FF: A Bitter Harvest.The End. XIII Pg 74 - Page 5

I am so happy that Jai took the thali away from Pia. I hope Bani makes an apperence tonight. That would be nice. Anyways, I can't wait for the next part.

-Rimpy

Originally posted by: jnawaz

oh hell ya...👏
u tell the jai...
woh besharam pia tumhara kuch nahin lagta...
she is just the witch that destroyed your life...😭😭😭
becaha jai...he misses bani...usse aur ziyada maath tarpaana...😃😃😃
hun u were superb...as usual...
👏
waiting for part 4...hope it comes soon...

PS: im first again...yay...😃😃

JAZ

wow jaz, twice in a row!!!
am impressed...😊
as for JW....well keep reading....😛

armana

Originally posted by: fsam

Armana loved the last statement. Great parts.

 

Congratulations on winning the FF competition.

Thanks fsam.
I loved that statement too!!! was chuckling with glee as i wrote it...

armana

Originally posted by: ziddi

congrats for winning the first place, i hope you also continue that fan fiction 👏
read the two parts
they were mindblowing
after reading them i have lots of questions runing my mind
are Tarun and Bani married?
If they are, its wrong for her to think about Jai
I think Tarun and Bani are living has best friend
its so true men are pertified with small child 😆 😆 😆
the guys i know want hold a baby under 6months especially a new born afraid they will drop it
please write soon

Thanks ziddi,
but i do not plan to continue the temporary marriage.

as for bitter harvest, don't worry all your questions will be answered...and hopefully, to your liking...😊
yes, even i fail to understand men's fear of babies...have a friend who managed to make her husband overcome the fear by telling him to treat the kid like a football, which if he dropped, meant a goal for the other team....😆😆😆
You know what? It worked! Go figure!

BTW, thanks for the beautiful aviies and siggies you guys have created.
can't wait to start using mine!!!😃

Armana

Originally posted by: sangitadas

I am soooooooo proud of Jai for finally giving it to Pia, she really earned it guys 😡

And I am sure Tarun and Bani are staying at the same place as friends. Or am I wrong armana? 😭

Pia deserves all this and more, imho...😡🤢😡

as for the rest....wait my dear, wait....(evil grin in place!!!)😆

armana

that was a superb part.loved it.congrats on winning the ff competition.i really liked your story. 😊

Congratulations on winning the fanfic competition Armana 👏 ...it was truly amazing 👏 .....and i hope that u will keep this fanfic goes aswell. 😳 ...i love it 😳 😳 😳
so Bani has his child and so does Pia huh...well dekte hai kya hota hai...but kuch bhi ho yaar i love the way Jai told her off infront of the entire house...amazing...great job yaar.....

waiting for more..!!! 😳 😳

congrats on winning the competition and good work on this ff keep it up. Like the part when Jai gives it back to Pia, the odesity of her. What about his feelings toward the child, is it one of hatred only? I feel sorry for the poor baby. Looking forward to the next part and rest. 👏

Congrats on winning the FF competition!!!
Love your fanfics!!!
Loved the part when Jai downgrades Pia!!!
Is that child Jai's and PeaBrains---hoping not and hope Jai really didn't touch that filthy creatre called Peabrain!!!

Want Bani and Jai back together....They love each other you could feel it!!!!

Continue soon....

Hi Armana
Loved your ff The Temp Marriage...was so passionate and so well written gave me goosebumps! 😳 Love the way this one is going too...esp the manner in which Jai insults Peabrain...fantastic 👏 👏
Hope Kekta's creatives are reading this and incorporate it into KS as well 😉
cheers
Sim