Shopping Blues ~ A DevAkshi Two Shot (Completed Pg 4)!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Again wonderful part!

You really made it funny😊

And again I was laughing like hell🤣

Originally posted by: ramya06

Wow! Again a cute and hilarious update! 👏 😆 ⭐️ "Sonakshi ki nazar, cheeteh ki chaal aur bajirao ki talvar par sandeh nahi karte! " 🤣 And dev, "Suna suna lag raha hai! "🤣 Chat for street kids and dev ko mehanga pad gaya! 😆 😆 Awesome Mahishee. 👏

Originally posted by: diksha0102

Awesome 😊

Originally posted by: -Haju-

OMG that's such an adorable ts

Totally in love it 

I really like sonakshi's character 

Please do write more

Originally posted by: AnnaPaquinFan

It's so so good and I needed it like a tonic after today's episode. Thanks Mahi 🤗

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Mahi ( hope i can address you like this)

This was beautiful! Its seriously a notch higher than the previous one so brush aside any thoughts of this not being up to the mark. 

I love how i can visualise all that u write in my head. And trust me, that's huge girl. I have a ton of things running through my mind. Most of it is pointless things. 

Lol here i was supposed to write a tragic one shot on twinkle amd kunj and here i am smiling like an idiot after reading this

So imma gonna stop here before i eat up more of ur time

This was awesome. 

Don't doubt youself 

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Just read it in one go. Loved the both part.  Perfectly written down for Dev n sona. 

Originally posted by: sugunmanas

Mahi🤗

so nice😳😳😳

hilarious loved it😆

ma da laadla bigad gaya😆😆😆

Originally posted by: ananya925

Mahishee it was an awesome entertaining piece and I loved it but yeah as you said we expected more...but don't lose heart. We know you're a great writer and will write awesome stories :)
And sona's dialogues were toh phadooo!!! ;)

Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS

Mastt thaa ekdum
mazza aa gaya
after reading that chat wala line even I feel like having chat :p
Do write more please