Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb update..
Nice intro..
Update soon

Thanks a lot sneha 🤗, will update by weeknd😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hey Lucky,
Saku 🤗🤗

I loved the old lion DP...the magnificent presence, the showstopper Sanskar... Always confident..and cute swara.

😳 glad you liked their sketch, thank you

Waiting for perfection to have imperfection crashing upon it...won't it bring heavens tumbling down. You pace and writing is very very enjoyable. Do continue soon!

😆😆 that's bound to happen na, when two people poles apart come together and if they are some one like swara and sanskaar, fire works are must😛😉

Thanks for dropping by sweety😊 your comment means a lot😊

Love,
Sakura

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Love Loads🤗

Lucky

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Manaki challa baguntundi - mana bosses ki nachaka povachu - I am already deep in Monday blues and Sunday is not yet over😭

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hi Lucky.😊
Beautiful update.👏
But one thing I'm confused is that is this a present scene or a flashback??😕
Plzz clear my confusion.😳

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Lucky dearest xoxo

Am typing from the dratted phone so forgive any errors and also the length of the comment. Read chapter 1 and really love how you built up the intro of the characters. As you know I'm a fan of really understanding the characters before we can feel their story and here I felt this was very well done. Sanskaar is so compelling! I love the description- it's been my dream to see a Sanskaar who genuinely looks like a millionaire businessman and in an Armani suit and you gave me that so special thanks for that:). I really like the concept of a rather breezy but perfectionist Sanskaar. The bit about straightening something to make it look "right" made me chuckle- as an OCD Virgo it really struck a chord and as VK is Virgo too it made it feel even more real in some way:). My fave part was showing how Sanskaar may be priveleged but wants to be self made- big thumbs up for that!

Also liked how you introduced swara and both of their family dynamics. The stage is set and I can't wait for tnem to meet and for sparks to fly! Eagerly look forward to next chapter!

Lots of love xoxo

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hi Lucky.😊
Beautiful update.👏
But one thing I'm confused is that is this a present scene or a flashback??😕
Plzz clear my confusion.😳

Hi Aheli🤗

Thanks a lot

So its like prologue is present , as the Chapters unfold they will be leading us to prologue

In short Chapter 1 is flash back😊

Hope I cleared your confusion😊 and sorry for the late reply

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Lucky dearest xoxo

Am typing from the dratted phone so forgive any errors and also the length of the comment. Read chapter 1 and really love how you built up the intro of the characters. As you know I'm a fan of really understanding the characters before we can feel their story and here I felt this was very well done. Sanskaar is so compelling! I love the description- it's been my dream to see a Sanskaar who genuinely looks like a millionaire businessman and in an Armani suit and you gave me that so special thanks for that:). I really like the concept of a rather breezy but perfectionist Sanskaar. The bit about straightening something to make it look "right" made me chuckle- as an OCD Virgo it really struck a chord and as VK is Virgo too it made it feel even more real in some way:). My fave part was showing how Sanskaar may be priveleged but wants to be self made- big thumbs up for that!

Also liked how you introduced swara and both of their family dynamics. The stage is set and I can't wait for tnem to meet and for sparks to fly! Eagerly look forward to next chapter!

Lots of love xoxo

Shru🤗🤗

sorry for late reply..you taking out time and dropping in is enough dearie. length errors doesn't matter

Thank you ..happy you liked the built up and family dynamics and already so much love for sanskaar .😆.half of your comment is about sunny boy .. 😳 ahh he would look like millon bucks na in that suit and all..well Can I say I am living off my fantasy as well😉. I need a hi 5 on that

..Oh God ..OCD & Virgo😆..that's a deadly combo .

Love for sanskaar and the place he holds in our hearts is something which reflects in characterization of sanskaar in FF's/SS/ OS and we cant help it ..its like you know "our sanskaar" feeling wanting him to be ultimate hero ..you will know it better😉

Thanks again for dropping in , means a lot 🤗🤗

Love

Lucky

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

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Dear Lucky,

"He was the epitome of professionalism. He was perfect. He was Sanskaar" Parties bore him and business meetings interest him. And something missing in his personal life"

Can I have one, made to order, for myself, and myself only? Sigh, where are the men like these in the real world.!😳

Corporate Social Responsibility - eh! sounds very good but I wonder how it turns out in future once he meets the "face" of the Orphanage he wants to help out with, definitely an angel with a little of the devil in her.😉

So the stage is set for meeting Swara - and what a meeting it promises to be - he has been bowled over😊

I simply love the way this tale is unfolding - sparks promise to fly.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago