#3 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 4 LINK PG 1 - Page 12

Awesome update dear

Kya baat hai...aaj kal update jaldi jaldi mil rahe hai..??!! Haha..Anyways... Todays update was hilarious...itna achha tha..woow...i loved Part A more...! But seriously entire update was like...we r sitting n watching a family drama..bringing all the characters in one particular scene..n writting dialogs n giving imp to every character is a tough job..n u do it So Well..Commendable.. 👏

In starting everybody enjyoing family tym together..u penned this scene flawlessly... I was laughing at maniks n muktis antics alot...n me to went in awww whn nandini instantly turned to Manik...thinking he really has headache...!! 😳 And this dialog of Manik.."pain toh pehle bhi tha bt ab badh gaya.." Hahaha it was so funny..! & this entire scene i enjyoed n laughed at all... Ye Manik & mukti ki bonding u potraying so beautifully...! So the family leaves...n manik phir se chaloo..haha.. 😆 So cute this scene was..she is caring for him so much...awww..! And nandu makes the double tier cake n manik does the decor..!

And this Kitchen scene..wht all i had thought..haha..! Indeed isse achha cream aur kahan milega dono ko..Manan ka bond is so pure..! And thn both making fun of their heights..awwiee..!! The dress the decor cake everything was so beautiful...!! I loved tht 25 years thing pasted with their photograph on wall..this idea of urs was brilliant..well done..! And the entire last scene was adorable..simply pefrect i wld say...my manik is so emotional yaar...! Manik pulled abhis leg...n i was like hello u too r gonna b like this only..may b more...dono bhai ek jaise hai..!

Aaj ka update was full on family moments.. 😊 n i enjoyed it thoroughly..seriously..! Thanx...itni jaldi updaye ke liye..u r the best...muaawwah..! Lots of love
Thanx for the PM
God Bless U

Waise i wanted to ask u something..hv u written any other FF before..pls tell me if u hv.. I love ur writing alot..So I want to read it more..

Aaj ka update was full on family moments.. n i enjoyed it thoroughly..seriously..! Thanx...itni jaldi updaye ke liye..u r the fab writer !

Thanx for the PM
God Bless U

awesome part...
manan moments r cute...
cont...soon

Hey that was really cute update. Really enjoyed all the family moments.
Loving this caring abhi... ...
Nice update. Keep it up.
And happy makar sakranti.

Awesome update,

Loved each and every bit of it. You put so much effort in the story that's why the chapters are so interesting and amazing.

I loved the way you are bringing Manik and Nandini close, it look so real and shows the pure love that is beginning between them.

Finally, the anniversary was here, all arrangements were so beautiful. Everyone is so excited, happy after knowing that Mukti is pregnant...

Looking forward what new twist you got in coming updates...

Update soon

Waiting eagerly

beautiful chapter...!!
cont soon...
happy makar sankranti 😃

superb update ...awesome manan moments ...nandani baked cake cool

this update was sooo cutee dear...manan's relationship is coming on track & i am so happy for this.
and thanx for these fast updates dear...i eagerly wait for your updates dear.