Collision - A MaNan Fan-Fiction Ch-11, pg-31 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Shenz, it was greatπŸ˜ƒ
This kind of brother sister relation is very cute and yes Leo and Manik both are jerksπŸ˜†
I wish that the guest is Manik with his signature grin sticked on his faceπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
That was awesome.
Thanks for the pm
Lol I hope  it is manik at the door and he is Eric's best friend.
It will be too much fun that way.
I really appreciate your writing girl
It is very nice and refined
I want a lot of manan scenes
Missing them badly
And I want you to try a little bit of humor
Your story is a little  serious
Just a little suggestion hope u won't mind bye

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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
ahhh that is a very interesting update... loved the bonding between Nandini and Eric...
so who is the Good morning guest?? Leo, Shelly or THE MANIK MALHOTRA???πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Frankly, I think the pace of the chapter was a bit slow but necessary at the same time.

We would have to wait longer for the next update, hai na? :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
That's Manik hain nah?
I luv d bro - sis bonding. It's really adorable.
I hope Eric get to know abt Leo n punch him hard
Bw ua story z refreshing dear, waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
I had almost forgotten abt this story..
Good u r updating it...but pls be regular...

Eric n nandini cute bhai behan...

N no guesses for who the uninvited guest is??

Manik

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
The update was incredible ! ^_^
This story is so different and that's why I like it so much ! :D
The conversation between the half turned complete sibling was really really good ! Loved it to the core ! 
Thanks a lot for the pm ! I really forgot to search. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
The only thing that the story lacks is the amount of response that you should be getting for writing something so beautiful and interesting. With new characters this gives the story a new and fresh approach and I cannot stop myself for checking your page almost every time to see whether you had updated or not. Stories like these are hard to come by and I really want this one to be very successful.
Please update soon I am totally fallin for this FF. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Hey
Awsm update...
And it's so cute bro and sis relation u described
So adorable yr...
And nw more interesting facts r abt to open ...
I m egarly waiting to read more... Can't wait to knw who came to their home...
Keep smiling
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Hey shenz thanku soo much for the pm dear...
Loved the update 
The bro sis bond was superbb but I wish the update would have contained a bit of manik  too since the wait has been too long but its okkay
And I think the uninvited guest on the door is manik
Isn't he??
Well it will be so interesting if manik turns out  to be eric's frnd 
Well to know all these we definitely need an early update
So give the next update fast fast
Since u write soo well pls try to be a little regular na coz I luv ur story and its tough to wait that much
Now waiting for the next...