Shopping Blues ~ A DevAkshi Two Shot (Completed Pg 4)!! - Page 2

Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
Damn I love this! <3

Thanks dear😳

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bhshre95
Cute OS. N loved the sibling bond especially dev-neha n dev scared of. Going wid. Saloni ws hilarious😆
N sonakshi is such a drama queen😆
Plz continue soon..., loved it

Hey

Thank you so much

Saloni can be scary.. Brrr😆😉

Sonakshi is definetly a drama queen

U will get to see more of drama

Thanks again!

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Ragini.
God this is amazing
I love it
You are hands down an awesome writer
I could visualise all this in my mind, thats itself shows what an amazingly written story this is
Thank you for the pm
Looking forward to more stories

Hey Ragini

Omg!! Such a big compliment! Am not that good yaar😃

Your welcome dear

Thanks a lot

Am very happy u enjoyed it

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Great! Great! Great!
( wait. Did it sound like Sale! Sale! Sale!?)😆😆😆
Anyways, it was a wonderful part!!
And not to forget, a hilarious part🤣
I just loved it.
but I was thinking ki agar shopping mall mein devakshi ko saloni dekhti toh kitna achha hota!!😆😆😉
Do write more...

Hey Aditi

Lol😆

Spoiler: You are thinking right dear😉

Saloni ki story aage aayegi

Thanks a ton

Glad u found it loving and funny😛

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya925
Mahishee mahishee mahishee...
It was superrr se uperrr!!!!?!!
You made my day...muaahhh!!!!!! Love you so so so much...aapke charan kahan hain?????
Choone ka man hai!!!!
You know I promised people in tashan e ishq to write an ff and here I am busy reading your os...
Yaar plzz continue soon or I'll sach mein die...:p

Awww <3

Ananya dear...

Am not that good.. No charan and all pls😆

Yaa I'll write the second part soon

Hopefully tomorrow😃

And I'll read your story soon too

Thank you veryyy much😃😳

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ramya06

Arey vaah! Maza aa gaya yaar sachme. Poor dev. 😆 Biological encyclopedia ko jhelna padega. 😆 😛 Loved the bonding of dev and his sisters. Awesome girl! 👏

Love
Your firstie forever 😉 😳

My adorable firstie!! Ramya di!!

Thanks a lot di

Appreciation from you is a big thing as always for me😳

Love you too <3

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ritu_0117
Awesome,fantabulous, jhakaas!!! jitna kaha jaaye utna kam hai.
Beautifully written and is damn cute.

Plz continue writing more...

your writings is encouraging me to write something by myself😆

Hey Ritu

Thank you thank you very much!

That's great! I'll be the happiest person if u do that... Next time a fiction from you then!

Thanks again dear

U saying that was very inspiring for me too😃

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NEIRAlover
Mahishee it's awesome...and very cute.
I am in love with your writing.

Loved Sonakshi...a perfect drama queen.

Write the next part as fast as possible.

Thanks for the PM.

Hey Aayushi!

Thank you so much dear

Yaa I'll write soon

My pleasure😳

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Mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Amrtina
It's just awesome👏

Thanks dear😃

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Gargi

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Posted: 8 years ago

@Mahi, sabbash meri bachhi ! Darun ! Very well written. Couldn't wait for the part 2 because iss mein Devakshi thodi kam thi ! 😭

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