Shopping Blues ~ A DevAkshi Two Shot (Completed Pg 4)!!

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Posted: 2016-03-07T02:04:35Z

Hey guys!! Thank you for such a fab response on my first one!

It motivated me so much that I sat down straight to write a second one!


Note: It's not exactly a continuation but some facts are related to my first OS, so incase you haven't read it, here's the link:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4583051



The scenario of the OS doesn't match the serial events



                        Two Shot :Shopping Blues





Dikshit Mansion


The House was bubbling with activities... People were running here and there to make arrangements of the D Day. It was Neha's engagement after all! Dev didn't want that anything was left behind and he strived to make each preparation perfect.


Dev: Bhaiyya Zara dekhna, woh Phool ki ladi thodi tedhi hai. Use seedha kar do.


Aree Bunty! Ab aa raha hai Tu! Jaa, jaakar dekh catering waale aaye yaa nahi. Unko rasoi dikha dena please.


Bunty: Aree Dev! Itna tension Kyun le raha hai Bhai... Sab theek se Ho jaayega... Pakka


Dev smiled at his assurance.

Just then, he heard Ishwari talking a bit firmly to his sisters.


Ishwari: Nikki! Riya! Kitni baar samjhaya hai tum dono ko... Beta Jo hai tumhaare pass woh pehen lo naa. Maine kaha naa, Neha ki shaadi mein pakka dono ko naye lehenge dilwaayongi. Par please, Abhi Jo hai, usmese pehen lo.


Both of them hung their head down. But somewhere they hoped that this melodrama caught the attention of their darling Dev bhaiyya so that they could have their wishes fulfilled. And it worked.


Dev walked upto them.


Dev: Kya hua Maa?


Ishwari: Kuch nahi Dev! Tum jaoo Beta, Apna kaam karo


But he could sense the tensed atmosphere. So he signalled his sister's to come out and meet him. They jumped in joy and after Ishwari left , they ran outside.


They went outside and stood behind him, with a swollen face.


Dev: Hmm .. So meri pyaari behene Mujhse naraaz hai. Kya hua deviyon?

He tried to laugh but then they meant business.


Nikki: Mat kahiye humein behen!


Dev: Lagata hai mamla bohot serious hai...


Riya: Toh nahi toh kya bhaiyya! Dekhiye naa! Maa humein apne puraane kapde pehene ko bol rahi hai. Aap hi batao? Neha di ki sagaai mein, agar unki young, beautiful, princess jaisi behene puraane kapde pehengi toh kaisa lagega?


Nikki: Bhaiyya ab aap hi kuch kijiye, aap karenge naa?


She pleaded with tears in her eyes. Melodrama at its peak.


Dev: Are re! Itni Badi nainsafi! Woh bhi meri beheno ke saath! Main nahi hono doonga!


Nikki: Yayyy! Thank you bhaiyya! 

Rita: Aap duniya ke sabse acche bhai!


Both of them hugged him tight.


Dev: Dekha Bhagwan! Ek hug ke liye kya kya karna padta hai!


All of them giggled and Dev went straight to his room.

He picked up his wallet and was about to leave when


Ishwari: Dev tum kahin jaa rahe Ho?


Dev turned behind to find Ishwari along with Saloni.


Dev: Woh main... Maa... Bass





Neha: Aree Bhai! Aap nikale nahi?

Bunty: Haan Dev , Tu toh Abhi tak nikala hi nahi...


Dev had a confused expression on his face.


Neha: Now don't tell me Bhai ke aap gifts lene jaana Bhool gaye! 

She said winking at him. And now it occurred to him that he was being saved.


Dev: Haaan.. Yaad aaya. Wahi toh Maa, main keh raha that ke humaare samdhiyon ke liye gifts lene jaane the.


Ishwari had a dejected look on her face.


Ishwari: Accha Beta, main toh Soch rahi thi ke agar tum free Ho toh Saloni ko shopping le jaoo.


Dev had a certain amount of horror on his face. That chipkooo worm,that too for shopping no way!


Saloni: Areee tum akele jaa rahe Ho, main help karoon gifts ki shopping ke liye?


Dev was disgusted. 


"Dev socho, Beta Soch le. You will be dead.", he was thinking in his mind.


Neha: Saloni , Bhai actually kisi aur ko shopping le jaa raha hai. I mean kisi aur ke saath shopping jaa raha hai.


Dev(in thoughts): Kya? Kiske saath? Mujhe toh koi batao!


Bunty: Chal yaar, der Ho rahi hai!


The three of them left the room, with Ishwari and Saloni left puzzled.



Outside


Dev: Mujhe bura lag raha hai yaar, Maa se jooth bola

Bunty: Oo Bhai! Ek baar jooth bol liya toh pahad nahi toot pada. Sach mein, Tere jaisa ladla toh dekha hi nahi Maine!


Dev: Aur Neha...


He asked twisting her ears.


Dev: Main kisi aur ke saath jaa raha Hoon...? Accha?

Neha: Are Bhai! Ouuch! Woh kuch samajh nahi aaya. Koi nahi, Abhi jaakar Saloni ko bata doon ke...


Dev: Haan Haan bass bass... Ab kya karein? Woh chipkooo pakka dekhne aayegi.


Bunty: Toh Sonakshi ko le jaa naa!

Dev: Kya? Woh dietician! No way!


Neha: Aur koi option nahi hai Bhai... Aapke dhyan mein hai koi?


Dev was left speechless. He had to bear with that biological encyclopaedia. But waise bhi he was going to need someone to help him out in shopping.


Dev: Theek hai!



And he left for her office.



Bunty: Ab aayega naa mazaa!


Neha: Bechara! Soch bhi nahi sakta ki humaara plan tha... Humne hi Maa aur Saloni ko bataaya tha ki woh shopping jaa raha hai... Hehehe... Aap toh bura phase Bhai! Ab jhelo usko...


Bunty: Dev ki band bajaane mein hamesha mazaa hi aata hai... Aur life mein thodi taang kheechayi, thoda mazaa toh hona hi chahiye!


Both of them giggled and went in. Poor Dev!



In Sonakshi's Office


Sonakshi: Main... Woh bhi shopping... Tum chole bhature waale khadoos ke saath? No way!


Dev: Kitni baar kaha? Mujhe Chole bhature nahi pasand! Aur main please bol raha noon naa? Ab kya haath paer jodoon?


Sonakshi: I don't mind... Heheee


She giggled.


Sonakshi: Accha theek hai, ab roo mat... Aa rahi hoon


She grabbed her belongings and went out.


Dev: Kya? Main kab roya? Ufff! Yeh ladki!





Love

Mahishee.









Edited by Artist_Forever - 2016-03-09T11:14:38Z
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Posted: 2016-03-07T02:25:23Z
Damn I love this! <3
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Posted: 2016-03-07T03:09:43Z
Cute OS. N loved the sibling bond especially dev-neha   n dev scared of. Going wid. Saloni ws hilariousLOL
N sonakshi  is  such a drama queenLOL
Plz continue soon..., loved it
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Posted: 2016-03-07T03:11:26Z
God this is amazing
I love it
You are hands down an awesome writer
I could visualise all this in my mind, thats itself shows what an amazingly written story this is
Thank you for the pm
Looking forward to more stories
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Posted: 2016-03-07T03:49:45Z
Great! Great! Great!
( wait. Did it sound like Sale! Sale! Sale!?)LOLLOLLOL
Anyways, it was a wonderful part!! 
And not to forget, a hilarious partROFL
I just loved it.
but I was thinking ki agar shopping mall mein devakshi ko saloni dekhti toh kitna achha hota!!LOLLOLWink
Do write more...
Edited by .FlyingClouds. - 2016-03-07T03:52:29Z
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Posted: 2016-03-07T03:57:31Z
Mahishee mahishee mahishee...
It was superrr se uperrr!!!!?!!
You made my day...muaahhh!!!!!! Love you so so so much...aapke charan kahan hain?????
Choone ka man hai!!!!
You know I promised people in tashan e ishq to write an ff and here I am busy reading your os...
Yaar plzz continue soon or I'll sach mein die...:p
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Posted: 2016-03-07T03:58:22Z
Originally posted by .Ragini.


God this is amazing
I love it
You are hands down an awesome writer
I could visualise all this in my mind, thats itself shows what an amazingly written story this is
Thank you for the pm
Looking forward to more stories

Rags you too...ur here..
Arrey wah maza as gayi :)
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Posted: 2016-03-07T04:08:53Z
Originally posted by ramya06


Res first

Arey vaah! Maza aa gaya yaar sachme. Poor dev. LOL Biological encyclopedia ko jhelna padega. LOL Tongue Loved the bonding of dev and his sisters. Awesome girl! Clap

Love
Your firstie forever Wink Embarrassed
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