OS:Loving You Had Been Red. - Page 3

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Shivani!!!!!!

6th of July...that was when you mentioned that you are working on a SvetKara OS (see I remembered😆). And today is 23rd July. A long wait of two weeks and finally this thirsty traveler gets that first drop of water that is worth more than anything!

*sigh*

See you turned me philosophical😆😆

And look when I am replying.😆 Well had written a few other versions too but it didn't fit in well so yeah this was 'the one'.

And finally SvetKara

I love their potential to be a dark story...and the chemistry, man' it was sizzling🥳

And only you can bring something like this to life, you Magician of Words!

Don't flatter me so much. Main phool ke phat jaungi!

The words painted such an intense and dark picture that I still feel a bit woozy after reading it. 

The juxtaposition of Om's sculpting scenes with the flashbacks were pure genius. They clicked in a tandem that enhanced the impact of the story.

The way Om described Svetlana initially...there was so much warmth and blind belief and devotion in it that it that it gave of a sinister touch to the whole form.

I still stand by the fact that there was something more than what meets the eye on the fronts of Svetlana and Om. Om we already know had fallen into the horrific stance of substanceabuse so Svetlana felt like  a perfect trigger. Kindling the needed warmth and then pushing him over the brink.

And Svetlana...she is definitely a  Medusa! She played the puppeteer to take advantage of his vulnerability and exploited him. I can't even bear to imagine how hurt Om might have felt when he had realized that he was on the only Oberoi she had bedded.

I shiver at the feeling of disgust, shame and self-loathing that might have gripped him the...no wonder he turned to the easy way for escape.

Svetlana is not someone who'd settle for anything less than the crown. Om is but a prince how long would she toy away with him? She dumped him or rather Om had to leave her and the self loathing slowly must have turned intense and there he rolled over the darker edge like that.

Aand finally the man who hates lies, has kept this dark part of his life a secret from his own brothers. It was prophetic and melancholic and desperately painful that Svetlana still impacts him.

I have crossed fingers in hopes that she does.

And the last lines...love! It comes in different states and types. How was Om to know that his love will be his destruction?

Love, for all is a beauty to be worshiped. For him love is that poisonous creeping darkness that he binds and cuffs so as to hide it and not release that toxicity on his family.

Love is beautiful, yes, but it also massively consuming. It eats away at your identity to some extend. If you're lucky you'll survive with pastel hues if not then red it is of pain. In Om's case it seems like the most apt color.

I loved it! Seriously thank you for penning this.

Awwie! I thank you too for reading this out!😳

Niki

PS: The moment you told me you were posting I sat glued to the forum page refreshing it 20+ times. Efforts paid up...I am first

And see the efforts paid really well!

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Shivu you wrote a OS on svetkara chal baag yaha se🤣

That was brilliant girl 👏

Om's pain can be felt. The woman he loved sorry worshipped is nothing but turned into something else.
His emotions are portrayed artistically.

I envy you girl. I simply loved it

And thanks for the dedication am flattered now ❤️ 😳