AsYa SS: Aabhi Ja Tu Kahi Se updated part 12 on page 58

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TheLeo_M

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

beautiful part...

firstly i thought it is something to do with any major disease when you mentioned about the headache...😆

well written...emotions beautifully portrayed

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Res..!
unres

it was a very intense and emotional update..!
I wonder how will asad react to this..?
Excited to read the next part. .
update soon. .:)

Edited by cutie15 - 9 years ago

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asya7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Res mera aur jas ka 🤗

unres mera
titir 🤗
What a beautiful update! Bt chotu sa tha past isme b reveal ni kiya
anyway a gud read
zoya tried to nt answer him bt gave up and that too determined to finally let the truth out!
Beautiful update isliye bola coz EVERY LINE
i repeat EVERY LINE was beauty
was wonderful to read the depth of emotions and u play with words very smartly titir! 👏
i really love ths update
the small comparisions which u make are deep in meaning and i again fell in love with ur writing skils
u never disappoint me and keeps growing as a writer
and i always admire u baby
mwuaah ❤️
KEEP IT UP!
And update ab jaldi karna
4 chapter hogaye and hume ye hi ni pta ki hua kya tha 😆

surbhiii🤗
I seriously become speechless with a goofy grin whenever i read your comments. How do you and ashlesha and jas always give such cute comments i really dont know. But whenever i read them they make me happy from inside. You are really a sweetheart🤗
Your words really boosted my ego😎😆
But on a serious note i myself dont know what i have written. But it is a great pleasure to know that you are liking it. Thank you very much for the constant support in everything i write. Love you and congrats again🤗

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Abi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

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asya7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Beautiful update dear
Really very intense
Hope that the truth brings them closer instead of tearing them apart
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Thank you very much dear 😃

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

ohh...

quite serious update...

asad was adamant and zoya was stubborn..

they were in pain...

so.. finally she revealed...

lets see what happens,,..

update soon..

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

LOL mujhe toh pta lag gya tha yahi raaz hai🤣

Khoda pahad nikla choza kuch aisa hi tha na😆

so Zoe ko jab pta lga who khud hi bhaag aayi sab chod chaad ke awe

I know who ASad ki rejection aur uski ankon main nafrat nahi dekhna chahti thi

Par 1 qstn jis Abbu ko khozne ke liye usne itna kuch kiya kya use bhi nahi mili or he also shunned her that we have 2 find out soon

Yeh raaz Billi ne bhi btaya hoga Zoe ko Nikah se bhgane ke liiye😡

chotu updt tha but as always ur word selection was brilliant 👏

I m always left mesmerised reading those lovely sentences 😃

& yes Best of luck 4 ur exams👍🏼

PS- Mera WOLR bhi de de baar baar mangna padta hai khud nahi de sakti.🤣 1 story ke piche pad jati hai toh baaki stories nazar hi nahi aate tujhe pouts

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Res mera aur jas ka 🤗

unres mera
titir 🤗
What a beautiful update! Bt chotu sa tha past isme b reveal ni kiya
anyway a gud read
zoya tried to nt answer him bt gave up and that too determined to finally let the truth out!
Beautiful update isliye bola coz EVERY LINE
i repeat EVERY LINE was beauty
was wonderful to read the depth of emotions and u play with words very smartly titir! 👏
i really love ths update
the small comparisions which u make are deep in meaning and i again fell in love with ur writing skils
u never disappoint me and keeps growing as a writer
and i always admire u baby
mwuaah ❤️
KEEP IT UP!
And update ab jaldi karna
4 chapter hogaye and hume ye hi ni pta ki hua kya tha 😆

Huggie Suri 4 d res 🤗

& bold tujhe abhi bhi idea nahi lga buddhu kahin ki🤣

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: asya7
surbhiii🤗
I seriously become speechless with a goofy grin whenever i read your comments. How do you and ashlesha and jas always give such cute comments i really dont know. But whenever i read them they make me happy from inside. You are really a sweetheart🤗
Your words really boosted my ego😎😆
But on a serious note i myself dont know what i have written. But it is a great pleasure to know that you are liking it. Thank you very much for the constant support in everything i write. Love you and congrats again🤗

thanku 🤗
hahaha cute comments dalna tu b sikh le Lol
ab ego boost hogai
mujhe sweetheart bol diya and tu khush b hogai so pls pls update karna wapas
meko aur padhna