact Meera was the first one to pick that Arnav had visited the jain's ππΌ. Anyway the story will now dwell deeper into the family ties and project the pasts of Arnav and Khushi, gradually and bit by bit.
2. Some of the readers have raised concern that their comments arent visible on the blog. PLEASE understand that when there is traffic, your comments coincide with the comments of the other readers. So please, please, when you post your comment, refresh the page and see if the comment is visible or not. If not, then try in 30 seconds. If your still stuck reach out to me, THOUGH if the blog shows SO many comments, there isn't any jarring issue there. And readers who havent posted their comments please do it ASAP.
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See you guys on Thursday with the new leaf from Mr & Mrs.Singh's life. π
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