IPKKND FF: KHUSHI by JALEBI JANE Thread 1: EPISODE 001-052 - Page 13

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

archnahardik123 said:

Fabulous episode. 

In the show too Arnav realise that Khushi loves him and he had made mistake in reading the situation but to stretch things they make them behave life this when they wake up. He totally ignore what he felt of what Khushi confess.

I liked that your Arnav is more intelligent and see things more clearly.

Thanks for update.

Thank you for your comment, Archna.

A year after completing -khushi- I began writing a serial titled -boondi-, which begins in a similar fashion to -khushi-. One of the reasons I started -boondi- is because I believe in iteration as a developmental tool. But another reason is that in -khushi- I provide no compelling evidence for why Arnav should change his mind about her so suddenly. It felt like a deep flaw in -khushi- and it continues to disturb me. In my defence :-)  I wrote those first few episodes after the IPKKND Holi episode. And if you recall, here on India Forums many of us were so fed-up of the "Hate Marriage" track. I was one of those who just wanted it to end. Bas karo! :-) It was from that space that I began writing -khushi- and perhaps that is why it is such a beginning. As a writer, hyper-critical of my own work, I feel the weakest episodes of -khushi- come at the beginning. I think it improves thereafter. And perhaps I also improved as a writer over time. But I am grateful to the India Forums Sisterhood who kept reading and encouraging me even though I don't think I was giving them very good material. :-) Ah, those sweet-sweet women. 

Whew. I'm glad I got the opportunity to explain how I feel about all this.

 
KHUSHI by Maya (EPISODE 004)