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Rishita Jain

@RishitaJain

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#571

I guess,

I am again short of words!!

How would any of the words do any justice to such a beautiful chapter.

Your are truly an amazing writer Jigs.

Throughout the chapter one feels a myriad of emotions.

From being apprehensive while khushi was in the hospital to laughing out loud reading ari and papa's version of Mahi ve.

The list goes on...

The best part however was the little Aneri thinking that there's a monster in mama's tummy.😲

She really does get such brilliant ideas!😆

The every little part of the chapter had a different story to tell...

Ari calling their baby as hers.😃

And finally the last but not the least

khushi and Arnav's apprehensions going away listening to their baby's heartbeats and their daughters giggles .😳

Arnav and khushi are really very lucky to have such a cute bundle of joy as their daughter .

They have come a long way finally leaving the disturbing memories behind.

Hope the new baby brings even more happiness in the little Raizada family.

Will love to see Ari as the big sister.

Take care and enjoy.

Rishita.

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#572

Unres on pg 66 😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4581752&PID=132164645&#p132164645

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#573

That was such a wonderful update...

Aneri is sweet and understanding girl, unnecessarily Kushi scared of sharing the news wiht Aneri but she is more than ready to accept one one to their family...

True, this family deserves happiness...

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#574

I guessed from the teasers that khushi might be pregnant and so happy that she is. Reading abt khushi's condition reminded me of my own horrible pregnancy with my first child, like khushi, I kept vomiting till the day I gave birth and by that time I suffered so much pain that I couldn't feel the labour pain as painful as they are.

Aneri was so cute when she was scared of khushi's baby bump and thought that there's a monster inside. The way she checked her papa's and her own stomach made me go aww. In this story u have made these characters so real that rather than fictional characters, Arnav, khushi and Aneri feels like a regular family real family and as a writer u should be proud of yourself for achieving this feat.

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barunmaniac

@barunmaniac

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#575

thank you for the pm di...

the update was fantastic as always...

it was so amazing...i loved it so much

you are an amazing writer and i love to read your work so much

sad that revealed is going to end soon 😭

will look forward to reading more of your work...

😊

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#576

What can I say... this update was amazing. I absolutely loved it

I really loved the father daughter bonding. It is very very very special.
Aneri will be a wonderful lawyer like her mother if she choose to be a one.
Sometimes aneri can be so cute yaar... I mean extra cute. She is always cute. She actually told khushi that arnav is responsible for the house's state. And arnav went speechless

And now the best part..khushi is pregnant. And this time nothing can go wrong. Because she has arnav and also aneri with her. I loved the way how they broke tje news to aneri. 'A monster in tummy' only aneri can come up with something like that. And aneri being aneri accepted it with her awesome dancing

The little time with the doctor was amazing. Aneri got see her brother or sister. Even I think it is a brother. Time would tell

Will be waiting for the next update

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Hi Jigs!

From the time I started reading Revealed till now, it has been such a roller-coaster ride.

I can't believe that this story is headed towards the very end but it has been a pleasure reading this story.

Right from Arnav-Khushi's tumultuous relationship in the very beginning, to their journey of re-discovering their love, of cementing their relationship and then finally, reaching at the threshold of their new beginning.

The whole process of making Aneri accept them, of her overcoming her fears and them braving all hurdles together was just so beautiful, I was feeling the happiness of your characters. All the new characters, as I had mentioned earlier, are just so wonderfully sketched, it is absolutely marvelous.

I can imagine the kind of emotions you would have gone through while writing it all, and it turned out to be just so beautiful!

I really can't stop gushing about just how much I am in love with our little Aneri. The first half of the story, I was thoroughly in love with Sofia, but as soon as Aneri came in, she worked her magic on me, just like she does on everyone in the story. It is just so nice to read that she has accepted her Ocean Uncle and Princess Aunty as her mumma and papa😃

All your chapters are just so relatable and utterly gripping. The way they blend into the whole idea, and lead from one to another is just commendable.

I had to read the story on the blog, and when I saw those hints for Chapter 45, it was all Dhak Dhak...!

But I am so happy for Arnav and Khushi in this story. The puzzle that was their life till an year ago now seems to be complete, with every piece falling perfectly into place. Especially, Aneri and then the pregnancy. I almost jumped when I read that...the perfect Raizada family😳

Thank you for presenting to us a story that is Revealed!

Also, obviously I did come across the note about plagiarism of your stories. I had not been reading anything for the past couple of months, but when I came across the note I was absolutely shocked. It is really not new on IF and being a writer myself, I am appalled at the extent of shamelessness people go down to. Some of the most wonderful writers have taken down their stories just because of this and I can only try and imagine what you would have gone through. But honestly, I am so so so happy, just like Aneri says that you came out strong and took the decision of moving forward and completing this story that so many of us live because that is what that plagiarist deserves. Kudos to you for taking this decision! Also, I know the kind of hard work that goes in to making and designing blogs and I must say, both your blogs are so lovely, it shows that you have put them up from your heart :)

I would love to read the final chapters soon! Please keep writing😊

Love,

Navika

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albmum14

@albmum14

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: LadyR
Baat vishwas ki hai .. My vishwas is Aneri bought luck, happiness with her ...

Life gives us hope heartache and everything in between.. The struggle made Arnav and Khushi so, so grateful for when Aneri graced their lives . This little angel bestowed untold happiness and joy upon them both .. She united a family ..

Is it a mere coincidence that the new baby at Ashiyana is named Arjun - another ASR -if they adopt him too !!! Aneri has persuasive skills ...

Where was the tissue box alert ... The realization of pregnancy... her hesitancy ...most of us have been here and beyond ...My tears were for all the little ones that God holds dearly with him and for the precious life Khushi carries within her ...

Their fears are founded and understood .. It's easier when you have an understanding partner..

Kids are so astute and our Aneri is none the less... A monster in mommys tummy is a scary thought. But she embraced this news with such zest and her dance !!!

I'm happy for them.. There is no one as deserving as this family.. But this journey is slowly edging toward an end .. This saddens me immensely ...

I enjoyed reading your comment LadyR.

I agree with your points and I envy how well you summarised the chapter.

@ Underlined: I am unsure what you mean by that sentence. Which family did she unite?

I think Khushi and Arnav were already united and committed to their marriage by then, by solving all their issues. I don't think children unite the spouses, their love and desire to be together and to continue the marriage is what unites them.

Or did you mean that she united Arnav and Avinash again?

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albmum14

@albmum14

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: Anu567

Jigs,

Stupendous. Take a bow. It gets more poignant as anticipated, as we get ready to wind the curtains down on Revealed. I totally loved the chapter. And as I guessed, that was a red herring wala teaser...haha! So Khushi and Arnav will have their own flesh-and-blood Raizada baby, and Aneri is enjoying the protective older sister role already. Totally loved the Khushi with her emotions all over the place...this was a very Khushi chapter and rightfully so, she is the one having the baby! Something tells me it will be a boy. Hai na Jigs? For the semblance of balance in our ArShi's world!! Normally it is your Arnav that sweeps me away, but Khushi proved really stellar today, in so many scenes...the one where she breaks the news to Arnav and then tells him they will always love Aneri more, was just amazing.

The infinite beauty of parenting and how important it is to be subtle among children so beautifully brought out too...or is it really a girl thing, I often wonder? Parents of girls are so much more tactful, scared of upsetting their equilibrium and sense of rightness in their world. As a mother of two boys, I realize I never did those things with either of them - growing up, we always told them exactly what was going on, they were as ensconced in our fights and arguments as we were...hmm..food for thought...and yes, of course, this need not be gender driven at all. It could just be a difference in parenting styles after all. I loved how they thought of breaking the news to her carefully, but she, the smart ASR that she is, cottoned on earlier and realized her mother was unwell...such a beautiful scene Arnav finding her under the bed like that with Binny and Balgopal! 🤗

Of course Arnav and Khushi are naturally anxious...after the last time. But as we have seen time after time, little Aneri is their good luck charm. With her around it is a no brainier that all will be well and she will have the brother she wants. Of course, God listens to kids!

Loved it all meri jaan, now bring on the fanfare and the finale. Aane do! 🥳

Hugs,

Anu

I adore this Anu!

First of all, for pointing out that it was from Khushi's perspective, like the prologue was. It showed that we came full circle, we see her happiness and how it has removed all those worries of over 2 years ago.

Secondly, for the thoughts on bringing up boys and girls. I agree. I tend to notice parents be more direct with boys, and more concerned on how girls will react to something. I think it has more to do with how perceptive girls are of the equilibrium or the status quo. Boys, I have seen, are more accepting of change. But also that is related to other factors too: age, settling in a new environment (new place, new family member), personality, etc.

Such a beautiful comment!

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#580

Beautiful update Jigs. Your writing is flawless dear...and a reader like us will always be glued to your stories...We live the moments as you depict in your story.

Loved both father and daughter and their conversations. They are pregnant, I am so happy for Aneri and ARSHI. Cute moments...monster in mummy's tummy. Very cute moments they all are sharing with each other. Our Favorite Raizadas are going to be a family of four...Aneri and her baby. A girl whom everyone thought is unlucky for her family and now she is proved lucky for her parents.