NIBIR STORY- DESTINED TOGETHER *page 145* *8/10* - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
sorry for late

Maansi ye acchi bat nhi hai😡 tum itni acchi stories likhti ho ki mujhe samjh nhi ata k tareef kaise kru..😉 mai nye words kha se lau tareef k liye 😡 bolo


now coming to yr update...

different n interesting plot
i was thinking k tumhare brain m plots ate kaise h n ate h to ate hai tum unko itne acche se express kaise kar leti ho...
tumko sach m writer bnna chahiye... 👏 👏 👏 👏
it was amazing👍🏼
nishu to K k pyarr m bawali ho gai hai 😆 😆
loved rajbir convo😊
sara n kabir bonding is adorable 😆
jaise humlogo ko M se se ho gya h ... waise hi nishu ko Kabir se PYAAR ho gya hai PIC pic dekh dekh kar 😆 😆 🤣
awwweee nibir met but dono ko lag ra tha ki dey were hellucinating
lip mark...finger print in her hand -- ☺️ ❤️
update soon mansi😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: picadally

Mansi 😳

Kaam chala le 🤣

kya yaar natz... 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: naina.majik

sorry for late


Maansi ye acchi bat nhi hai😡tum itni acchi stories likhti ho ki mujhe samjh nhi ata k tareef kaise kru..😉mai nye words kha se lau tareef k liye😡bolo


now coming to yr update...

different n interesting plot
i was thinking k tumhare brain m plots ate kaise h n ate h to ate hai tum unko itne acche se express kaise kar leti ho...
tumko sach m writer bnna chahiye...👏
it was amazing👍🏼
nishu to K k pyarr m bawali ho gai hai😆😆
loved rajbir convo😊
sara n kabir bonding is adorable😆
jaise humlogo ko M se se ho gya h ... waise hi nishu ko Kabir se PYAAR ho gya hai PIC pic dekh dekh kar😆😆🤣
awwweee nibir met but dono ko lag ra tha ki dey were hellucinating
lip mark...finger print in her hand --☺️❤️
update soon mansi😊

thanks nishi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Mansi... Update chahiye 😛

kal pakka bhabhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
res 😊
unres
sorry for late comment mansi
ab about the update
mansi yeh kya h...itna sweet h yaar
mind blowing
super awesome
kamal dhamal bemisal
brilliant
ab kya bolu ma
it is beautiful
n title is just perfect for the story
ma chali next part padne 😊
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
such a cute update mansi

awww sara is so sweet...she wants bangles😃

Nisha dreams of Kabir and Kabir dreams of Nisha ...so adorable

They finally met...in such a strange way😳

am looking forward to their meeting again

pls update soon...am so excited for next parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Piya1199

such a cute update mansi

awww sara is so sweet...she wants bangles😃

Nisha dreams of Kabir and Kabir dreams of Nisha ...so adorable

They finally met...in such a strange way😳

am looking forward to their meeting again

pls update soon...am so excited for next parts

thanks piya... u will get the update today only
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

thanks piya... u will get the update today only


wow...that worked fast...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

part- 3

niyu bhabhi.. maafi..sorry for delay... and yes nishu's shayri is by my one n only lovely niyu bhabhi... 🤗




jo ek dhundhla sa saya tha aaj vo shaksh mila...

Jisse khwaabon mein tha dekha aaj vo haqeeqat mein mila...

Ae khuda abh usse ek baar dubara mila de...

Jis tarah maine di hai usse, vo bhi apne dil mein mujhe panah de...


Nisha woke up and wrote it in her diary. " kaash ye sach ho jae" she kissed her diary praying.


Chaha tha jise ek khoobsurat khwab ki tarah...

Vo aaj hakeekat h meri...

tu mjhse nazre milake to dekh...

Meri aankho m dekhegi tasveer sirf teri...


Kabir penned down his feelings and remembered her closed eyes. " kash tmhe phir dekh pau" he thought.Though it was morning but these two hearts were seems to be still wandering in their dreamy night encounter.

Soch mein hun zara

Yeh kya ho gaya

Lag raha hai mujhe

Sab naya naya..


Kabir got up from the bed and sat by the bed side still smiling like a fool.


Oh jaaniya..

Haal ye kaisa hai

Ishq ke jaisa hai

Tune mujhe kya kar diya hu..


He stand up and scratched the back of his neck smiling at his condition.



Chid gaya aap hi tu woh saaz hai

Khul gaya aap hi tu woh raaz hai


Nisha stretched her arms and hugged herself to this amazing feeling.



Oh jaaniya..

Haal ye kaisa hai

Ishq ke jaisa hai

Tune mujhe kya kar diya


She got up and twirled herself gigling in this all new feeling hugging her own hands as if hugging those finger marks.


Khwabon ne guzaarishan ki

Aankhon ne shikayatein ki

Neend aayi na haaye

Saanson ne sifarishein ki

Dillon ne himakatein ki

Hui inteha haaye..

Dil ko lihaza pyaar ho gaya


Kabir and nisha were hallucinating each other. Kabir saw nisha calling him to her spinning around him.

While nisha saw kabir pulling her close and tracing her face through her fingers taking her in his arms.



Jaise honthon pe halki si

Aayi hai hasi lekin

Aankhe yeh geeli hoTu hai wo aansu jaaniya

Haan o waise nadan hu

Hairan hu thoda pareshan hoon

Samjhaoo kya khud ko

Haans do ya rau du jaaniya..


Kabir tried to touch her face as she came in front of him but she vanished in thin air leaving him perplexed first. Then he smiled at himself shooking his head and caressed his palm having that lip mark kissing it. His eyes turned a little moist as he remembered her waving hand at him.



Haan jaagi in khawahishon ko

Kaise main sulaun janiya

Haan jo bhi ho raha hai

Kaise main chupao jaaniya

Oh jaaniya..


Nisha tried to hold him back as he just waved a bye and moved backwards just like the last night. She hit her head as she realised she hallucinate him again. She just hide her face on her palms feeling shy.



Haal ye kaisa hai

Ishq ke jaisa hai

Tune mujhe kya kar diya


Nisha threw herself on bed again hiding her face in the pillow and then hugging that pillow close to her heart with that undying grin on her face.

Kabir's condition was no different as he let out a chuckle shooking his head at his own madness.

" I love you " they both whispered at the same moment.


Kabir took his flight and went back to his house. He was smiling like a fool all the time and anyone who met him can say that he was just not in this world. He reached home and went straight to sara's room. " sweety heart chachu is back" kabir said. She came running in his arms and hugged him. " chachu my bangles?" She asked. " here they are..." he said and handed her a small packet. " thanku chachu..." she exclaimed in joy and kissed him on his cheeks. " thanks to u sweety heart... because of u I get to see her" he thought. " Kabir aap yha... hme lga aap seedha office jaenge." Vasu said. " nhi maa... thoda thak gya tha to socha ghar aa jata hu... bhai kha h" he said. " viraj apni academy gye h kabir... kaira bhi gyi h thoda kaam tha academy m" vasu informed him. " ohk ma.. mai jaake fresh ho jata hu" kabir said. " thik h kabir... hm breakfast bhijwate h" vasu said.


Nisha got ready and left for her office as she didn't wanted to answer to the questions of her cousins as they would definitely will be able to recognise that something has happened with her.


They both get drowned in their lives. The days were way easier to pass than the nights. Their meeting their closeness that moment still haunt them and they both were helpless but to spend sleepless nights. It had been 6 months since then. Kabir and nisha are still waiting madly to know if they are meant to meet again. Though kabir had increased his trips to jaipur but he still couldn't meet her or find her for an instance. Here nisha was getting out of her senses as this craziness was getting better of her now.


Her boss called her. " may I come in sir" she asked. " aao nisha" she was called in. " sir ye work complete ho gya h... koi ur assignment h to aap mjhe de dijie" she said. " ha nisha ek assignment to h... par uske lie tmhe jaipur se baahar jana hoga..." he said. " what... sir aap ye kya bol rhe h aapko maalum h na dadaji won't give permission" she said. " I know nisha... but it is a life changing opportunity... I guarantee u that" he said. " ok sir I will try" she said. Nisha was in a fix now. She wanted to go out explore her opportunities but her family moreover her dadaji wasn't going to be so pleased with this. " kha kho gyi nisha..." her boss called out for her. " kuch nhi sir..." she said. " suno u have to intern in one of the best company in delhi... I know it's going to be hard... but it's a must." he said. She smiled weakly at him and left.


Nisha left for her home processing her mind for every single explanation she can give to dadaji for her decision. " oh god please help me... I really wanted to go" she said. Nisha entered her house and decided to talk first. She saw all of them asembeled in the courtyard. " dadaji..." she called out. " ha nisha" dadaji said. " mjhe... vo... mjhe aapse kuch baat karni h... " she was nervous. " Mai sun rha hu " he said. She sat in front of him of him kneeling while others looked at them with a curious expression. Nisha gulped down as her throat dried at the thought of asking about it. " dadaji... vo mjhe na ek bhot achha project mila h.." she said. " to ye to achhi baat h na nisha... " dadaji said. " Par dadaji... vo mjhe us project k lie delhi jana padega for 3 months" she said in a go. All of them gasped at what she said. " tum kya chahti ho nisha" dadaji asked. " mai jana chahti hu dadaji... its a life time opportunity" she said. " vha ki bhot bdi company m mjhe project karna h" she completed. " hm is baare m kal baat karenge" he said and dismissed everyone. Nisha was disappointed but she didn't have any other option but to wait till tomorrow. She too retired herself for the day and went to bed when ramesh came in her room. " Nisha... tu so gyi kya" he asked softly. " nhi papa... " she said. They sat on bed with nisha's head in ramesh's lap. " tu sach m jana chahti h beta?" He asked. " ha papa... mai chahti hu " she said. Ramesh could clearly see how badly she wished to go. He smiled and said " thik h mai bauji se baat karunga" he said. " waise papa... aap sab kya discuss kar rhe the.. " she asked innocently. " kuch nhi beta... tu soja thak gyi hogi na" ramesh sounds a little tensed. " koi prblm h kya papa" she asked. " nhi beta koi baat nhi h... tu kyu itni fikar karti h" he said patting her head lovingly. She looked at him doubtfully but chose to ignore as he wasn't revealing anything. She closed her eyes and slept peacefully.


Kabir was curious and anxious today. He had to crack a real big deal and he was nervous. " kya baat h chote... aap itna kyu ghabra rhe h" viraj asked. " I don't know bhai... but this time its really important to have this deal" he said. " aap aankhe band kijie apni kabir" viraj said. " kya bhai... " kabir said. " are kijie na... ab sochie aap sabse jyada kya chahte h kise chahte h" viraj said. Kabir frowned but did as he said. He saw a beautifully decorated hall.. its seems some party is going on... Suddenly he saw her. He ran to held her but she was gone... the other moment they were behind the pillar... her lips touching her hands... her body shivering beneath her.. but her eyes open... n something in those eyes gave him a new confidence. " m with u " they transpired.


He snapped opened his eyes and found viraj smirking seeing him. He quickly gave a mental check on himself and when he was satisfied he asked " kya hua bhai...". " kiska chehra dekha kabir" he asked. " kisi ka nhi bhai " he quickly turned and acted as he was reading the file. Viraj shook his head and left for his academy smiling.kabir smiled at himself and repeated " she is with me".


Nisha was in courtyard with everyone else waiting for dadaji to come. After some time he came and sat in his arm chair and called nisha. " idhar aao nisha..." he said. She obliged and stood in front of him. " hm jante tmhara bhot man h jaane ka islie... tum jaa sakti ho par..." nisha was overjoyed but got confused at that 'par'. " par kya dadaji" she asked. " par ek shart h isha" he said. Her heart squeezed. " kya dadaji" she was scared. " shart ye h ki tm delhi tab hi jaa sakti ho jab tm ye wada karo ki waapas aate hi tm shadi k lie tyar rahogi" the words echoed in the room. She felt her heart busted out at the news. " what... marriage... how can I... I can't... I love someone... " she opened her mouth to say these things but a thought refrained her. " do he loves u... will he even recognise u... do u worth him?" The clear answer she can hear was a no from all side. She closed her eyes. " thik h dadaji... aap jisse kahenge mai shadi kar lungi" she said with a heavy voice. Ramesh wanted to protest but nisha nodded in a no and left.


She banged her door close when her cousins came to talk to her. " guys m ok... pls leave me alone... I will be back to u I promise" she said. " how could u do this nisha" her heart screamed. " because this is the right thing" her mind told. " but u luv him" heart told her again. " did he too... did they match up anywhere... forget that did he even know she exist" mind rebuked. " he told u he will meet u again" heart tried. " did he came..." mind responded. " Stop it... just stop it..." she screamed. " mai bhool gayi thi ki sapna sapna hi hota h... vo ek sapna h... ek khoobsurat par sirf ek sapna..." she said and wiped her tears away.
Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai
Nisha is going Delhi to do internship in a MNC and Kabir is a business tycon 😉
Kabir ne Nisha ko dekha
Dadaji ji shart 😲
But why fear when love is here 😉
Pyaar har cheez mumkin kar deta hai 😳
Cont..soon and thanks for giving the update so soon 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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