Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..
Okay so you finally wrote Manik's POV and here too Manik wears a mask. Nice update Shenzπ
I am just waiting for them to meet again, i wanna see Nandini's reaction coz she is still apprehensive if she really wanna meet him again or notπP.S Sorry for unreserving late. Stuck with padhaiπ³
Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..
Shenz, it was greatπ
This kind of brother sister relation is very cute and yes Leo and Manik both are jerksπI wish that the guest is Manik with his signature grin sticked on his faceππ
Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Interesting..
Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Well Written Update..
That was awesome.
Thanks for the pmLol I hope it is manik at the door and he is Eric's best friend.It will be too much fun that way.I really appreciate your writing girlIt is very nice and refinedI want a lot of manan scenesMissing them badlyAnd I want you to try a little bit of humorYour story is a little seriousJust a little suggestion hope u won't mind bye
Originally posted by: Smiley_23
Hey...
It is very entertaining to read the entire stroll from Manik's point of you...enjoyed reading it...Please do continue writing and post next update as soon as you can...
Originally posted by: Smiley_23
ahhh that is a very interesting update... loved the bonding between Nandini and Eric...
so who is the Good morning guest?? Leo, Shelly or THE MANIK MALHOTRA???πππwaiting for the next update..
Originally posted by: 19dishayadav
It's always fun to read viewpoints of both the protagonists. It was a lovely update!
Originally posted by: 19dishayadav
Frankly, I think the pace of the chapter was a bit slow but necessary at the same time.
We would have to wait longer for the next update, hai na? :(
Originally posted by: Standingstill
Hey,, π awzm start,, eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. Continue soon
Originally posted by: Standingstill
That's Manik hain nah?
I luv d bro - sis bonding. It's really adorable.
I hope Eric get to know abt Leo n punch him hard
Bw ua story z refreshing dear, waiting for next update
Originally posted by: gauriangel
I had almost forgotten abt this story..
Good u r updating it...but pls be regular...Eric n nandini cute bhai behan...N no guesses for who the uninvited guest is??Manik
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