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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its a masterpiece.superb 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

What shivu informed you that she's going to post OS


Please don't get agitated. She had PMed me and I kind of replied back.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

What shivu informed you that she's going to post OS



Because I kept on prodding her and poking her, irritating her to bits; till she finally told me she was posting to shut me up.
*grins sheepishly*
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woooww!! This was so goood! 👏
Here I thought this was about Ishana and Om in the beginning.
And Suprise! Here comes Svetlana in the end. 
Om and his emotions, it was preserved and deciphered so well.
What a lovely piece of work this is! 👍🏼
Waiting for more!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Aarh! Beautifully written. How the hell do you do that ?
The way Om talks to Swetlana in the show makes you think that they had a past indeed. But I wish no one has to endure this. They would never show it in the show, but can't deny that such things do happen. The world is a cruel place. I put myself in Om's place for a second and  felt like taking my life. The amount of disgust and self-loathing I would feel for myself. And every time I will glance at the mirror, I will see the man who slept with the same woman whom his father slept with. God I cannot imagine the pain.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'M SPEECHLESS SO I'LL JUST BOW DOWN TO YOU👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First, OMG!!! Svetkara? Now I've read it all. 😆

I'm not a svetkara fan...actually I think it's weird (no offense). I first thought this OS was Anshi and scrolled down to catch Svetlana's name. Then I read the whole thing imagining it was Tej only to end up figuring out it was Om.

Anyways, wonderfully written. I hope there's more to it and this heads towards Ishkara. loved the way you describe the feelings and everything else. It's brilliant. The medusa reference, the goddess reference. It shows such contrast. The description of Om carving fit in well amongst the feelings that are described. 👏

Do PM me next time to write anything.

Lekha
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Just a questio. Your OS name...were you inspired by the song "Loving you is red" ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my God did you actually write an OS on SvetKara 🤪
*Faints*🤢
Don't give such a Shock yaar 
You wrote well but I could Imagine Ishana ignoring That dad's part not Svetlana 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it. Absolutely loved it. It was wonderful. Please do write more.