ARSHI FF : YAADEIN TERI [CH-2 UPDATED{PG-9}]

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ARSHI FF : YAADEIN TERI


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PROLOGUE :


 WE HAVE BEEN HEARING SINCE CHILDHOOD THAT "WHEN WE LOSE ONE THING WE GAIN OTHER THING".Exactly this happened in a girl named khushi's life who is 18 years old.

 KHUSHI...a bubbly,cute,innocent and naughty girl who has many aspirations in her life and is creative and imaginative.She likes dreaming a lot.She has loving family.
She has a very special bond with her grandfather. She is treated like a princess in her house.And for her grandfather she is like his MOTHER.Since childhood khushi was brought up by her parents and grandparents.
So she has neutral feelings for her parents and grandparents.Her life is going happily and peacefully.

 But as you all know LIFE ISN'T FILLED WITH ALL HAPPINESS...THERE CAME A DAY WHICH TURNED KHUSHI'S LIFE UPSIDE DOWN...WHICH SHATTERED KHUSHI'S HAPPINESS...WHICH DESTROYED HER PRECIOUS RELATION...!!!

          But life didn't stop it's journey there...

 WANT TO KNOW...
 WHAT HAPPENED TO KHUSHI ?
 WHAT IS THAT INCIDENT WHICH CHANGED HER LIFE?
 DID SHE RECOVER FROM THE STORM WHICH PASSED IN HER LIFE?
 THEN HOW?

 THEN STAY TUNED TO YAADEIN TERI...!!!


HEY FRIENDS...
HOW IS THE PROLOGUE?
DID YOU GUYS LIKE IT?
SHOULD I CONTINUE THE STORY?

PLEASE LET ME KNOW FAST...!!!
 
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CHARACTER SKETCH :


KHUSHI DURGA RAO : Daughter of Mr.RAO. She is 18 years old. Young,energetic,imaginative,creative,intelligent and multi talented.


ARNAV SINGH RAICHAND : Son of Mr.RAICHAND. He is 18 years old. Young,kind,intelligent and handsome guy.


MR.RAO : A middle class employee who lives at HYDERABAD.


GANGA RAO : Wife of MR.RAO and mother of khushi.


MR.SIMHA : GRAND FATHER OF KHUSHI. FATHER OF GANGA.


KRISHNA: GRANDMOTHER OF KHUSHI.MOTHER OF GANGA.


PRANAV SINGH RAICHAND : Father of ARNAV.  Top most businessmen in INDIA.He has many businesses.He runs a famous college named GURUKUL ENGINEERING COLLEGE at DELHI. He loves his family a lot.


AARTI SINGH RAICHAND : Mother of Arnav. Principal of GURUKUL COLLEGE. KIND WOMEN.


ANJALI SINGH RAICHAND : Elder daughter of PRANAV and elder sister of ARNAV. A chrispy bubbly girl.


INDEX :


Edited by ipkkndkasr - 7 years ago
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One word says it all- Wow!
I just loved the prologue of the fiction. It's both thought-evoking and spine-chilling.
Its also good to see how you've made the prologue open-ended giving numerous channels to the readers to race their brains through and predict the possible flow of story.
I've made my set of prediction as well and I'm waiting for the story to start to know whether my guess work is working fine or not.πŸ˜†
I like the character sketches of all the pivotal characters with no antagonistic characteristic but this is where my confusion begins... What happened with Khushi??
Just update the first chapter soon!
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BUDDY ME FOR PMS...!!!
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Captivating start chocopie .
apt Tittle for the story :)
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Nice prologue n CS
Continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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awesome prologue mathiπŸ€—
nice concept...
loved it...
start soon...
thnks 4 d pm..
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nice concept and cs...πŸ‘πŸΌ...thank u 4 pm...πŸ˜ƒ...
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interesting prologue.. best wishes and happy writing Yaadein Teri πŸ˜ƒ

thanks for pm πŸ˜Š
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Great concept 
Can't wait