OS : The Curious Case of Shyam Manohar Jha

Shyamwa pe full fledged OS  let me read and come back

Though i never saw the show you portrayed everything beautifully.👏

You are a great writer 👏  this OS was brilliantly written weaving shyam's little tales of how the people around him, the situation and oh the air too, everything was so insensitive to him😆 bechara! 

Wow !!!!! Mind Blowing ...
Different though ...
You expressed Shyam's thoughts beautifully ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ...

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What a wonderful depiction of that scene!
I loved the twist you had of SMJ attempting to turn into a new leaf influenced by paternal love, quite the opposite of what had happened in the show.
His was indeed a very curious case. Much more potential than the single dimensional villain portrayed.
His almost clinical and detached assessment of Anjali was really spot on.
Very well written OS :)

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Though i never saw the show you portrayed everything beautifully.👏

Thanks for the pm dear

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles

You are a great writer 👏  this OS was brilliantly written weaving shyam's little tales of how the people around him, the situation and oh the air too, everything was so insensitive to him😆 bechara! 

Beautifully written

Originally posted by: 7APK

Wow !!!!! Mind Blowing ...
Different though ...
You expressed Shyam's thoughts beautifully ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ...

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Originally posted by: Junglebee

awesome OS