Shraman - irresistable! A fanfic! COMPLETE WITH INDEX

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Hey guys! Im new here! And wanted to write something i thought of! Feel free to comment, critique and suggest! 

hat i noticed in the show is that Sumo and Shravan are still in the phase of mending their friendship, but there is no denying that there is more to their bond than just that. They have very strong minds and that is what is keeping them physically distant from each other. They don't want to rush into things and control themselves. So what would happen if that control was on the verge of being crushed? 


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IRRESISTABLE

Atlast! Chachi and vandy bhabhi had left, suman had come to meet shravan but vandy bhabhi had caught her, asking her to help her tie her saree. Suman helped her out and after they left, she headed towards shravan's room, the house help stops her in the way and offers her water. She refuses but asks him "shravan apne room mei hai na?", the man says " haan baby ji...par-". Suman doesn't wait for him to finish his sentence and rushes up the stairs to Shravan's room and closes the door behind her. She says " shravan-" only to find the room empty.

Suman stands there perplexed. Where was this guy?! She needed to speak to him immediately. Just then she hears a door click behind her and she turns around only to lose her senses. Shravan has just come out from the bathroom after a shower. His hair wet and toussled, water driplets trickling down is perfectly chiselled face, down his sharp neck to his perfectly broad shoulders and sculpted torso then merging into the nape of the towel which rested just as his abs ended. " hey. tum yaham kya kar rahi ho?", Shravan asked a very lost Sumo. Suman who couldn't take her eyes off of what was in front of her, tried hard to look at shravan's face only, while her breathing was becoming a bit flustered, replied " woh mai..." she had to gulp down the frog in her throat and form sentences. Focus, sumo! Focus! She said to herself. Shravan realized what was happening and smirked. Surely, he had got a similiar reaction from some girls in London, whenever he went to the gym.or swimming but he didn't expect it from Sumo. And he was in no mood to let this opportunity go. " Tum kya?" he asked,pulling her attention. She replied " mai tumse woh case ke baare mei baat karne aayi thi..woh khosla kal...* gulps down*...ghar aaya tha sab ka brain wash karne aur...", sumo was getting frustrated with herself! Why wasn't she able to speak?! What was that weird fuzzy feeling in her head and in the pit of her stomach? And why wasn't he putting a god damn shirt on?! " Tum kapde pehenlo, mai baadmei aati hoon" she said and was about to walk out when he stopped her " ruko! Bata kar jao kya hua?" he said. He was nearing her, was infront of her now, her heart was beating so hard, she could.hear it in her ears. He was a foot away from her, now inches. She back tracked her footsteps and he moved towards her. She hit a wall. Shravan was having too much fun seeing sumo like this. But it wasn't only fun, the way she was reacting to him was making him feel warm on the inside and stirring something in him. Was sumo's reaction turning him on? She looked at his face, inches away above her's. Her palms were getting sweaty and were itching to touch his bare skin. Were his arms and abs as strong as they looked? Both if them were lost in the moment as they both struggled to keep their hands to themselves. Sumo plucked the courage to look up at his eyes and saw a smirk on shravan's face. Oh, shit! He was trying to make her feel this way! She quickly turned her expression to a nonchalant one and said " tumhe kapde pehenne se koi problem hai? London mei tum jaise chahe ghumlo. Par yahan nahi chalega" . Shravan backed up with his smirk growing and said " mai public place mei nahi hoon. Mere apne room mei hoon. Aur tum mere room bina knock kiye aayi thi. Mai apne room mei jaise chahe rehsakta hoon" . Suman couldn't argue with that so she just leaves. Once out the door, Suman lets out a long breather. Her mind was still fuzzy and stuck on the vision that she had witnessed in the room. She shakes her head and waits for shravan to come down in the living room. As he enters the living room, she looks at him and her heart feels a little betrayed. He was wearing a shirt and a pair of jeans. Now that she had seen what was underneath, she couldn't stop x-ray visioning him. Still, she cleared her mind and told shravan all about khosla inbiting her family members to brainwash them and the fact that they hadn't told her and naanu about it. They talked for a long time and decided that they would attend khosla's daughter's wedding to try and get into his house.

That night, Suman lay in her bed, trying not to think about Shravan. Why did she feel that weird feeling? She had seen abs before! Siddharth malhotra ke hai, srk ke hai, bohot saare logon ke abs hote hain. Is chaman ne konsa teer maar liya, huh. And then her heart spoke, kaash mei ne touch karliya hota,... She thought of each droplet that trickled down the.middle of chest and then into the ridges on his stomach. What must it feel like to touch those hard muscles, to be held by those strong arms, to run my hands through his hair and pull it slightly as he lays kisses down the side of my neck...-", Ohmygod sumo! Ye kya sonch rahi hai tu?! She thought. And she was biting her lower lip when she was thinking. Bohot dimaagh kharab hogaya hai mera. Sojati hoon. And then she tried to fall asleep for a long time before she actually did. 

What will happen at khosla 's daughter's wedding, when the tables will turn on shravan? Will sumo and shravan be able to complete their mission? Or will there be a few new distractions to make it more difficult?? 

Hello reader, i hope you liked it! Please let me.know of you want me to continue! 
~ Flibbertigibet~

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey that was a great start ...
really enjoyed reading it
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Hello Flibbertigibbet(no offense, but that's a really funny name๐Ÿ˜†)

Welcome to the EDKV madness!
And this piece is a marvel! And ShraManlicious! (credits to fero and PlainJane for this smexy term) And please do continue..
Would also like to hear Shravan's thoughts about this encounter in your words. ๐Ÿ‘

Love,
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Hey! Welcome to the forum!!
Loved your piece. Chaman  ne kanas tee marly..๐Ÿ˜† I can actually imagine her saying something like . Continue writing. Looking forward to it. PM please!
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It's really good

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Wow๐Ÿ‘ this was really nice! 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey..
I loved ur name...isliye Google kar liye..so u are a chatty person...nice


I loved ur story..It was irresistible for Suman..and even for us also...even I wanted to touch those abs and arms...

Pls continue this..wanna see the same reaction from shravan when he sees Suman...
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Welcome to EDKV first ๐Ÿค—
It's really too good!!
I loved the description of Suman's feelings regarding Shravan and his sexiness ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Would love to Shravan's point of view also...
plz continue soon... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Welcome to the craziest forum...
It was a amazing part
Really loved it...
Continue soon...
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