Originally posted by: sugunmanas
hey Mahi hope u don't mind if i call u so
Its really amazing👏
u wrote very well👏
i loved it😳
do write more😃
Originally posted by: ankithasushma
Hey there
First, hats off its amazing
Keep writing
Keep up the good work
He started the car and they drive to a high profile showroom. It was extremely popular for its well known designer collection of lehengas. The cream public of Delhi preferred it in their festive shopping.
Sonakshi: Yahan?! Aree tumhe pata hai? Shopping ke naam par loot lete hain yeh log! Jab tak pocket khaali naa ho, chodte hi nahi. Meri suno, Lajpatnagar chalo. Wahan Ek se Ek lehenge milte hain. Aur budget ke liye bhi accha Rahega.
Ab time waste mat karo, chalo
Dev: Tum Ho saath mein toh alag se time waste karne ki kya zaroorat hai?
He muttered to himself.
Sonakshi: Kuch kaha tumne?
Dev: Nahi kuch nahi...
After a while, they reach Lajpatnagar.
There was a lot of hustle bustle there. Colourful clothes hung from the shop windows in showcase for public. The entire place was crowded and bubbling in activity.
Sonakshi took Dev to a small shop in a corner.
Sonakshi,: Delhi ke best lehenge milte hain yahan...
The salesman emerged from the backdoor.
Man: Madam Aayiye! Aaj aapko kya bataaon?
Dev: Bhaiyya woh Maroon lehenga dikhaana Zara...
Sonakshi: Ewww...! Maroon! Ek jawaan, beautiful ladki ke liye maroon jaisa dull colour sirf tum khadoos hi Soch sakte Ho!
Bhaiyya woh bright yellow waala bataana?
The man gave her a lemon yellow lehenga with a green border.
Sonakshi: Ab yeh hui naa baat! Ab batao, kaisa hai?
Dev: Hmm... Theek hai. Nikki ke liye accha hai.
Sonakshi: Aur woh baby pink waala?
Dev: No no, Riya ko pink nahi pasand
Sonakshi: Toh phir woh orange waala?
Dev: Dekho woh...
Sonakshi tried it on her herself to show him the look...
Dev: Accha hai!
Sonakshi: Dekha! Sonakshi ki nazar, Cheeteh ki chaal aur Bajirao ki talvar par sandeh nahi karte!
Dev: Thoda suna Suna lag raha hai...
Sonakshi: Picture dekho bacchu!
She ran out while Dev got busy paying the bill.
When Dev came out, he couldn't find her in the crowd.
He started looking around and finally spotted her on a chaat stall.
Dev: Ab aaya naa uooth pahand ke neeche! Woh din bade bade lecture de rahi this, ab dekhta hoon.
He tiptoed Till the stall and then suddenly snatched away the plate from her hand!
Dev: Ohhoo! Ab dekho toh kaun oily food khaa raha hai! Ab kahan gaya lipid level, Diabetes? Huh? Chole bhature khaane chala toh kitna kuch bola tha... Ab kya?
He saw her staring at him. Rather glaring at him.
Dev: Kya?
Sonakshi: Ho gayi bakbak? Aa gaaya mazaa?
Dev: Matlab?
Sonakshi: Matlab yeh ke bolne se pehle thoda dekh lena chahiye... Inn bacchon ko dila rahi thi chaat!
Dev looked around him to find street kids lined up near the stall. She was buying them food! And what nonsense had he blared out!
He hung his head low and sat down in his car.
Sonakshi joined him after paying the dues and the journey back home was quite quiet. Finally, when they arrived at her office,
Dev: Woh sorry... Maine dekha nahi..
Sonakshi: Haan Haan theek hai! Jaoo maaf kiya!
Aur agar tum ab thanks bol doge to bukhaar nahi ho jaayega
Dev: Ummm... Thanks for coming
Sonakshi: Sirf thanks se kaam nahi chalega
Dev: Toh?
Sonakshi: Woh pink lehenga yaad hai? Mere liye bhijvaa dena!
She winked at him and got out.
Dev was left speechless.
Dev: Bhagwaan! Kya saari ladkiyaan aisi hoti hain?!
Dev returned home smiling after the day's events. Neha and Bounty were left angry at this.
Neha: Dekhna padega... Bhai itna khush!
While Bunty was busy singing:
Maa da ladla bigad gaaya...
PS: I felt that this part wasn't up to the mark, specially in comparison to the first one... And I may have failed to reach to your expectations
Next time I'll try harder😊
Love
Mahishee😃
So the two shot ends here! Hope to meet you soon with another interesting tale😃
Res first again! 😛
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