Part 2- Superb chapter❤️
Waise toh loved the entire chapter but sirf kuch hi parts quote kar paayi hoon nahin toh post limit mein fit nahin aata😆
Nisha woke up with a smile on her face. " fir whi sapna..." she hit her head smiling throughout. " nisha... stop it before u have to get admitted in an asylum" she laughed with the thought. " paagal ladki " she squealed but immediately covered her mouth but it was too late. " kya hua nishu... kaun paagal h" her mom was at her doorstep. " Mar gyi nisha" she thought as it is really hard to stop that stupid grin on her face specially before her mother. " kuch nhi maa... vo to mai kirti ko paagal kh rhi thi... dekho na khidki... khidki khuli chhod gyi raat m... kitne machhar aa gye kamre m" she thought she finally managed. Her mother looked at her with r u ok look. " maa mjhe late ho rha h mai jaa rhi hu ur ha shaam ko der ho jaegi... to don't wait for me" she said and ran in the bathroom. She banged the door and laughed at herself. " nisha u r a certified crack" she said while splashing water on her face trying to get rid of that grin- Koi itna cute aur adorable kaise ho sakta hai Nishu sach mein paagal hai😆
Love the trick Viraj used to get Kabir to wake up😆 Bade bhaiya toh bade smart hain😎
Loved how Kabir jumped around as soon as he heard Viraj was about to touch his diary😆
Loved Rajbir bond😳
she thought and tried to sneak in without getting noticed. " lgta h bach jaungi aaj" she thought. " ruko nisha" she heard. " gyi bhains paani m" she thought and turned.- Nishu in trouble 😆😆😆
" kabhi tmhe auto nhi milta kabhi kharab ho jata h... esa karo tm ek auto kharid lo... saari prblm hi solve ho jaegi" he said. " last time maafi pls" she said. Nisha knew this trick always work on her boss. He is an adorable old man who love her like his daughter and she respect him too. She made a pouty cute face. " u spoilt girl... go and get to work now" her boss smiled at her antic and walked off.- This part was so funny and adorable😳😳
There he was, seems like he is thinking about someone. That smile lingering on his face... she had to control her fluttering heart otherwise it will come out of her ribcage. She quickly closed the page and put it back immediately. " kaam p dhyaan de nisha... paagal khi ki" she scolded herself and started her work.- Love this part❤️
Loved Kabir and Sara's bond😳 Sara ko apne chachu ki kitni fikar hai😃 She is too sweet and cute😳😃
Kabir saw her closed eyes. Her heavy breathing, he had closed her mouth with one hand while with other hand he held her hands up her head. He kept adoring her. That heavy eyelashes... feeling of her lips beneath his hand. Her breath on his neck as he plastered her on the wall and was hovering over her. "My mirage" kabir whispered.- hayee😳
Nisha wasn't feeling the fear.. instead she was feeling strangely happy. Whoever was the person she didn't fear him anymore. That grip on her hands was firm but soft. The touch of that hand on her lips was making her shiver. That scent was possessing her sanity. She could feel his body on hers. Something strange was happening which never happened before.- Love the way u have conveyed her emotions and the transition in them😃
Kabir was lost... lost in her beauty. He felt her shivering, her breath ragging. Her pink hue was making him mad. He wanted to see her eyes. He was about to say something when a car honked. Kabir got disappointed. He touched his forehead with hers, their nose touching too. She shivered again. " will meet u again mirage... " kabir said and left her. Nisha snapped open her eyes to see him standing in front of her. He moved backwards still facing her waving his hand. Her hand moved and she waved too... lost. He smiled at her act as he didn't expected her to wave back.- Hayee😳 I m in Nibir dreamland now❤️ Mesmerizing indeed
Nisha was standing there still in the same position. It took her some time to grasp the situation. Her breathing was still irregular. Her heart was thudding loudly. " m I hallucinating again... or it was him..." she wondered. She looked at her hands and saw his finger marks. " it was him " she realised.- Loved this entire part❤️ Your description of each and every moment and emotion was so accurate and beautiful 😳
She again looked at her hands... " u were real??? " She couldn't understand if she was asking or telling herself. She caressed her hand lovingly. " come back... please " she whispered.- So adorable😳
Love your description of the first time Kabir saw Nisha👏👏
Love the way u have penned down Nibir's thoughts in their respective diaries 👏 the way they write/talk to their diaries is so endearing I must say😳
Love how both of them yearn for each other😳❤️ Aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai
A perfect chapter indeed🤗
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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