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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SA1234

Part 3A and B -

Absolutely loved the pool scene and what followed after that. IshRa's chemistry is so refreshing in your story Anku. Same goes for their comfort level and bonding. Raman asking Ishita to "express her needs" - I must say this is a FIRST !

Their day out with kids was again such a treat to read and I loved how you have weaved in those small but impactful moments between Raman-Ruh , Raman- Adi , Ishita-Adi. Ruhi being possessive of her Ishima - this is so natural and realistic and something that I have always wanted to see on the show. Wonderful parts Anku !

Part 4 - It just keeps getting better and better with each update. I love the fact that even without a crisis situation or emergency, the Bhallas have started to miss IshRa. My heart goes out to Simmi and Mihir in this update😭. You have kept them so true to their characters.

As for IshRa , although they are now on a break from their usual "save everybody's ass mission" , they probably realized that managing a household and kids on their own is no less than a battle. And IshRa working as a team and dealing with the mundane is such a welcome change from the OTT drama that we are so used to. But what I loved the most in this update is Raman kissing Ishita on her forehead and saying "Have a good day Madrasan !" . You have no idea how badly I have wanted to see the exact same thing on the show and I LOVE YOU 🤗 for giving this to me. And that sizzling kiss in the kitchen was totally unexpected, not to mention IshRa showering together and NOT doing anything. Its FiNALLY sinking in that IshRa is really a couple . Loved it!

You are making me fall in love with Raman all over again. Not good Anku..not good !

Great going Anku and Nee . Can't wait to see how you guys are going to deal with Toshi now.


ANJU 🤗 THANK YOUUU. I am so happy today. You commented.

I am so so glad you like the update. And that you find the IshRa you want to see ( at least in bits if nothing here)

I've always wanted the kids to behave like kids and the pair to be like a married pair is and so me and Nee kind of are influenced by whatever creatives NEVER gave us And so happy that it pleases you.

And yes the family doesn't have to realize their value just when a crisis crops up. They have to miss them and feel the emptiness even otherwise. And their realization or their side of the story hasn't even really begun.

About the mundane moments, I LOVED writing them. I dont' remember, except a few times... that IshRa ever got a chance (especially post confession and all) when they ever ate breakfast together, dropped each other to work, or wished each other a good day etc. I LOVE such simple moments.

That kiss in the kitchen, I don;t now where it came from 😆 The Kheer idea was Nee's.. so Ishita teases Raman. And then I had initially thought she'd just kiss to cajole him. BUT I wanted RKB to rise so. I liked writing that 😆

Thanks so much Anju 🤗 It's hard to write man. Thanks for liking and appreciating and being there always.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi. I love you. I shall read this VERY SOON. I LOVE YOU, OKAY? *hides face*
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Posted: 9 years ago
I didn't intend to say so u took me wrong it was just... Sort of appraisal u see... Moreover as far as studies are concerned I m in 12 I can understand that
I didn't know abt her studies

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: niharika09

I didn't intend to say so u took me wrong it was just... Sort of appraisal u see... Moreover as far as studies are concerned I m in 12 I can understand that.I didn't know abt her studies


Well, to me it didn't sound good but if u say it was meant in good sense, then I believe you..Let it go.. now that all is sorted , I hope you can find time to catch up with the story amidst your busy schedule.. 12th is definitely a tough and an important year.. I see that you are a newbie and probably were a silent reader..its good to see you commenting.. 😊
And, all the best for your studies too..
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Posted: 9 years ago
too good update Anku...loved the depth of the family bond you've tried to portray in this story! Family is the most integral part in our lives and relations are too delicate to experiment...hence at times we have to just let the relations fling in the flaws unable to do any better...same is the case with simmi, Mihir and Ishra here... they know the root of the problems but they don't know the solutions...thereby putting their feet up in the flow!

Mihir loves his bhai way too much, so his hurt seeing him at such situation is the bigger after Ishra ...besides the ladies in his life has been the reason of his bhai's sorrow...the poor guy has been the most unluckiest among the masses!

Simmi is one such potential character that I always wanted to see grow with time...here you've just begun to show the caliber of the character thank you girls for that🤗
loved the little antics b/w the siblings ...that was so refreshing to read you know!

an enjoyable update with Ishra as usual nok jhokes, romance, the family time with Adi getting grown-up and responsible!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey anku read all the four parts.
they were trully awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys. I know its been a good gap since I haven't posted. And I am extremely sorry for it 😔 I've had some social affairs to attend and also wasn't well, down with something or the else. Began writing over the weekend, but will still take time to post because I am going to be writing a little 2/3 shot for IshRa too. Will try and post ASAP.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finished reading all the parts. Amazing. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Done with part 3 a and b
gosh! how do you do it? i almost have tears, seriously! so perfect... but too good to be true! -EVER! :(
tho they could have easily done atleast half of this if not all, but alas! :(
LOVE LOVE LOVE you for this Anku.. cant wait to read the next part, and please update soon and i ACTUALLY have tears this is too beautiful! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks guys 🤗 for the comments. Shall reply soon and will post a part next week. Hoping to get more frequent, but busy with life.

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