We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50 - Page 20

This was amazing. I wish the writers could give us 50% of this. Loved it. Brought tears in my eyes specially part 3A and B. Beautifully written! Continue soon.

Why I have taken this much time to review this piece is because you render me speechless after every update. 😛

Thank you thank you so much for giving us all the moments we've ever wanted on Ishra. You make them even more beautiful then they already are, the way you portray them is so hear warming. I loved the parts so much, reading this FF honestly makes me so happy. Update soon, love this

Unreserved, finally on page 21 👏

Really, really, really sorry, kaan pakadke for being so late but life is crazy busy now

Originally posted by: Boo2014

Unreserved

First things first, I apologise for the delay in unreserving my post. Please forgive me 😳

As usual, a beautifully written piece, giving us, the reader an opportunity to witness what a day in the life of our favourite couple would be like. I am seriously in awe of the way you so effortlessly are able to take the reader through the journey with such detail that we are able to visualise the actors/characters before our very eyes.

I'm glad we were able to see how the rest of the Bhalla clan are doing. They annoy me as much as they did on the show. Particularly Mr Bhalla whose character I was so disappointed by his behaviour towards Raman and Ishita.

'Ishita and Raman had been the pillars that stood strong, bearing every affliction that could harm the family... taking it on themselves to protect them all. They had sacrificed selflessly for each one of them, giving up on their own life and happiness...and done so without any regrets' .This so true yet the family, except Simmi and Mihir are unable to see this. I am glad the Bhallas are no longer one unit and are struggling. I hope they are giving their comeuppance for taking Ishra for granted.😡

I loved the morning scene in particular Raman helping Ishita whilst she slept in and then falling asleep with Ruhi. I was in stitches with the morning shower scene, imagining puttar's trying hard to control himself which we know he is not easy. The kiss on the shoulder was the cherry on the cake.☺️I seriously love this Ishra and their little family.

Rinki (RIP), still annoys me and I wish someone just slaps her for causing this mess.

I could go on and on but then would probably bore you to death and end up regurgitating your whole chapter.

The heart to heart between Raman and Simmi was lovely and gives us an insight into the turmoil and reasoning behind Raman's behaviour. I like these two and have always enjoyed their bond. Ishra are the true heart and soul of the Bhalla family without that you are left with nothing but an empty shell

I truly love it and can't wait for the next instalment🤗

Originally posted by: kras

Part one

Mind blowing

Loved it totally

U wrote ishra POV very beautifully

Specially when she said to raman that he left the house for his self respect not for his ego

I didn't like it in show when ishu said to toshiji I know raman left this house for his ego

But in reality he left the house for ishu kids and his self respect

Originally posted by: zeny_Nian

too good update Anku...loved the depth of the family bond you've tried to portray in this story! Family is the most integral part in our lives and relations are too delicate to experiment...hence at times we have to just let the relations fling in the flaws unable to do any better...same is the case with simmi, Mihir and Ishra here... they know the root of the problems but they don't know the solutions...thereby putting their feet up in the flow!

Mihir loves his bhai way too much, so his hurt seeing him at such situation is the bigger after Ishra ...besides the ladies in his life has been the reason of his bhai's sorrow...the poor guy has been the most unluckiest among the masses!

Simmi is one such potential character that I always wanted to see grow with time...here you've just begun to show the caliber of the character thank you girls for that🤗
loved the little antics b/w the siblings ...that was so refreshing to read you know!

an enjoyable update with Ishra as usual nok jhokes, romance, the family time with Adi getting grown-up and responsible!😃

Originally posted by: ankitasen

Finished reading all the parts. Amazing. 😃

Originally posted by: serendipity.

Done with part 3 a and b

gosh! how do you do it? i almost have tears, seriously! so perfect... but too good to be true! -EVER! :(

tho they could have easily done atleast half of this if not all, but alas! :(

LOVE LOVE LOVE you for this Anku.. cant wait to read the next part, and please update soon and i ACTUALLY have tears this is too beautiful! ❤️