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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful story dear...thanks for the PM
Posted: 5 years ago
This shot reminds me of those high school romances which doesbt end successfully .People move on yet a sweet pain remain in you of that lost love .
You should write another part so we can know where it ends.I will prefer happy ending .
Posted: 5 years ago

Beautifully written. 

Those magical memories vivid even after a decade of dust, drifting to them like a familiar melody as they stood in their each others arms remembering.  The melancholy and the unforgettable feelings casting a charm of its own. 

This one shot was amazing, evoking sadness word by word until we are all left aching for those lovers. 

Something old, something new and now we are left with something to hope. 


Posted: 5 years ago
Incredibly magnificent!! So much of time lost but the passion for each other is still intense. Loved itBig smile
Posted: 5 years ago
Wow. It is so beautifully sad. It's really painful for both A & K. The dance made them find a tiny lil bit of solace and yet the pain deepened and they swayed to the sound of music, reminiscing the memories and each other .
It is written so perfectly. The emotions were spot on!
I wish they never have to face so much heartbreak...
I loved the song selection <3
Thanks for the PM :)
- Salikaa :D
Posted: 5 years ago
Something old, something new and something so poignantly written Rae.

They were wrapped in an atmosphere of the familiar, of hurt and memories, of love and lost. of what was and what is. The years never daunting for his yearning to see her, and not an illusion. Her sense of his presence just as sharp as it was. Like a million years would never be enough to wash away what lives a little in them and in the other.

Beautiful Rae, absolutely beautiful. The choice of songs too.
Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful piece of writing..

Posted: 5 years ago
nahiii! the story that started 10 years ago and fell offf track at some stage cannot end without a happy ending, even if it means another 10 years of sadness and pain and another OS to bring it to the ending that any story of Arnav and Khushi must always have.
Beautifully wirtten OS but sorry AT dil maange only a happy ending.

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