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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: Cutemithra
Absolutely loved the update.. Arnav's idea of starting over again by calling her immature employee..lol.. No wonder khushi called him names.. He exactly knows how to push the buttons and bring the spunky side of khushi.. But khushi is not ready to let go.. Rightly so..
And it was nice to see the protective side of arnav in the elevator.. But who s watching them.. Hope no serious damages, whoever it may be..

Hey cutemithra😊

Underlined .😆 Yes he knows how to push her buttons to bring her spunkiness out and for the read , coming updates , 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 12

LOVED SASHI AND GARIMA CONVERSATION LOVED HOW HE UNDERSTOOD BOTH THEIR FEELINGS LOVED THAT ARNAV WENT TO HER PARENT AND ASKED FOR THEIR FORGIVENESS AND THEIR UNDERSTANDING AND SO CUTE ASR AND ADI CONVERSATION LOVED THAT ASR IS READ TO EVEN FIGHT KHUSHI TO WIN THEIR FUTURE LOVED THE KISSES AWESOME UPDATE AND SO CUTE HOW HE PROTECTED HER IN THE ELEVATOR LOVED EVEN DO SHE HAS RESOLVE TO KEEP HIM AT ARMS LENGTH AND SO CUTE WHEN SHE SMILE IT LIT UP HOPE IN HIS HEART AWESOME UPDATE THANKS FR THE PM.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: dumas

CHAPTER 11

OK I KNOW I AM LATE TRYING TO CATCH UP
LOVED THE UPDATE BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN LOVED THE LETTER SO EMOTIONAL KHUSHI HUE=RT WAS FELT IN EVERY WORD HER NOT UNDERSTANDING WHY HE REJECTED HER LOVE OR WHY SHE COULD NOT BE STRONG ENOUGH FOR HI IT AS SO SAD HER FEELING LIKE SHE WAS LACKING NOT SURE HOW ARNAV IS GOING TO MEND HER BROKEN HEART POOR KHUSHI ALL SHE WANTED TO DO WAS TO TAKE HIM OUT OF HIS PAIN HOPE ASR CAN OPEN UP TO HER SOON AND THEIR MEETING AFTER 6 MONTHS LOVE IT LOVED OW SHE WANTED TO SHOW HIM THAT SHE WAS STRONG LOVED ASR RESOLVE TO WIN HER BACK AWESOME UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM.

Awww, so good to see u dumus😊 long time.

Hope all is well dear.

Love the pic , office days when he was all over her towin his ego,but in this story he hs to win her.She is his love, his life

Originally posted by: dumas
CHAPTER 12
LOVED SASHI AND GARIMA CONVERSATION LOVED HOW HE UNDERSTOOD BOTH THEIR FEELINGS LOVED THAT ARNAV WENT TO HER PARENT AND ASKED FOR THEIR FORGIVENESS AND THEIR UNDERSTANDING AND SO CUTE ASR AND ADI CONVERSATION LOVED THAT ASR IS READ TO EVEN FIGHT KHUSHI TO WIN THEIR FUTURE LOVED THE KISSES AWESOME UPDATE AND SO CUTE HOW HE PROTECTED HER IN THE ELEVATOR LOVED EVEN DO SHE HAS RESOLVE TO KEEP HIM AT ARMS LENGTH AND SO CUTE WHEN SHE SMILE IT LIT UP HOPE IN HIS HEART AWESOME UPDATE THANKS FR THE PM.

Adi and Arnav combo is dangerous 😆 if u ask me

Shashi is really a good father and he knows how to understand his kids.

Arnav's possessiveness is always a main thing which always lit her heart up and her smile is what makes his life brighten.

His showering kisses is what making her weak , he knows she is holding back ,but she just can't let him win that quickly and liking it what is he doing

Originally posted by: dumas
HEART BREAKING TEASER

Awww, Thnx dear , u are always at the spot for bringing pics

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: meeramiss18
Really amazing chapter dear👏
Arnav is called her immature
really arshi is vry adorable together
Arnav wants to move on frm past and wants to start afresh
excited to read more
precap is intresting
plz continue ASAP
thanks for the pm😊

Thnx meeramiss😊

meeerrraaa, I loved ur underlined...nice observation dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: Lazyblazy
Simply sensitive and heartfelt Update dear👏

Arnav really have encountered this truth that he is nothing without her and he has clealy said that he won't let past come in between them ever.😳

Aww Lazy , Love ur Quotes dear, as always spot on

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Posted: 9 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: xZoyax
This was freaking one heck of an amazing update you have ever written .👏 👏 👏
You are confused of your own skills.Let me tell you that.
The flow of scenes from one to another is flawless.

My Favourite part is Shashi's explanation to his wife.😆 I chuckle over her being annoyed as a pure wife taking his question as a joke.a natural touch👏His understanding Arnav, trusting him that even Arnav made joke with him "Who said I asking your permission" that shows how much they are comfy with each other.

Now the convo of ARHI, he can't live without her .Period!

This was their condition staying apart

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6yO1-B_0nGQ[/YOUTUBE]

Now she pushed him numerous time and tried to woe her as Arnav ,but couldn't and here goes his CEO , ASR avatar and his teasing her by calling immature,and I was smiling like a teenager.He got her and she did what , called her million names.😆 Yes Khushi is back.

Their condition now

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q--AsayQdHg[/YOUTUBE]

The celebrated moment among Buaji, Rahim, Aadi and the entire team 👏

"To puri kayenaat unko milane main lag jaati hai..."

Love the elevator possessiveness.

awww love this

"To puri kayenaat unko milane main lag jaati hai..."

The underlined above , you are my friend u wil say that and I am so thankful for that .muahhh

blue, u r the only one noticed that.Really nice observation.

Loved the pink, yes he knows how to pushher and how to get her being ASr

Lovely songs 👏

Zoya , leave all of this aside ,but this one is keeping me at the edge these days, This is his best performnce ever in my eyes...May God bless him

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a18py61_F_w[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: SarunNArshi
it was tooo gud as usual.Loved how he is trying hard to get back his Khushi.1 time he is fully affected ,next he acts as if he dont care much to Khushi's annoyance.
Loved his kiss very simple,not deep.Bcoz that wil happen Khushi wud have completely forgiven him.

And ur precap, Obviosuly who can became Mrs.Arnav Singh Raizada other than or Khushi😆😉

SarunNArshi😊

Hope all is fine dear,

Thnx for ur lovely comment , yes he was affected by her comments but he was in control , and didn't wnt to lose her in his anger again

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Posted: 9 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm so sorry for not commenting Late and Not commenting on last Parts,Please forgive me...😭
I just completed reading remaining Part of this SS.😊
It was Amazing Parts.😊
The way you turned the Story was Awesome,I loves it.😊
The way Arnav trying to get back Khushi was so Nice and their kiss was so Cute.😊
Percap was so Interesting.😊
The Banners were so Nice,I likes it.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Thnx Priya,

glad u liked the story so far 😊

Twist and turn...as u r reading this first story of mine,

this is me, u won't be able to guess what is next till u read it and the past has to lay out the dround for their strong love which finished in chapter 10.now this is present which will make their future assured and strong

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: latersbaby.
Aha the muct awaited confrontation...beautifully written...loved it
Asr ur dealing The khushi kumari gupta...who is a tough nut to crack..nd to pacify her nd to woo her bahut pappad belne padenge...haan😆😉...
Khushi giving him realky tough tym...nd not ready to forgive him dat easily...poor arnav he was like

mauka milega toh hum bata denge...tumhe kitna pyar karte hai sanam
dil apana chir ke hum dikha denge...tumhe kitna pyar karte hai sanam😆

Nd that kiss simply...simply to convey her how much he was alone without her..how much hurt he was by hurting his soul..his life...his happiness...his state was no less than her...how much he was craving for her..her warthm...whuch alwayz act like a healer to his deserted heart...aww simply awswsum
Bt if she is kkg then he is not less than her...no matter what he gonna win his happiness back..ese he Asr nahi bana hai😆😆...verywell knw how to melt his boling volccano...his theekhi mirchi😆😉..nd gonna win her back by hook nd crook...u r the only one for me...future mrs raizada😳😳

Oh no what was that in last😲😲...is his past again came back or what??...hope not..finger crossed
Continue soonish

RED, his past is over, now its Khushi's

PINK I love , yes after all he is Asr, and she is his Mrs to be 😆 and jisko maney keh liye papad hi bechne padainge ASR ko😆

Blue , of course he is going to win without selling papad, he knows how to break this deal with hi teekhi mirchi

Thnx Shibani😊 love the song dear

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanjuarshi
lovely update😊👏 though what he did is not correct...he wanted to protect her...though hurting her. love shashi and garima too...and u have portryayed garima's feelings as a wife and mother perfectly👏
awww...how cutely she calls him names😆 and aadi giving arnav an account of alll the names he was called by his darling...wah👏
who was it snapping them???is there anything to worry??😔
thank a lot for the msg
waiting for the next one eagerly...

Thnx Sanjuarshi😊

Yes what he did was an act of safety , just for her,but it did hurt her and him in return.

Thnx for th eblue , yes as a mother and wife that is how usually women act, jumping on hubby with wordly attack and concerned about their daughter all the time.

pink, aww and he was not even angry or said What the!😆

red, Gosh the moment any small twist come panic wave goes on😆...it is Khsuhi's past coming up so chill and def it won't be as Khtarnak as Arnav

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago