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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy everyone! Thankyou for all the lovely words about the story, and occasionally my username
I really, really appreciate all the love that's been sent my way
 
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Sumo and shravan both woke up in their respective beds. Groggy, yet light headed. Today was the day they were going to look for clues at Khosla's house. Suman rushed to get dressed and meet naanu. Shravan sat in his usual spot, holding his coffee mug in one hand while the other's fingers danced around the rim of the mug. He was thinking about his encounter with Sumo the previous day. There was a hint of smile on his face and yet his mind was boggled. What was it that had caused him to move ahead and get so close to her. His hands were clenched as he tried not to grab her waist. Something was stirring inside him . Like a dragon in his belly. It had woken up and was fighting with it's shackles. He had wanted to grab her and pull her closer to him. Surely, he had started it just to tease sumo, but he felt an attraction too. And it was pullung him hard. He realized what he was think and dismisses his thoughts. He clears his mind, reminding himself that women hurt us. Thats all they do. And he need to focus on the case and go back to London.

As Sumo tells naanu about her and shravan's plan to go to the wedding, nana ji protests to let him go too. She tries hard to convince him that she'll be fine when shravan enters the room. He touches nana ji's feet and sits beside him. " nanaji, aap ko fikar karne ki koi zarurat nai hai. Mai hoon na, kuch pareshani nahi hogi. Humei kuch na kuch clues toh mil jaenge" he assured him. Nanaji smiles a little and says " mai jaanta hoon ki tumlog fasal rahoge. Mujhe fikar sumo ki bhi hai." Sumo holds nana ji's hand and says " naanu, aap tension kun lete ho? Aap jante ho na, mai kitti strong hoon-" sharvan interrrupts her by putting his hand too on her and nanaji's and says " sumo sahi kehrahi hai, aap tension mat lo, mai hoon na sumo ke saath." They look at each other, and a strong blush creeps up sumo's cheek. Nanaji agrees to ket them both go. 

Sumo stands in her room wondering what to wear when shravan enters her room. He looks around at the clothes she's spread on her bed and few more little pieces. He walks towards her and looks over her shoulder and this startles her as she turns around. "Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Manners nahi hai tumhe? Knock kyun nahi kya?" she demanded of him.
"Achha, aur tum mei jaise badhe manners hai, kal mere room mei kon ghuss aaya tha? Aur mai ne toh jab kapde bhi nai pehne the" he replies and it dawns on him that it was a wrong statement to argue with. He didnt want to think about and neither did she but sumo's x ray vision had returned again. She turned away fiddling in her cupboard and turned around when shravan said " nice! Achha colour hai" as stood resting against the pole of her bed and was referring to sumo's black lace bra twiddling around his finger tips. Sumo ran to him amd snatched it away in embarassment while he smirked and tried not to laugh. It was like they were shravan and sumo again. From 10 years ago, teasing eatch other.but she just pushed him.out of the room and said " late mat karna. Theek 8 baje aana" and shuts the door.

Shravan is in his room getting ready. He wears a proper formal suit. Black with a white shirt and grey tie. He looks at his watch and it was almost 8. He grabs the keys, tells vandy he's going for a party and leaves. He enters the Tiwari villa gate and parks his car. Sumo was almost ready when she hears the door bell ring. She hurriedly tries to finish her make up as she hears shravan's voice greeting everyone. Preeti knocks on her door and says " suman didi, shravan bhaiya agaye"  Sumo takes one quick look at the mirror and puts her shoes on. She opens the door to her room and walks out in the living room. Shravan was standing there in a suit that made him look like a greek god. It fit his form so well that suman was jealous how good he looked. Whereas shravan couldn't believe what he was seeing. Sumo was wearing a dull grey saree with black and pink borders, matched with a black sequined blouse. Her hair was half pinned and half down her back in glorious curls. " chalo!" suman says, pulling him out of his daze and walks out ahead of him. He then notices that suman's back was cover with just her hair, a black strip of the blouse and a string. He groans at her. Shravan gets annoyed and sits in the car. He has a stern expression on his face. He drives the car in silence and sumo notices his anger. " ab kya hua tumhe?" she asks him. He doesn't answer so she mutters "akdhu. Huh" , he hears that and looks at her. " tumhe kuch aur nahi mila pehen ne ke liye? He asks her angrily. Sumo is taken aback by his words and replies " mai kuch bhi pehnu usse tumhe kya". Wahan par woh stupid verma bhi hoga, aur mai nahi chahta ki woh" he stops. " ki woh kya? Kya farq padhta hai? Kya karlega woh?" . Shravan is on the verge of losing his mind. Why did she have to look like that. I cant let her out of my sight today. I wont let verma or anyone even look at her weirdly, he thought to himself. 

They reach the party which was at the khosla residence.it was a huge mansion with huge lawns where the party was being held. " iska jab itna bada ghar hai, toh usne mere mummy papa ka chhota sa ghar kyun kharreda? Aur ab hamare ghar ke peeche kyun padha hai?" sumo asks. " greed"  replies shravan, looking at her. They enter the party and try to merge in.

Is that cliffhanger too.much?? 
Hello readers! Hope you all liked it! Want to know what happens at the party? 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Shravan 's reaction😆...why all men are so jealous. .I hate it when they taunt on our clothing...
Chapter was small...

Waiting fr next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Nice one 
Loved it...
Continue soon can't wait for it 
I hope 3rd part u give now only,..
Update soon 
Love Ishita 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Really good..
Sumo should totally turn tables on Shravan.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
 Hey guys! Sorry for the late post! Being an artist is a little time consuming. Thankyou for all the appreciation! Here's the next part!!
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Sumo and shravan enter the venue. Khosla Palace was lavishly decorated. Round tables, drapes, lights, a huge bar, a dance floor and a mandap, were all full of light and flowers and various other glittery ornaments of decoration. Shravan stood beside Sumo but angled himself to stand a bit in front of her. They stand looking at each other, trying to figure out what to do. They had to check khosla's house before he noticed them and they decided to do it when the ceremony will take place.

To blend in the crowd, sumo and shravan grab glasses of fizzy drinks from the servers going through the crowds with trays. "Tumhe abhi bhi orange flavour bohot pasand hai" asks shravan as he sees sumo grab an orange drink. " she looks at him with a knowing smile and says " sumo ka taste kabbi change nahi hota. Hamesha se first class." he remembers her saying that before and tilts his head with a smirk. He wanted to keep a look out for any sort of men who looked potentially creepy, not that there was a shortage here, but he didn't want anyone near Sumo. And if that Verma shows up, he dare not even look at her, shravan thought, suddenly getting a bit angry. Sumo notices his expression and says " tumhe hamesha angry young man wali look dena zaroori hai? Aur idhar udhar kise dekhrahe ho? Ladhkiya taadhne aaye ho ya jasoosi karne?" shravan looks at her, wondering how this girl can be so naive. He was looking out for her and she thinks that he was looking out for some other girls?! Wait, is she getting jealous? I cant let this go! He thinks excitedly.

 Sumo noticed a girl, clad in a bright but skimpy ghagra looking towards them, she was just about to tell shravan when she realized that the girl was actually looking just at shravan. She gets mad and death stares her. Shravan notices sumo throwing daggers with her eyes at someone, he looks around to ses who it is and turns out its a girl walking towards them. The girl heads towards them, stands in front of shravan and says " hi! Aise bore kyun khadhe ho? Let's dance?" shravan was taken aback by the girl's fowardness but was much more amused by how sumo reacted! She looked like she was scathing but tried to hide it. Shravan looked at her, expecting her to say something and when Sumo doesn't respond, he turns towards the girl and walks with her to the dance floor, leaving sumo alone and shell shocked. 

Shravan smiles at the girl.in front of her who was forcing him to dance but he had eyes only for sumo. Although he was just looking at her to see her reaction, his mind drifted and started to admire her. The way her hair hair framed her face, the light pink tinge of her lips, her smooth arms and the small part of her torso visible from her sari. He felt the dragon in his belly rising, mocking him. And then, he noticed a man, looking at sumo from behind her, he was walking towards her and Sumo was unaware. He had to do something! He had to! He walked away quickly from the dance floor and headed towards her in long strides. Sumo, who was looking down because she dint want to see Shravan with that girl, looked up only to see him striding towards her with a stern face. She was confused and was about to question him when he stepped right in front of her, smiled and put an arm around her shoulders and took her away. Shravan had got to sumo before the man could even get 2 feet near her. He felt the need to show the man that she was off limits so he out an arm around her and led her away. 

"Shravan, tum kya kar rahe ho mujhe kuh samajh nai aaraha!" hissed sumo. " Blend in kar raha hoon, crowd mei. Dance karte hain" he said casually putting his arm on her waist and lacing another hand with hers. Sumo, still dazed, just looks at his face and doesnt budge. He keeps surprising her, she thinks. His hand was on her waist and luckily that side of her waist was covered but she could still feel him and his warm fingers on her. They were so close, she could feel his warmth. Shravan looked at sumo with a turmoil. She was so beautiful, so pure, but she was not his. He insulted her and for a reason. He as no right to be her friend anymore...but those eyes were too captivating to look away from. Her fingers laced with his felt right and his hand resting on her waist. The crowd started to thin as everyone headed towards the mandap and the music stopped. This brought them both to their senses and they stepped apart. Now was the time.

Sumo and shravan snuck into the house through the back door,not risking khosla or anyone close to him seeing them. The house was huge on the inside. They chose to go towards the right where there were many doors, possibly to rooms. Luckily, this part of the house was empty so they could easily walk towards the doors. They opened the first door and it was an empty room, the second was full of gifts amd baskets. There was no chance that khosla would keep anything of.importance there. Shravan then moved towards the 3rd door and tried to twist the knob but it was it wouldn't budge. "locked" they said together. It was obvious that this room was locked for a reason and it frustrated them both. Something struck in sumo's mind and she pushed shravan away from the knob. She pulled out a hair pin from her hair and tried to stick it in the lock. " tum ye filmi harkatein tension ke time hi kyin karti ho? Tumhe filmei dekhna bandh kardena chahiye!" shravan angry whispered at her. Sumo.looked up, she was annoyed because her hair was coming off and now this idiot was whisper yelling at her. " lecture mat do aur chup chaap mujhe cover karo!" she said, pulling all her hair towards one side and getting to work, picking the lock. Shravan who had decided to stand close but behind her was dumbfounded. He couldn't take his eyes off of Sumo. Actually, her back. She was right in front of him,  with all her hair on one shoulder, her back exposed to him along with a shoulder. A smooth line ran down the.middle of her back, ending at the small of it. The curves of her waist were making him feel jot under the collar. Shravan tried his hard to look away but his senses refused to listen to him. His heaft was thumping irregularly and his palms were aching to feel.her smooth skin. Sumo, unaware of his condition,kept working in the lock. Shravan's belly monster was roaring, it was jumping as he unconciously raised one hand and almost put it on her smooth skin. Sumo stood up properly and she could feel shravan breathing down her neck behind her. Her body tensed up, feeling his breath on her as she gave a final twist to the lock and the door clicked open. 

Shravan woke up from his daze and they both walked into the roomm. It took the guy some time to normalize himself. They looked through drawers and cupbaords. " magnetic ink? Aur khaali bond papers!" shravan whispered at sumo, as they looked through a drawer in the cupboard. So Khosla was not only faking papers,but also cheques. They also find a crumpled piece of paper and open it. BINGO! It was a failed attempt at duplicating an original copy. Shravan and sumo gave each other a victorious smile and shravan quickly put the paper in the inside pocket of his blazer.  suddenly there were footsteps in the corridor, so they quickly hid, once the footsteps had passed, they snuck out of the room and out the back door. All that adventure and hiding has sped up their hearbeats. 
They stopped by the bar and sumo got a glass of water. She drank it half and put it down. Shravan unconciously picked up the glass and drank from it too. After their laboured breathing became normal. Shravan turned to look at sumo. Her eyes had gone wide and she was staring at him with an expression he couldn't quite comprehend. She kept looking at his lips and that confused him even.more. Sumo could not express what she was seeing and what her brain was thinking. Somewhere between wanting to laugh and embarassed, warm and fuzzy. Shravan's lips had pink stains on it. Because he drank from the glass. Her lipstick. He drank from the same side. " kya?", he asked and sumo, feeling courageous moved closer to him and grabbed his face with both her hands. Shravan's mind was blown. WHAT WHAT IS SHE DOING? Why is she putting her hands on me?! How do i not to do the same to her?!  Shravan thought. Suman moved on of her thumbs and swiped them against his lips and looked him.in the eye. The air around them crackled. Shravan's mind was in a state of blindinging light. Once and then twice she rubbed his lips with her thumb while he stood there unable to move and his fists balled up. What was she doing? He wanted to grab her by her waist and plant a long one those pink lips of hers so baddd. Her eyes were doting on his and shravan's belly monster was roaring fire inside him. "Lipstick lag gayi thi" she whispered, inches away from his lips. And then he realized what she was doing. Oh goodness gracious. She moved away from him with a smirk and said " chalein?".

 Shravan could not believe it. The tables had turned and how. Just yesterday it was him making her feel uneasy and today she had taken it to another level. Sumo had a knowing smirk on her face as they started to walk out the party and Shravan knew why. She had done that on purpose. As a revenge. But what remained a question was, did she feel the same thing yesterday, what she made him fele today? 

Sumo felt like she had won a big game. Not.only from shravan but from herself. She got so close to kissing him, she almost wanted to, but she just wanted to avenge what he had done to her, so she controlled herself. 

Hey guys! Hope you like it! Do leave comments, critiques and suggestions! :) 
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really enjoyed reading it. Do continue soon! X
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was awsum as always 
really loved it very much 
Update soon 
Waiting for next part 
Love Ishita 

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Really awe sum 

Write more update soon 


Gutter mind on roll🥱
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
That was a superb update ...do continue ðŸ˜ƒ Enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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you did well for ur 1st time, keep writing