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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Ashu25


I have a doubt
While Suvi was talking to Nihar , Neel kahan dekh raha tha ?
ROFL
Maaro mat mujhe
Genuine doubt tha ji


He keeps looking at her full lips Ashu, he would hv looked at her lips this time too but this time I feel ki he would hv noted that inspite of catching her during one of her weak moments , how those lips were trying hard to not quiver and how she was trying to not let go of her tears , holding herself up well in front of his son.
Posted: 5 years ago
Chalo now real good night from me.
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Errantnomad


Originally posted by Ashu25


I have a doubt
While Suvi was talking to Nihar , Neel kahan dekh raha tha ?
ROFL
Maaro mat mujhe
Genuine doubt tha ji


He keeps looking at her full lips Ashu, he would hv looked at her lips this time too but this time I feel ki he would hv noted that inspite of catching her during one of her weak moments , how those lips were trying hard to not quiver and how she was trying to not let go of her tears , holding herself up well in front of his son.

Bahut emotional explanation tha ji
Main kuch nahi bolti ab
Posted: 5 years ago
This was just a beautiful update Nisha...Loneliness can affect at any age or social status or gender.Cry 
Suvi's empathy is just beautiful.  Someone who has gone thru what she has could tend to become cold and possibly hard.  

Seriously, I am reading the update for like the 4th time---it is really beautiful, Nisha.  Thank you!!!Hug

Posted: 5 years ago
I just started reading this FF too and I am really liking it so far.

Posted: 5 years ago
Bruised

Tuesday to thursday was quite stressful for her as Paakh wanted the preliminary "creative theme" from McKinsey & Morrison, to beat a supposed launch by a rival Essence (of nature)
Between trying to let go of her daughter and commuting from Trans Yamuna at 1 PM Suvechha dropped multiple balls
She loved advertizing and PR she was good at the creative stuff, her Aai had suggested she must try out some other creative things to see if she could extend the spark
These days Suvi wished she had an outlet, singing or playing the sitar or something
Would take the bite out of being lonely

She considered having Aadhya do something instead, for now
She didnt have unlimited supply of money
She lived in a rental and cared for two people

Now and then Rutwik's acquaintance from Mumbai would call or text her to get a "feel" for where she was so they could come "see" her
She would give each person a different location

She was not on social media either, what began as an exercise to flee Rutwik some how stuck after she moved to Delhi
She was not high enough on McKinsey's org chart to have her name plastered on their Delhi website


"Toone khaali Tuesday taq ka kaha tha, tu Wed ko bhi uske bus ke peechhe lag gayi?" Gomez asked loudly standing at her door

"Chhoti hai, Gomez" Suvi whispered trying to paste an image on a story board on screen

"Essence ka campaign launch ho gaya Saturday ko Paakh will pull out" he warned

"I am sorry" Suvi paused

"Sorry ka kya fayda Suvi..." Gomez said preoccupied lookint at text... "Tier 2, Tier 3 cities ke TV spots ke liye agree kar gaya Trademax?" "Usko bolne ka na,
 baaqi kisi ko visual effects, animation mein itna discount nahi dete baba"


"Baat nahi hui Gomez" Suvi said in a strained tone, "will u get out now?" look on her face


"I am meeting with the sunscreen brand today, they only want some licensed music for their shit Suvi, tu archive dekhkar apun ko ke list dene ka"


"Done Gomez... abhi please" she begged


Payal walked over "Do u have a few minutes, Neel wanted to meet"

"haan" she checked her phone

Followed Payal to Neel's cube

Paakh was there, and some what of a tense argument ensued
Leaving Suvi with a heightened feeling that she should keep the relationship strictly professional

There was no way in hell a VP of Delhi Operations would swear undying love for her
Shes been there done that
Not once but twice

First to a married man, second time to a slimy SOB that spoke of her as a "conquest" "easy lay"

She went about plugging away on Friday, glad when the week was over, chuckled to herself how she was going to do this another 13 years until Aadhya went to college
Realizing she wont even be 40 when Aadhya goes to college
Making her pause and look at her reflection on Saturday after brushing her teeth
She could very well pass off as a single woman
But carried enough scars for a whole continent of women

There was a "open house" at school today between 11-2

Neel had asked her if she was planning on changing Aadhya's after school program, since Aadhya went all the way to NOIDA for school

She had seen his text on Friday evening but not responded
Telling herself the useless chit chat doesnt change anything and he will still be her boss And there is nothing beyond that

Tai was "fasting" she was told
So she made poha and got her daughter ready and they headed out at Noon in the burning heat

Aadhya was wearing a sleeveless floral cotton frock, her arms were red like a apple, sunburned in the first 10 minutes of walkingt o find a auto

"Aai can we go in a car?" Aadhya begged

"U have rich people needs" she scolded her daughter

Suvi was not broke, hardly, she was extremely careful with her money
But considering Delhi summers lasted 8 months, the AC was always on at home and her bill was large enough  to seem like a car loan payment
Even bigger.. in May and June


She paused and pulled Suvi's cotton hat out of her bag, just when she found an auto, it felt like sitting by an open furnace door
The heat was intense

they got to school and wandered, Suvi met her teachers, looked at the "art work" she did posted on the wall

Checked how the bathrooms were

Suvi had two friends, they chased each other in the hallway outside the class

Parents jostled and lingered in the hallway, meeting up, making friends

The woman that checked on her on Monday when she cried against the wall smiled and greeted her
She heard a loud scream and a crash, Suvi had fallen off her chair tearing the skin on her knee

The teacher wasnt too hapy

She wasnt a crazy girl... atleast based on what she was told by the play school owner
But Apeejay was causing her to explore her wild side?

She cried as the first aid box was brought out

Suvi carried her out scolding her softly in Marathi
"Thank God u didnt get blood on your good frock... u need to calm down" "What will the teacher think of you?"


Nihar spotted Aadhya and walked over

"what happened?"

"She fell" Suvi explained

He just stared at her face and knee
Seeing him Aadhya no longer wanted to be carried, she stood or tried to and fell backwards

Hitting her head on the wall in a lil bump

Neel came up as parents walked by chatting

"She is HURT" Nihar informed

"Abhi theek hai" Suvi explained

"Can she come to my house?" Nihar asked

Neel looked startled but thot it was a great idea

Suvi didnt

Aadhya whine and moaned

"We are done too, so may be for a bit?" Neel asked

"Hamey chalna chahiye, paas ke society mein satsang hai Tai ko jaana hai" she said


"Aaai, PLEASE PLEASEEE phakta eka vela... (just one time) Aadhya begged

There was nothing to say, nothing to do at Neel's house

Suvi wasnt sure what she would do there

"apana yethe karu neye" (we shud not be here) she whispered in Aadhya's ear unhappily


"Bahar garmi hai andar chaliye" Neel said politely

"Sorry bachi foolish hai" Suvi said calmly, walking uncomfortably to his side door

He opened it and it was air conditioned

"Aai thyancha gharat thandaaa" (their house is cold) Aadhya declared joyously

"School achha laga?" he asked politely
Hitting all the lights, as the curtains were drawn, it was a lovely house goregously decorated


Suvi stood observing

"Nupur ka idea hai sab" he said

"Nupur hai unka naam?" she asked

She was amazed how he could recreate Nupur's vision in Delhi long after she was gone

The kids were sitting on the sofa playing on Nihar's ipad

"Paani dein aapko?" he asked politely, disappearing into the back room

He brought out water and juice

"Thanks... abhi humko chalna chahiye" "Doc khula hua to ATS ka pata karna hai" she said

There were pictures everywhere, on the walls on the chest of drawers, and on the sofa end tables

She wasnt there, but yet she was

"Kal raat ko kaafi busy theen aap?" he asked

She looked confused

"Text ka jawab nahi diya?" he asked leaning on a chest of drawer drinking his bottle of water, like he waited for her to respond to the text about changing after school programs

"jyaada busy nahi" she said calmly... unwilling to meet his injured? gaze, for the first time she felt a sudden churn in her lower belly
All signs indicating to her that such inquiry is not routine
Posted: 5 years ago
Wow.
The first visit.
And not yet finished.
Waiting impatiently Nisha
Agge kya hua .,
Posted: 5 years ago
Impatient to know wht happened next
Aage kya hua Nisha

LOL

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