NIBIR TS- TU MERE PAAS HAI {completed } *page 13* - Page 9

Originally posted by: sam_premc

was busy in matargashti...🤣🤣🤣

dont do so much matargashti warna heer sad ho jaegi 😆

Osom os 👏

Originally posted by: itznimi003

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Mansi... 👏
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Kya likha h yr tune...😊😊

As I had sad earlier...ki Teri taarif k liye word kam pad jate h😊

But aaj to mujhe koi exact word Hi nhi mil ra Jo tere talent k kabil ho...ya bola jaye to shayad AISA koi word Hi nhi bna Jo tujhe describe kr paye...

To I will describe u in yr fav. Word day is "Silence"

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Mere Silence ko samajhne ki koshish krna...usme Teri taarif chhupi h usme wo sare words chhipe h Jo mai kehna chahti hu...

Tu apni writing se har emotion me ek nyi jaan phook deti h yr...

Itne beautiful tarike se likhti h ki padhne wala bas usi me kho kr reh jata h bole to apni writing se hyprotyse...krna koi tujhse sikhe n m totally hyprotised...😳

Tune apni writing se is paglomofied nini ko apne vash me kr lia yr😊

Tere concept ...d way u maturely think about d story...tune to story me soul daal di yr👏❤️

Loved d way u present yr story😊 wo b hmesha ek fresh n touching concept k sath

Mujhe tu apni shishya bna le yr...

Teri writing school me Teri pehli shishya nimi h...😊

SDP Mansi...agar isse bda bhi kuch h to wo b...u know maine bhut novels padhi h...but Teri is story ne mere dil me ghar bna lia yr...

Now coming to yr update❤️

Rula dia yr tune 😭

Kasam se...

Pehle mujhe LGA ki ye normal story h...

But jaise jaise ye story aage badhi I was like

Nibir promise made me cry...yr

I was crying badly...

Dose fb scenes...yaar AisA pyaar to sirf aur sirf apna kabira Hi kr sakta h yr...

Aur mai uske usi pyaar ki deewani hu...

D song u hv choosen filled my heart wid mixed emotions n it was juz perfect❤️

D way he care for her uska sath nhi chhoda...aur usi isi koshish ne nisha k dil me fir se pyaar jga dia...m so touched yr...❤️

But ye kya...tune end suspense me chhod dia😡

Plz plz plz Mansi apni is shishya ki arzi swikaar kr le...aur use TS bna de❤️ pretty plz...

U know u r d bestest written I hv ever seen in my life...

Teri taarif me ye lines...bigadofied by me...

chalao..na apni writing se baam re...
Jaan lelo na jaan re...
Kahin..nikal na jaye...kahin nikal na jaye...
Hmri...body se praan re

Lastly I wanna to say dis...

Tujhme h ek aisi kala...
Jo kr de udaasi ko bhi khushnuma...
Har emotions me daalti h tu ek nyi jaan...
Teri is writing ko h nimi ka salam

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Originally posted by: tanya119

Osom os👏

Loved the way u described their relation in every phase👍🏼

Their nibir wala promisse was sho cute nd emotional too😭

But suspense mei kyu chod diya..🤔

Still...loved it❤️

thanks tanu 😳

Wow mansi...from where u get such concepts

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

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hey maa mataji...nhi Mansi mat Mar wrna mere liye TS kaun likhega... 😉

Originally posted by: poo10

Wow mansi...from where u get such concepts

quite emotional but loved it...👏😳

khurafati dimag... shant kha baithta h 🤣

Saach mein this was outstanding

Amazing os mansi ...
Loved it!!!
I don't know why but I was reading nishu's line in start like a kid... And for while I thought nisha is nibir's daughter... 😆
but then lake wala scene...
Kabir wanted to kiss her...
Nai ... Baat kuch aur hai shayad I concluded... Nisha isn't a kid for sure!! 🤣
Then flashback started...
Driving k time pura time phone chalu rakha ... Aww
He was so much concerned...
That makes me awwwing 😳
But nishu slipped from stairs 😲
Kabir outside OT
It made me cry... 😭
Nishu ko amnesia ... 😕
Kabir ko hi bhool gyi ...
Kabir was holding her hand
But she isn't scared or uncomfortable with him...
Loved that scene...
Kabir nishu ko ghar le aya ...
They made study ka bahana.. 😛
Nishu separate room ki jagah apne room me aa kar apni side me hi soti thi... 😃
So cute yar!! 😳
Nishu's dialogues
"Tum mujhe jaan kyu bulate ho??"
& "nhi.. maine kab kha mjhe nhi pasand.. pasand h" ☺️
Mall me nishu got lost...
Kabir her standing in corner scared
Nisha hugged him wen she saw him & cried ...
But her head spined...
Kabir took her home...
She woke up upset... :(
So kabir asked for dance to cheer her...
But nisha ka reply...
Did she Gained her memory??? 😲
Mansi ye kaisa end tha???
Isko TS bana plzzz I want one more part at least...
Its a request...
And request ki spelling
.O.R.D.E.R. 😉 Ahaaan...
Toh phups apke pas do options hai...
Ya isko Ts banao ya phir update with one more part... Smjhi??? 😛

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Amazing os mansi ...
Loved it!!!
I don't know why but I was reading nishu's line in start like a kid... And for while I thought nisha is nibir's daughter... 😆
but then lake wala scene...
Kabir wanted to kiss her...
Nai ... Baat kuch aur hai shayad I concluded... Nisha isn't a kid for sure!! 🤣
Then flashback started...
Driving k time pura time phone chalu rakha ... Aww
He was so much concerned...
That makes me awwwing 😳
But nishu slipped from stairs 😲
Kabir outside OT
It made me cry... 😭
Nishu ko amnesia ... 😕
Kabir ko hi bhool gyi ...
Kabir was holding her hand
But she isn't scared or uncomfortable with him...
Loved that scene...
Kabir nishu ko ghar le aya ...
They made study ka bahana.. 😛
Nishu separate room ki jagah apne room me aa kar apni side me hi soti thi... 😃
So cute yar!! 😳
Nishu's dialogues
"Tum mujhe jaan kyu bulate ho??"
& "nhi.. maine kab kha mjhe nhi pasand.. pasand h" ☺️
Mall me nishu got lost...
Kabir her standing in corner scared
Nisha hugged him wen she saw him & cried ...
But her head spined...
Kabir took her home...
She woke up upset... :(
So kabir asked for dance to cheer her...
But nisha ka reply...
Did she Gained her memory??? 😲
Mansi ye kaisa end tha???
Isko TS bana plzzz I want one more part at least...
Its a request...
And request ki spelling
.O.R.D.E.R. 😉 Ahaaan...
Toh phups apke pas do options hai...
Ya isko Ts banao ya phir update with one more part... Smjhi??? 😛

thanks nehu...😳 ha ha baba will try 🤣