Arshi FF: Zindagi Ke Mausam: Part 25b UPDATED! - p.86

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angeldream14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Amazing

so khushi has a lot to her life than anyone know except few people close

i simply loved this story

khushi is strong but her strength is the pillar holding her

NK is the sweetest friend ever he shares a unique relationship with khushi

i hope ASR's virus doesn't catch up la

who is the mad man after khushi

n i dont like snake to looking at her

will Arnav realize it bef her damages her with his words n anger

can u pm me plz

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

3...
long update

khushi and lavanya become friends

now is shyam good or bad

akash is back

arnav saw sleeping khushi... making wrong move on

khushi and Nk friendship

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Arshi67

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Your story is interesting in the way you reveal details slowly, giving intriguing little glimpses into Khushi's past. You always get the sense of the pain buried in her, even while she's appearing to be happy go lucky. I'm looking forward to reading more :)

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Sarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Absolutely loved both the parts.
Khushi had finally accepted her Dadu and shared her life with him. The old man is humbled and proud of how well khushi has come out of that dark phase in her life. But it pains his heart to realise that he was not there to protect her.
Now that he has got khushi back he will fo everything I'm his power to protect her. Hope that he will find shyam soon and get rid of him for good
Khushi's first meeting with her body guard was indeed amazing. She is too innocent and sweet. Rey canot stop himself from being her friend.
NK is not going to like the decisions which khushi has taken. Does he know about her Dadu
Waiting to read more
Continue soon

Thank you so much Asha. Yes, she finally has accepted her grandfather, although the acceptance process might take a while. It'll take a lot of work, love, and trust. He is upset about that hopefully he can work to make up for it. Shyam isn't her ex fiance, I hope I've been clear about that. He's a whole other person completely. She's absolutely adorable, I want to preserve her innocence even though she's been through so much. NK is quite protective about Khushi and his reaction to her life changes will definitely be something interesting. I will like to answer your last questions in one of the future updates. Thank you, and I will try to continue soon.

Edited by Musingsofmymind - 9 years ago

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Sarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Linsie
3...
long update

khushi and lavanya become friends

now is shyam good or bad

akash is back

arnav saw sleeping khushi... making wrong move on

khushi and Nk friendship

Hi Linsie ! Welcome to Zindagi ke Mausam.

Thank you for the multiple comments on your thoughts about your show. I'd like to thank you for pointing a detail on a post you started with 1 (It will be important in the coming updates) Thank you for enjoying and understanding each relationship between the characters. What NK and Khushi share is something that is very near and dear to me. I cherish it a lot. Shyam is Shyam, and that's all I'll say about that ;)

Edited by Musingsofmymind - 9 years ago

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Sarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: zafi
Awesome update.⭐️

Iloved it.

I am glad Khushi chose to share her ordeal with her dadu.

I am happy that she has bodyguard her as well.

The bodyguard seems nice and cute too.😉😆


I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😊

Zafi ! I always look forward to your comments. I will say you are the most wonderful person, you've been through all my versions of this story and I'm so grateful for that.

I think for Khushi to move on and grow as a person it is very necessary for her to work on her relationship with her grandfather.

Her bodyguard is fictional eye candy, I'll take as many good looking hunks as we can get in a story 😆 😉 😳

Thank you always.

Edited by Musingsofmymind - 9 years ago

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Sarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: mansijani21
Loved the update...!!!!👏

Thank you ⭐️ 😃

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Sarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: jessjazz
Sarah.. can you please give an update... pretty please😭
Can't wait to know how Arnav will feel after he sees a guy 'mandera-ing' in Khushi's vicinity.

Hey Jess Darling,

I will give you an update by tonight. As you can see, I'm just getting back to replying to all these lovely comments. I'm on lunch break which will be over in 2 minutes. LOL so tonight, promise :D Thank you ! 😃 ⭐️

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Sarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: angeldream14
Amazing
so khushi has a lot to her life than anyone know except few people close
i simply loved this story
khushi is strong but her strength is the pillar holding her
NK is the sweetest friend ever he shares a unique relationship with khushi
i hope ASR's virus doesn't catch up la
who is the mad man after khushi
n i dont like snake to looking at her
will Arnav realize it bef her damages her with his words n anger

can u pm me plz

Thank you ! And hello, welcome to Zindagi Ke Mausam !

Yes, Khushi's life is like box of a surprises.

Thank you so so much.

You are right NK and Khushi share a wonderful relationship and like you said I hope ASR's negative thoughts don't transfer to Lavanya's.

I hope Arnav does realize and not say anything that'll screw him in the long run.

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Sarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: Arshi67
Your story is interesting in the way you reveal details slowly, giving intriguing little glimpses into Khushi's past. You always get the sense of the pain buried in her, even while she's appearing to be happy go lucky. I'm looking forward to reading more :)

Hi ! Welcome & Thank you for reading this. First of all, I want to say you write wonderfully. I loved Mere Papad Ka Tukda. I don't know if I had the chance to comment on it but I believe I read it through the ippkndficverse website? It was so cute and wonderful so for you to comment on my work has me grinning. Thank you. And I'm glad that you are able to sense that from Khushi. This is my first try at writing a full fledged story, so I'm open to comments, criticism and everything in between. Thank you again !

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