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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
I can't believe you didnt tell me about this. *Hmph*

Okay start was very intriguing. Shyamio is not...evil? Looking forward to the next installments.

Much love! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
You know I am replying to you from my office!!!!
Everyone is puzzled as to what I am doing!!!!
But can't help it!!!!
So now for the Celebrations!!!
Yes, they are back, Arnav and Khushi are back!!!!?
Yes, you are back, my favourite writer, Rasgullla, is back!!!!!!!
Wow, what a start,
So Khushi loved Arnav, he mis-trusted and insulted her, along  with her family!!!
Shyam is innocent here,
Khushi is not of love, but not in love too!!!!!
Complicated!!!
I like it!!!!
Hoping to see you soon!!!
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
This is your first which I'm reading and it is amazingly beautiful. Waiting for more😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Absolutely amazing update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Love to see you back ... Now as Arshi are back .. Please bring back your stories at least in blog where we can read them whenever we want...now back toyour new Story ..it's interesting .. Are they still married or they never married.. Shyam is good here... Arnav already in remorse and khushi in regret...love to see you again Edited by ranogill - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Welcome back Saiyu...

We are so happy to see you back...

Fool..

Good start...Repenting Arnav is what we missed in IPK...

Bring it on dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Much like the start you gave to your note, I'll say...
"Dekho woh aa gayi
Dekho, dekho woh aa gayi"😳

I had a strong feeling that the return of IPK is going to be the cause for winds of change.  And with you, it has happened. From now on, I'm only waiting for many other writers to follow suit.

Now for the story...angst...me likey. It will be interesting to see how you depict angst and to what intensity. And whether will it be emanating only from Arnav. Time will tell, of course, but right now, the balance is in favor of both.

Just as I was about to finish reading Chapter 1, I was like, 'Didn't I read that the story will be set in AU? Then why don't I see something to that effect?' And then there was the sentence. Just one sentence...or rather a few words depicting Shyam's harmlessness (for want of a better word) and the spin to the story was put into effect!

Waiting for more...will the updates be weekly or biweekly?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Loving this November .⭐️. My son turned 10 ⭐️ Then arshi back n now ever sweet rasgulla is back too🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Welcome back
I love ur stories
Loved the start
Plz PM 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Welcome back Saiyyu!! Always been a fan of your writing...This time you've made me all the more happy since you've chosen to write 'angst', which happens to be my fav genre. Can't wait to read more..