T5:ArshiSS/IncitingDesires2/ COMPLETED/CH14-16 - Page 55

Originally posted by: Roop_P

What ?Just logged in on my phone to check the update status.

will be busy with guests today.

What is this, we have one or two threads ???😭

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

wow wow wowww...
superb,amazing,emotional and heart touching too di😳
you are a perfect writer😉
everything u wrote was just wonderful😃
update next part soon..
now i can't wait for it...
jaldi se likhkar jaldi se scrap karooo😆😆😆
thanks alot giving me pm😃

Originally posted by: mika17

Awesome update

Originally posted by: chinnulu

Beautiful update

So finally Jpalo realised his mistake for putting his love Lydia's child thru hell. His mother's words are true we cannot be happy in other people's unhappiness. Atleast he prayed for Khushi and he wants her to have all the happiness in her life but wondering what is there in those two envelopes. Hope it is not something that might push Khushi more into suffering than she already is with the nightmares.

Yes we always don't pay attention to our mother's words ,especially boys...but a time comes and hit you like this to bring you at the table of realization, envelopes will come in coming updates

I really like whenever Khushi addressess with different names mostly Mr. Arrogant stale piece of raisins and Mr. Law and order, Loved how she puts her heart out to Arnav make him know her suffering and his care towards her without bothering anything else. Officer will really go crazy if he sees these two stubborn people who loves each other to the core again in his life. Poor guy was so confused and couldn't understand what exactly is happening.

😆 officer must be pulling his hair

but the wy these two love each other being oblivios from their surroundings is worth watching and absorbing

Names and Khsuhi ...can't be separated.

Loved Arnav's care towards Khushi how he tend her wounds and made sure she is OK. Poor girl she is so frigthened thinking how JPalo will come after him and kill him like he killed her father. Arnav had to make sure that he is safe and sound and will never leave her. Loved their cute moments between them, expressing their anger, love, care with their kisses.

Since from teh beginning , he takes her pain along with his love and tenderness.He knows how to renove all of her distress with his embrace and tht is wht he was doing here...but a little took longer because she was going insane with fear

Arnav's phone message making her go red remebering their moments spend together. Though he is not beside her he makes sure she is resting and taking care of herself which she doesn't being so stubborn. Both are waiting for the other to confess. Arnav wanted her to take initiative and doesn't want to rush but our Mrs.Arrogant doesn't want to accept it until Arnav does. Loving their nick names for each other.

She needs to acknowledge the intensity and the true depth of his love with those three words...and lets see how that happens.Stubborn these two are and forgetting in between that they love each other so much without anything in between ,but they need to snap out.Arnav did snap out when she left him 6 months ago and now this is her turn

Now what with the cliffhanger u left us with. Is everything OK with Anjali, Arnav will be going to India now leaving Khushi when he is trying to make everything alright between by wooing her. Hope everything is fine.

Couldn't wait for the PM as soon as saw the update. But anyway thanks in advance for the PM

Originally posted by: shalbi

the update.. It was lovely..

Jpalo's mothers words were wise, its just like my nani says, "kisi ki khushiyon k maqbare p, apne sapno ka aashiyan nahi banate"..

Beautiful👏

The interaction between Khushi and arnav, while Khushi was answering the inspector and indirectly speaking her heart out to arnav, that whole conversation was soo deep and so full of agony, is portrayed anger, care, possessiveness, love all at once that Khushi has for arnav and how much she has went through over the time of these 6 months and how broken she might have been that night..

yes all of these months whatever she was feeling, but she is unaware of that he was with her all these months...though Aadi

He knew everything about her...through Aadi

He has acknowledged her as his ...everything

She needs to reach there yet

after there kiss and almost indirect confession for what they mean to each other, they both slept, actually peacefully slept after a very long time, just being in each other embrace might have been heaven for them..

yes, both found solace

The phone conversation, or the one sided msg, he knows her too well, without even the reply he knows what she must be doing..

as I said above , he has developed all about her because he knew her more than she knew him...he did not leave her at all

She finally confessed to herself taht indeed she loves him.. Now just left is the confession to each other, he is waiting for her and she for him..

Not to forget the beautiful nick names she came up with in front of the officer, he just have been so confused of what she is trying to say..

I m just a bit confused about the letter that jpalo has sealed, what's in those, I hope I m not missing anything from last updates..

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Roop_P

⭐️ I have read this like more than enough time and it will be under statement that this update is beautiful⭐️


A Dance in the RAIN




I am naming this chapter a dance in the rain.😊

Love the thought behind it

Today I have found and discover where are you taking this whole thing...Instead of Inciting Desires , A dance in the rain would be a better title, No offense my sensitive friend.because this is what ,teh depth of this piece of writing is doing to me.

This a journey of a girl whose life destroyed in the rain ,one night was again at the verge of destroying her soul.From her percpective, JPalo is simply a murderer.😭

u r so cute, I so love it and i am so glad u connected it , yes tht is exactly where I am taking u and let others figure this out...I am stopping here

Her state of mind, her words, a touch of broken glass bottle, hurting her foot, her every footstep with Ahhh, her dialogues in front of poor officer, You have no idea how real it felt.⭐️

Thank you😊

Her fear of losing Arnv, the very same way Arnav's fear losing her that night and pushing her away is simply outstanding contrast of emotions and scenes itself👏

Her cupping his face , crying with fear, holding her closer and asking him don't you dare is absolutely took my breath away.

The way he cared and told her , He is dead.😭
Now he is , JPalo killed himself while thinking of how much pain he has caused .

Their morning, his white big shirt, her clumsy sleeping habits , slipping shirt , his becoming lost in her .their chat .How well they both know each other👏Stubborn Lady and her stubborn raisin , both don't want to confess till the other one does first.They are too much.

I don't want to pay attention to anything else.
Just enjoying it as much as I can.👏

Originally posted by: Alicia2012

Wow great story please update soon

Im really looking forward to the next part of your story and i hope everything is ok with arnav family. Thanks for the pm.