Shraman - irresistable! A fanfic! COMPLETE WITH INDEX - Page 3

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Great job! Enjoyed reading it!!
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hello! sorry i haven't been able to update for the past couple of days :( been preoccupied with my cousin's wedding!
Thankyou all for the all the encouragement that has been sent my way! it really does mean a lot to me! i shall now continue with my 3rd update! i hope you all like it!

Part 3!

(continued after the duo leaving Khosla's party.)

There was silence in the car. but tension hung in the air like a knife. shravan drove, frustrated and trying to cool down from the effect that Sumo had on him. Sumo, feeling a little victorious but shy, drove shotgun trying not smile. A grumbling noise filled the air and they both looked at each other. It was hunger. Their stomachs were rumbling because in the entire party, hadn't eaten a morsel. They reached Tiwari Villa and shravan looked at Sumo, expecting her to leave. She looks back at him, smiles and says, "Chalo mere saath. khaana nahi khaya tum ne." Shravan replies, " nahi its okay, mai ghar jaa kar khalunga." "kyun apne ghar ke ook ko itta pareshan karte ho? chup chaap chalo" sumo orders. Shravan gives a smug look and says, Muhhe khana banana ata hai. aur kaafi achha banaleta hoon. Sumo was shocked for a bit and said " good to know but mujhse achha nahi aata aur ye tum bhi jante ho. Ab chalo" shravan gives up knowing that she's right and they walk into the house.

The house was silent so they made their way through the quiet and into the kitchen. Summers are always humid here thought shravan as he took his blazer off, rolled his sleeves and loosened his tie. Sumo who had her back towards him had still seen him do all this through his reflection in the glass cabinet. Sumo got to work first by pulling saree"s pallu up and gathering it at her shoulder and tying her hair in a knot like it usually is. She looked around in the fridge and was pulling out stuff one by one. Shravan stood leaning on the counter, his hands folded as he looked admiringly at her, she was still the cooking obsessed sumo. he liked how involved she got in the process of it. just like the old times. He tried hard not to focus on her now visible back or her trimmed waist. she turns around and says " jab tumhe cooking aati hai toh help bhi kardo! ye lo, ye capsicum aur gaajar slice kardena," 

Shravan got to work beside her as she started to cut up little pieces of paneer and potatoes. she remembers, he thought too himself and a smile came on his lips. Paneer was his favorite and he loved how he prepred it. he was getting intense flashback pf them as teens when she used to make it for him and he would gobble the whole thing down like a freak. he was chopping the capsicum and Sumo looks at his work and says, ye kya kar rahe ho? and chuckeled, "london mei aise kaat te hain? she asked smiling and brushing him off to the side. she then took the task upon herself, not knowing that shravan ad done that purposely.  They stood chatting and teasing each other about their old memories and laughing. it was like they were the old sumo and shravan.

 Sumo remembered one of her pranks and smiled mischieviously. Shravan stood around 2 feet away from her, playing with the rubix cube, she slyly dipped her hand in the pot of tumeric powder and quickly smeared his cheek with it and laughed. Shravan, taken by surprise stands there in shock knowing fully well what she had done. Before he too could dip his hand in the powder, she snatched the container and moved a few steps back. So this is how she wanted to pay this, he thought to himself. He had had enough of this Sumo teasing her in one day. A mischieviious smile played on his lips as he srted to move towards her. Sumo's smile fatered and slowly vanished as Shravan moved towards her, she moves back further and hits the wall. she tries to slide towards the side but one of his strong arms pulls her back. he has her pinned against the wall. Shravan, who was lost the world now, grabbed her on both sides by her waist and pulled her towards him. She tries to regain her senses but his hands on her waist were sending her out of control. "Shra-", she begins to whisper but he hushes her midway. His tall frame stood holding her against him as she rested her forearms on his chest. he bent his head and leaned in towards her, Sumo who dint know what to do, stood there shell shocked. he brought his stubbled cheek down to hers and rubbed it against it. The air around them crackled with electricity as they both got lost in he moment. their cheeks, warm against each other. her's smooth and soft, gliding against his rough one. He pulled away and looked at her with half opened eyes. Her eyes, shaken with something he had only seen once before were enough to make him feel that she felt he same. She slowly adjusted her arms to move them onto his shoulders and looked at his lips apprehensively, shravan grip on her waist tightened as he felt his fingers glide over her soft skin which was turning him on. Sumo slid her hands down to  his front and her hands glided over his clothed, rock hard abs, she slithered her hands down to them and clutched at his sides. Shravan, not being able to take it anymore, leaned down and pressed his lips against the side of her neck. They were now in their own little world of desire, hearts racing, breath melting into each other. Sumo clutched at his shirt, pulled herself up and returned the favour by placing soft kisses along his jawline. They had given up their inhibitions and let go. Sumo took a sharp intake of breath as she felt his teeth bite her slowly on the crook of neck, she was in a state of bliss.. She wanted him to feel what she had felt and slowly sucked on this neck before biting him back. they moved their faces to face each other and their lips were just centimeters away from each other...

CLANG!! there was a sound from the front yard. both of them instantly looked at the direction, still breathing heavily, in a tangled mess of arms and fabric. Their heads turned to face each other, inches apart and their expressions changed. The looked around at each other in the position they were in, looking back at each other as they dint know how they ended up like that, slowly, they pulled apart from each  other. Shravan moved Back a couple of steps, breathing still laboured, shirt crumpled, first two buttons open and a tie hanging losely, his hair was a mess too, result of a certain pair of hands gripping and running through them. Sumo's hair was open, her face flushed, and her sari threatening to fall from her shoulder.

There was an awkward silence in the kitchen as the two tried to gather their senses and normalize their breaths. Shravan walks out the kitchen gathering his blazer. Sumo lets him go fro a couple of seconds then runs after him to slowly say, " khaana toh khaalo". he stops in his tracks. he hears her mumble something about a table. He considers leaving but he dint want to let all of her efforts go waste, again. he seats himself on the dining table chair as she brings out the food. she sits across from him as they eat in pin droop silence. Shravan's eyes water at the amazing taste in his mouth. he had longed for this food for so long and he enjoyed every single bit of it. Sumo dared to look up at him, only to see him smile and hungrily eat the food she made. she quickly looked down again. after they were done eating and washing up, shravan once again grabbed his blazer and headed towards the door, still reeling under the incidents of the night in the kitchen. Sumo saw him walk towards the door, still in a daze. 

They both headed towards their destinations, she her room and he, his house. An array of emotions flooding their heads, minds still seething in the moments they shared. both of them headed towards their respective beds, wondering if they would get any sleep that night. 

End.

Hello reader, things got a little hot and heavy there, didn't they? :P i'm sorry if its a bit too much for anyone! but i wanted to establish their childhood relation and their current not so child-hoody feelings in one go. Do leave comments, critiques and suggestions down below and let me know if you want me to continue! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
It's awesome

Continue soon
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#24
It's indeed hot but glad to read something which might never ever happen in the show
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#25
This was hot..
Simply irresistible they are..


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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
As the title itself says irresistible 
Really loved it nd u wrote it beautifully 
Waiting for next part 
Continue soon 
Love Ishita 
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This is awesome!! Loved it.. 
Continue soon please๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Simply awesome ๐Ÿ˜ƒ eagerly waiting for the next part...do continue.
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Hello readers! Thankyou for all the love and sppreciation! Here is the update! 
Sumo sat on her bed. Still and silent, while.her mind reeled as it replayed the events that had happened. His hands clutching her waist tight, his breath on her neck, the feel of his skin on hers as he painted her cheek with turmeric powder that was on his, the warm spots on her neck and shoulders that he kissed...somehow, she missed his touch. But even though, he was gone now, she could still feel his presence lingering on her. She stood in front of the mirror looking at herself. Her hair in shambles, her saree exposing a lot more than she wanted to, and her face flushed a beet red. There was a pink spot in the crook of her.neck where he had bit her and suckled on her skin. This made her smile, maybe she was imahining the colour because she knew exactly where he did it because the skin still tingled. When she thought of the desire that had filled her, her smile faded. Something inside her had overtook her. She couldn't stop herself from running her hands all over his torso and pulling his hair. He was strong and warm, his abs were just as she imagined they would feel. Soon, ahe rtated to miss his physical presence as the same feeling over took her again. Suddenly she breaks from her thoughts and realizes what they did. She had just made out with Shravan. Shravan. Her best friend. The guy who insulted her at a party. The guy who was fighting a court case for her. Her lawyer. She decided to deal with it in the morning and freshens up and heads to her bed.

Shravan drove home slowly. He parked his car and entered the Malhotra Mansion, walking towarda his room, dazedly. "bhaiya!!!" pushkar walks towards him, pulling him out of his thoughts. "kya hua? Kahan khoye hue ho? Maine aapko teen awaazei di" shravan looked at pushkar and gathered his senses. "kuch nai bas kuch sonch raha tha, tu soya nahi ab tak?" he asked pushkar with a slight smile. " jaa raha tha, ye aapke gaal pe kya laga hai? Aur aap kisi se ladhke aaye ho kya? Shirt aisi khuli hui, tie loose?" pushkar enquired looking at his brother, who had turned beet red. " Delhi ki garmi, aur kya? Aur pata nahi luch lag gaya hoga. Good night" shravan replies and quickly walks towards his room. Pushkar stands confused in the same spot for a few seconds, then dismisses his brother's odd behaviour as stress and walks off.

 Shravan stood under the shower and let the water cool him down. What had happened? How could he have.lost control like that? Well, how wasn't he supposed to? With her looking like that. He tried to wash away the feeling of her from his skin but somehow, one thought, and it would come right back. He had never been this hassled before. It's not like Sumo is the first girl he made out with. But why did she feel so different, so right. His hands longed to be back in her soft and smooth frame. His mouth longed for her. Stupid cat! He thought. The monster inside him felt somewhat at peace. She was so beautiful. And her warm brown eyes, half closed were a heavenly sight. There was no doubt that Sumo had wanted to same thing as him, he could still feel little stings on his front where she had clutched him hard as he smothered her neck. He gets out of the shower and on the way looks at the mirror. There were red marks on his torso. Like scratches made by someone's hands. There was also , a pink, curved spot on his neck. It was clearly a bite. Shravan couldn't help but smile. That really had turned him on. Dont know what he would have doneHe headed towards his bed and tried to sleep.

The next morning, pushkar wakes up early only to find his brother already working out in the sit out area. He joins him and they share some small talk about fitness. Shravan who had barely got any sleep, courtesy of a certain young woman who haunted his dreams, had decided to face the day like any other one. Today was the second hearing and he needed all his focus. He finished his workout and sat on the bench drinking water. He took off his sweaty shirt and before he could put a towel around his neck, pushkar said " ek.minute! Bhaiya, ye kya hua aapko?" walking towards him and it dawned in him. He quickly tried to cover up and said " kuch nai, bas machchar ne kaata tha..." but Pushkar was no fool, he snatched away the towel and moved back, smiling, smirling at the same time. " Bas bhaiya! Maana ki single hoon par buddhu nahi hoon mai! Kis ka kaarnama hai ye nishan? Aur ek hickey bhi? Waah bhaiya, maan mangaye." he teased him with a laugh. "pushkar, towel wapas kar! Aisa kuch nai hua!" he responded in a hurry. "kyun? Pehle batao kon thi woh bichari ladhki jis se aapke ye abs aur aapki charm resist nahi hui?" pushkar teased him more. " Oh, please! Woh koi bechari nahi hai! Ghalti uski thi!" he replied and regretted in an instant. He had just admitted to pushkar that it was indeed a girl wjo.had left those marks on him. " ohho! Toh aapne finally admit karliya! Ab batao kaun!" pushkar demanded. But shravan was smart, " sorry bro, i dont kiss and tell!" said shravan with a sarcastic expression. " waah bhaiya, kiss karli, 2nd base hit karliya aur pata nahi kya kya...aur mai yahan baitha hoon ki ek bandi miljaye jo mujhe muskura kar toh dekhe". Shravan smiled slightly and walked off. Pushkar wasnt correct, he hadn't kissed her, but he wasn't wrong either, he had touched 2nd base. 

Hello, i know the update was small, but i wanted to explore their feelings. 
Let me know your reviews! 
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for updating 
Nice one 
Continue soon 
Waiting for next part 
Love Ishita