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Okay I finally read it and well,here's your Diwali gift.
To start with, FI EFFING NALLY. I WAS AS FRUSTRATED AS ARNAV BY THE END.
My favourite parts were the first two misses. I've not seen the beginning of the show with lot of interest, so I generally cannot recall most scenes of conflict. So, I usually depend on the picture created by the writer, you know? And yours is just, accurate. I can imagine that all of this happened. I can imagine Khushi wiping her tears as she tries to wrench the door open and Arnav whispering Khushi in that tone of his. (Well, Barun's.)
I also think I mentally clapped when NK interrupted because I ❤️ NK.
Props to the absence of Shyam. Reading this story made me think the actual PayAsh wedding would have been so much better had he not been there, no?
Ohh and I love the dialogues! I don't know how many times I'm going to say this but your writing is so easy to picture, you know? Like, sometimes the characters say too witty or too dumb things and youjust put your book (or in my case, phone) down and ask yourself- who tf talks like that?! Ridzy, your writing style is the exact opposite. So good job!
Okay I think I broke my essay record so I'm going to stop now. Write the next ITM update (you know which one) but also have fun on Diwali! (but try to write the update more). Love you!
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