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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

fantastic chapters😃

enjoyed the scene between duryodhan and yudhisthir.⭐️
the scene between the uncle and their nephew was just awesome😃
Kaju is just amazing it is my favourite bond❤️
the scene of all the brothers bonding was just cute
the scenes between the couples are nice😊
loved the way how bheem teased dushana❤️
I just loved the conversation between karna and draupadi.👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow it was fantastic!👏
I am reading this chapter again and again.
KaJu my all time favourite is so cute😊
Bond between the couples was nice❤️
Arjun is again mischiveous 😆😉
Want more KaJu😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Need more bromance.. Love kaju and Kayu! Who will be king..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 13
An hour later the brothers were back around Karn. Karn noticed that Arjun's eyes were redder and watery. He was sitting a little away from him now as Nakul and Sahadev were sitting on his either side. They were having a jolly convo when Arjun sneezed violently 4-5 times in a bout. Karn looked really concerned. "Arjun, beta thhik toh ho na" Karn asked "tum thhori der aur so kyun nahi jaatey" "Nahi bhratshree" Arjun said "mujhe neend ke bina swasth rehne ka abhyas hai, mai thhik hi rahunga" "Haan" Bheem said "Neend ke bina toh thhik hai, par bhojan ke bina koi kaise rahe...Khane mein kya hai kisiko pata hai?" "Ab tumhare jaise sundar susheel bahu ki tarah har koi bhojan toh nahi banata na" Duryodhan said teasingly "Isiliye hume toh nahi pata" "Chalo" Bheem said "main toh phir bhi bhojan banata hun, tumne aaj tak koi chiz sahi se banayi hain?" "Hain na" Duryodhan replied "Ek sachcha mitra banaya hai" he said hugging larn from behind "Arey tumhare toh mitra hain" Bheem said "Mere toh jyeshth hain" "Achha" Duryodhan said now walking to him "tum hoge unke bhrata, par wo hmesha mere saath the, main adhink prem karta hun unse" "Jao jao" Bheem said. "Kyun jaun?" Duryodhan replied "Aur kaha jaun?" Bheem stood up "Mai kah raha hun na, chalo niklo" Bheem said. "Nahi niklu toh?" Duryodhan said "Yeh mere bhi bhrata ka kaksh hain." The other brothers who were enjoying the brotherly fight till now were looking a bit concerned. "Achha" Bheem said "Jisne swayam apne bhaiyon ki hatya ki yojna karta raha woh aur prem ki baat karta hai" Duryodhan was suddenly taken aback. He looked down, his eyes saddened. Yudhishthir looked angrily at Bheem. Bheem mentally kicked himself for saying this. "Main aise nahi kahna chahta thha Duryodhan" he said placing hand on Duryodhan's shoulder "meri mansa tumko thhes pahunchana nahi thha" "Nahi bhheem tumne satya hi kaha" Duryodhan said in a broken voice "Mujhe rishton ke maine kaha pata hai" "Nahi duryodhan, tum pehle baithho" He said leading Duryodhan to the bed "Tum aisa kyun soch rahe ho, ab toh sab thhik hain na. Main toh aise hi kuchh bhi bol deta hun. Main tumhe dukh nahi pahunchana chahta thha" Duryodhan looked up a little, his eyes playful and then he started laughing, and so did everyone "Mukh dekho apna" he said to Bheem and rolled off in laughter. "Tumne mere saath chhal kiya" Bheem said in mock anger and punched Duryodhan's arm. "Ouch" Duryodhan squealed still laughing. Bheem pulled him of the bed. Duryodhan tried to run but bheem pushed him and sat on him. "Arey, oye haathi uth," Duryodhan groaned under his weight "Kaise manushya hai, danav bhi tumse halke hote hain. Galati hogayi, kshama karde par uthh ja. Main kaan pakarta hun dekh kshama karde" he said holding his ears. "Thik hai thhik hai" he got up. As soon as he did so Duryodhan stood up and pushed him back. They started wrestling playfully and both rolled on the floor. All the brothers including those two laughed. Their laughter as boisterious as their sons, taking them back in time. Suddenly Arjun started caughing again, quite violently. Yudhishthir touched his forehead and gasped "Tumhe toh kaafi bukhar hai Arjun" he said. "Arjun tum leto" Karn ordered "Chalo chup chap meri god main sar rakh kar so jaao thhori der. " "Arey bhratashree" Arjun said "Main thhik hun" "Kaha thhik ho" Karn asked "Aushadhi li tumne?" Arjun shaked his head in no. "Aur tum log bhi," Karn said to others "Mera khayal rakhne ke liye, yeh bhi nahi dhyan do ge tumhara bhai bimar par gaya, tum log toh aushadhi de sakte thhe na" "Bhratashree" Sahadev said "Aushadhi khane ke liye, pet mein bhojan hone chahiye. Bhrata Arjun ne apke chetna hin hone ke baad kuchh nahi khaya" "Arjun" Karn said touching Arjun's face "Yeh sab kya hai?" Arjun didn't speak. He just moved closer to Karn. Karn put his hand on Arjun's head and waved it through his hair. "Mata aap sabko bula rahi hai" Vrishasena suddenly said walking in "Bhojan tayyar hai" "Bhojan" bheem said rushing out, while the other brothers followed slowly laughing at Bheems antics...

Guys this is for now...I might update again today...depending on if you comment fast...pls read and review
LOVE YOU GUYS..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow..amazing update ..loved the brotherly figth between duryodhana and bheem and also loved the love between he brothers , their bonding is increasing day by day..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi its fantastic. I would love to c Kunti And karn getting along
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice chapter😊
loved the conversation between karna and arjuna❤️
enjoyed the brotherly fighting between bheem and duryodhan
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 14
They brothers sat down to eat in almost a circle. The food was already served, Shubhadra was there to see if they needed anything else. Droupadi and Vrishali had taken the food to Radha and Kunti. It was actually a bit deliberate, Droupadi didn't want to be present there for obvious reasons. The brothers prayed and started eating, suddenly Karn noticed that Arjun was just playing with his food, he hadn't even taken a morsel. Karn signaled Yudhishthir with his eyes, Yushishthir nodded. "Duryodhan" Yudhishthir quite loudly "Tumhe smaran hai jis din humne Hastinapur mein pehli baar saath bhojan kiya, hume pitamah ne humse kuchh kaha thha" "Haan yaad hai" Duryodhan had also noticed Arjun. "Kya kaha thha Duryodhan?" Karn asked acting interested. "Mai batata hun" Dushyasan said just on que "Hume kaha thha ki bina haath more bhojan karo." "Kya apko iska uttar pata hai bhratashree?" Yudhishthir asked. "Hmm sochna padega" Karn acted like he was thinking hard. Then slowly and deliberately he made a small gulp of food, and then without any warning he put it in Arjun's mouth. Suddenly Arjun was taken aback. Arjun somehow swallowed the gulp. "Main kha lunga bhratashree" Arjun said. "Achha" Karn said "Tum kha kaha rahe thhe? Aur haath dikhao apne" Arjun hestantly raised his palm, there were numerous deep cuts all over his palm. "Inn hathon se khaoge?" Karn asked "Haath jalenge beta, mujhe pata hai tum sah sakte ho sab kuch, tum bohot bare yodha ho par abhi sahna awashyak nahi hai, main khila deta hun." Arjun nodded slowly. "Asal main tabiyat thhik nahi lag rahi isiliye nahi kha raha thha" he said. "Arjun yeh kya baat hui?" Duryodhan asked "Kuchh kha lo aushadhi bhi toh leni hai. Matlab ajab hai tum khana nahi chahte aur bheem toh kuchh bhi kha jayega." Arjun nodded. Karn slowly stroked his hair and gave him another gulp. "Main bich mein kaha se aya" bheem asked. "Arey khaane ki baat ho aur tum na aao aisa bhi ho sakta hai kya" Duryodhan teased "Pata hai bachpan mein na maine ek bar ise vish diya thha. Yeh toh aisa insan hai ki woh bhi hajam kar gaya...matlab vish ka koi mol hi nahi" all laughed "Tum mere pichhe kyun pade ho?" Bheem asked. "Ab dekho Karn aur Yudhishthir mere agraj hai, bechare Nakul sahadev toh bachche hain, Arjun bimar hai aur Dushyasan ke pichhe pad pad ke mein ub chuka hun toh baaki toh tum hi bache" Duryodhan said "Isiliye tumhare pichhe parta hun. "Achha" Yudhishthir said "Bohot hua ab khao sab." They all started eating again. Karn was feeding Arjun, he did not let Arjun touch the food. He kept on stroking Arjun's hair comfortingly and coaxing him to eat slowly, gulp by gulp. After Arjun finished, he then ate his own food while others waited.
The bed in Karn's room was moved and a long mat of hay was made instead so that all brothers could sleep together. Karn had gone to check on the children, when he came back he saw Arjune sitting with his back to the door. He did not have his angvastra on. He was praying his nightly prayers. Karn saw there were lash marks on his back. "Arjun" he called slowly, Arjun looked up. "Yeh tumhare pithh pe nishan kaise?" he asked. Arjun did not reply he just bowed his head. The other brothers also gathered round. "Batao Arjun yeh nishan kyun hain tumhari pithh par" Karn asked again placing his hand firmly on his shoulder. Arjun didn't reply. "Mujhe rakt dene ke liye inn ghau ki toh koi awasyakta nahi thhi, phir tumne apne aap ko haani kyun pahunchayi." he placed a hand on Arjun's cheek. "Uttar kyun nahi dete Arjun" Yushidhthir asked. "Maine dand diya thha swayam ko" Arjun said "maine jo bhul jo anyay kiya uska dand..." Karn slapped him before he could complete. "Kya samajh ke yeh sab kiya?" he asked angrily "Tumne koi apradh nahi kiya, tumne toh bas woh kiya joh tumhara dharm thha. Apne aap ko pira de kar kya socha mai prassanna ho jaunga. Bolo chup kyun ho." Arjun did not say anything, just a lone tear trickled down his eyes. "Mujhe jo pira tab ho rahi thhi apko uss tarah dekh ke main samjha nahi sakta aap sabko" he said his voice breaking "uss pira mein yeh zakhm toh aram dete hain." Karn slapped him again. "Pira ho rahi thhi isiliye apne aap ko aur pira pahunchali" Karn said "Yeh nahi soch baad mein mujhe kitni pira hoge tumhe dekh kar, Yudhishthir ko kaisa lagega kuchh nahi." Arjun was crying now, Karn saw that. Placing a hand on his shoulder. He pulled Arjun in a tight hug, and let him cry into his chest. "Shhh" he said "chup ho jao Arjun, chup ho jao" and rubbed losse circles on his back. Arjun's fever had increased he felt that. "Bas Arjun" Karn said "Chalo so jao. Mere nikat so, mai sar pe hath chalake sula dunga. Sab so jaate hain chalo." Karn was in the middle, on his one side was Arjun, after Arjun Nakul and Sahadev were sleeping, hugging Bheem. On the other side of Karn Duryodhan was there, who was sleeping between yudhishthir and Karn. On the other sode of Yudhishthir Dushyasan was there. They slept quite close to each other. "Kya soch rahe ho Duryodhan?" Yudhishthir asked seeing him lost in thoughts. "Kuchh nahi Bhratashree" he replied "Bas vichar kar raha thha ki Arjun ne apne aap ko is tarah dandit kiya, main toh satya hi papi hun toh mujhe kya dand milna chahiye." "Tumhe bhi maar khana hai?" Yudhishthir asked "So jaao chup chap" Karn kept on running his hand through Arjun's hair till he fell asleep. Arjun soon fell in a sound sleep after years and so did all. They slept peacefully in each others presence...

The new update as I had said...the next update will also be bromantic and also there will be prelims of the battle between Shakuni and the brothers...pls read and review...
Love you guys, bye...
Edited by livelyandlovely - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow...thanks for two updates ...loved it very much , i always loved duryodhan and bheem prt you have done a great job here .. thanks once again
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for update.
Nice update!👏 I love all the chapters between brothers.
Dury and Bheem has became friends😆
Karn caring for Arjun! KAJUKAJUKAJU👏👏😃
He loves his brother so much!😳❤️
All brothers sleeping together!🥱
Would like to see a convo between kunti-karn
Edited by ShreejataD. - 7 years ago