Shopping Blues ~ A DevAkshi Two Shot (Completed Pg 4)!! - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever



Ohh dear! That was lightning fast!πŸ˜†πŸ˜³


Aapse fast nahi tha madam. πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG that's such an adorable ts
Totally in love it 
I really like sonakshi's character 
Please do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's so so good and I needed it like a tonic after today's episode. Thanks Mahi πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mahi ( hope i can address you like this)
This was beautiful! Its seriously a notch higher than the previous one so brush aside any thoughts of this not being up to the mark. 
I love how i can visualise all that u write in my head. And trust me, that's huge girl. I have a ton of things running through my mind. Most of it is pointless things. 
Lol here i was supposed to write a tragic one shot on twinkle amd kunj and here i am smiling like an idiot after reading this
So imma gonna stop here before i eat up more of ur time
This was awesome. 
Don't doubt youself 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just read it in one go. Loved the both part.  Perfectly written down for Dev n sona. 

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Posted: 8 years ago
MahiπŸ€—
so nice😳😳😳
hilarious loved itπŸ˜†
ma da laadla bigad gayaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mahishee it was an awesome entertaining piece and I loved it but yeah as you said we expected more...but don't lose heart. We know you're a great writer and will write awesome stories :)
And sona's dialogues were toh phadooo!!! ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Just read it in one go. Loved the both part. Perfectly written down for Dev n sona.



Arrey aalina...tum bhi yahan.
Wow amazing !!!!
I guess this forum is so magnetic that all
Known people of mine love this show.and devAkshi
😊 πŸ˜ƒEdited by ananya925 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mastt thaa ekdum
mazza aa gaya
after reading that chat wala line even I feel like having chat :p
Do write more please
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Posted: 8 years ago
WOW!!!!
Super cute update...awesome.

I loved this Sonakshi a lot.

Thanks for the PM.