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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Thanx to everyone those who liked n commented on my ff..

So here is the nxt part..

Enjoy reading...

Chapter-9(B)... The Past revelation

He finally reached the villa bck...

He was abt to wake nandu up but seeing such a angelic beauty sleeping he couldn't do so...

He slowly picked her in his arms n headed towards the villa...

As soon as he entered he found rohan n cabir waiting for them in hall..

Rohan: Manik choti... Choti thik toh hain naa..??

Manik: Yaa don't worry she is absolutely fine.. Woh bass she was tired so she slept in the car..

Cabir: Thank god she is fine...

Rohan: Waisey manik where was she..??

Now manik was hell worried wat to tell..

Manik : Woh she had some urgent work aur she didn't want to disturb u so woh chup chaap chali gayi... N while returning she wanted some fresh air so she was relaxing in the park.. Mujhe wahi mili...

Rohan: Yeh choti vi naah ek baari bataa kar nahi jaa sakti thi.. ?? I was so worried.. Par nahi humeshaa ki tarah sab kuch akele hi samvaalnaa hotaa hain.. Kyaa karu main iska..?? Samjhti kyu nahi hain..??? Waisey thanx for this manik..

Manik : Its alright...

Rohan: Waisey raat bohot ho gayi hain.. I guess u should sleep..

Manik: Yaa.. I will drop her to the room.. Aap vi jaao so jaao..

Rohan: Okay.. N thanx once again...

Manik headed toward the room.. He placed nandu on the bed.. He was abt to leave wen nandu hold his hand n started to murmur" plz manik don't leave me.. Plz trust me.. I love u love u alot.. Plz don't leave me "..

Manik sat beside her n started to ruffle her hair n was consoling" shh..!! Main yahi hoon.. M not going u anywhere.. Hmm.. So jst sleep"..

Soon nandini became silent n slept peacefully...

Manik covered her wid blanket n got up from the bed.. He pecked her forehead n was abt to leave wen he notice cabir near the door..

Manik: Cabir..!! Tu yaha..!!

Cabir: Manik niche tuney jhoot bolaa thaa naa..!! Nandini kaha thi..?? Woh thik toh hain naa..??

Manik : Cabir tu sahi thaa...!!

Cabir: Sahi thaa..?? He gave a confusing look..

Manik: I think we were at fault yaar.. Pata hain aaj nandini ki baatey sun kar aisaa lagtaa hain ki we did a big mistake...

Cabir: Manik tu uss raat ki baat kar raha hain na??

Manik : Haa yaar.. Arrey aaj jo vi suna naa uske baad m not even able to say anything.. Tujhe pata hain cabir bcoz of us aaj nandini ne apni puri family kho di hain..!!

Cabir: Wat..?? Yeh kya keh raha hain tu..??

Manik: Haa bro.. Main jo vi keh raha hu its true..

Then he told everything wat nandu told him...

" Jst look at her.. Kaisey ho gayi hain.. Seeing her nobody can say ki issney apne andar itna dard chupaa rakhaa hain.. Arrey in 4 saalo main issne kaisey khudko samvaala hogaa..?? Manik said all this looking toward nandini..

Cabir was freezed at his place listening the truth.. He was totally numb.. Finally he managed to speak.." Yeh kya kar diya yaar humne..!! She lost everything bcoz of us...!! Sayad issiliye uss din nandini aisey baat kar rahi thi..!!"

Manik : Huh..?? He gaved a confused look..

Cabir: Uss din jab main nandini se maafi mangne gaya thaa na tab nandini said ki she can't forgive anyone of us jab tak woh khudko maaf na karde... Arrey she said to me ki she had done a great mistake jiske liye woh khudko kavi nahi karpaayegi..

I nvr thought k kuch aisaa hoga..!!

M: Exactly cabir aaj vi jab woh sab kuch keh rahi thi naa toh she was badly blaming herself... She is so hurt yaar puri tarah se toot chuki hain...

C: Toh ab kya karney kaa sochaa hain tuney..??

M: Kal main mumbai jaa raha hu..

C: Mumbai..??

M: Haa..!! Mujhe uss raat ki sachaai jaanni hain jo woh insaan bataa saktaa hain.. I need to knw the truth..

C: Thik hain fir main vi chalungaa.. Uss raat nandini ki baat na sunkar jo galti mainey ki hain naa mujhe woh sudhaarna hain...

M: Thik hain.. Toh kal be ready we r leaving by the early morning flight...

C: Okay...

They headed towards their room...

It was a new morning wid new plans...

Manbir by taking rohan permission had already left for mumbai,...

It was 8 in the morning wen rohan came to nandini room... He saw her sleeping.. So he pecked her forehead n was abt to leave bt was stopped by nandini's voice..

N: Gud morning vai..

R: Gud morning.. Mujhe toh lagaa thaa ki meri choti so rahi hai...??

N: Haa vi aur na vi...

Nandini was hving a hangover due to last night..

R: Arrey kya hua mera baccha..?? Hangover..??

N: Haa woh thodi bohat..!!!

R: Okay main robin se kehkar tumhaare liye coffee vijwaata hu.. U take rest...

N: Arrey aisey kaisey take rest... Fab 5 ko dekhna hain naa..

R: Arrey aaj manik aur cabir mumbai gaye hain due to some emergency...So aaj kaam ae chutti..

N: vai u knw na album khatam karne k liye we only hv 14 days left aur aap ne unhe jaaney diya..??

R: Arrey meri workholic choti it was an emergency yaar toh kaisey jaaney nahi detaa.. Aur waise kal raat manik ne jo vi kiya toh i definitely owe it to him..

N: Aisaa kya kiya tha manik ne..??

R: Don't u remember ... He was the one jisne kal raat tumhe dhoodaa n brought u home safely..

N: Manik mujhe laya thaa..??

R: Haa... He is really a nice person... Aur waise vi unho ne kaha ki they will be bck till night... So aaj u too take rest..

N: Okay vai..

R: Aur haa baad mein office mat aajaanaa.. Today jst take rest... Haa..!! M getting late main chalta hu... Aur bed se uthna mat will send ur coffee here only..

N: Thik hai vai.. U too take care aur haa kaam jada ho toh call me..

R: Okay meri maa.. Now bye..!!

N: Bye..

Rohan left the room...

Nandini pov;

Manik mujhe ghar laaya thaa.. Aah..!! Y can't i remember... Mujhe aache se yaad hain i went to receive the call...

Flashbck..

Nandu went to garden to receive the call..

N: Hello..

Person: Hello mam its me aman.. Apka mumbai ka jo ghar hain naa there is a person who want to buy it.. Woh iss ghar k liye acchi khaasi kimat dene k liye taiyaar hain Actually usne kaha hain ki usey ye jameen chaahiye so once he get he will make a office over here..

N: Mainey kitni baar kaha hain ki mujhe woh ghar woh jagah nahi bechni hain...

Person: Bt maam woh bohot hi acchi rakam dene k liye taiyaar hain.. He is even ready to pay for the house.. Waisey vi woh jali hui ghar k liye kaun itni price degaa..

N: Jst shut up.. Woh sirf ek jalaa hua ghar nahi hain.. Its the most imp thing in my life... Aur tum keh rahe ho ki main ye ghar bech du... Ye ghar ki price naa koi nahi de saktaa... Samjhee naa.. Aur aage se tumne iss cheez k baareme discuss karne liye call kiya na toh i will fire u... Get that..

Person: Sorry mam... Main unhe manaa kardetaa hu..

N: Okay...

She hung up the call

Flashbck ends..

Uss call k baad i was so disturbed.. Once again o was remembering the worst day of my life.. Issiliye i went out for some relaxation..

I was in the park drinking...

Fir kya hua..!! Ouch..!! My head it hurts..

Oh i remember manik waha aaya thaa.. He asked me to come wid him but i denied.. Uske baad...!! Hm!m..!! Y couldn't i remember..

I hope mainey manik se kuch aisi waisi baatein naa ki ho... I hope ki manik didn't saw me weak.. Nahi aisaa nahi hua hogaa.. Kavi nahi m strong enough to stand infront of him.. Yeah...

End of pov...

She went inside washroom got freshed n started to watch a movie to light up her mood.. Here manbir were in plane..

There was only 10 min left to reach mumbai...

Manik was continuously looking out of window... His trance was broken by cabir voice..

C: Kya soch raha hai??

M: Cabir mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai..

C: Dar..??

M: Haa..!! Kal jo kuch vi nandini ne kaha uske baad m damn sure uss raat nandini ki koi galti nahi thi..

I m scared to be proved wrong for that day... Tu jaanta hai m really scared par main chaahta hu to be proved wrong.. Main chaahtaa hu ki nandini innocent prove ho..

C: Yaa u r right..!!

M: Cabir kya hogaa ab...

C: Woh toh main nahi jaanta bt i can sense a gud n positive future... Don't worry jo kuch vi hogaa humaare valey k liye hi hogaa..

M: Hmm..!!

Finally the plane landed n now they were in mumbai...

In no time they reached a bunglow n they directly headed toward a room..

A person was sleeping in the room..

C: Oye..!! Get up..

Person: Who is it this early morning yaar.. Jst leave frm here n let me sleep..

Manik: Ye aisey nahi uthegaa..

He brought a jug n pour the water..

The person woked up wid a jrk..

Person: Wat the fu..!! Problem kya hain y can't u let me sleep in a peace yaar...

M: Coz uthney ka time hochukaa hain Mr. Vivaan Malhotra.. (Introducing kushal tondon as vivaan malhotra..

He is manik's cousin in my story..

B4 he used to live abroad bt 4 yrs bck he came to mumbai n since then he is living there..)

V: Arrey manik..!! Tu itni subah yaha kya kar raha hain..?? Meri yaad aah rahi thi kya..?? Aisa toh ho nahi sakta coz uss raat k baad tuney toh mujhse baat karna hi band kardiyaa thaa toh achaanak yaha mujhse milney aaney ka reason..??

M: Mujhe sach janna hain..!!

V: Kaisa sach bro..??

M: plz ye natak mere saamne toh bilkul vi mat kar n jst speak up...

V: Hey bro..!! Relax yaar..!! Chill maarna yeh itna hyper kyu horaha hain..!!!!

M: Mujhe sach janna hain..!!!

V: Arrey wat do u mean by sach janna hain.. Yeh tu vi jaanta hain aur main vi jaanta hu ki sach wahi hain jo uss raat tumsab ne dekhaa thaa..

M: Jhoot...!! Woh sab jhoot thaa.. Nandini was innocent...

V: Arrey yeh tujhe kisne kaun si patti padhaa di..?? I guess Uss raat sab kuch clear ho chukaa thaa toh wats the point to raise this topic once again woh 4 saalo baad... Its high time yaar.. M: Exactly its high time.. Bohot waqt hochukaa hain iss jhoot ke saath jitey jitey ab mujhe sab sach janna hain.. So plz speak up..

V: Dekh vai joh hain so hain..plz accept the truth..

M: Truth accept karne k liye first i should knw the truth right..!!!

V: Toh tu kehnna kya chahtaa hain dat tujhe sach nahi pata??

M: Pata hain... Ofcourse pata hain.. Bt mujhe janna hain ki tuney aisaa kyu kiya..??

V: N wat made u think ki main tujhe kuch vi bataaunga..??

M: Coz..!! Coz..!!

V: Coz woz chod... Jst chuck all this.. Arrey insab ko huye 4 saal bit chukey hain so let it be na yaar.. Kyu fir se khud ko wahi takleef dena chaataa hai??

M: Kaisey let it be haa kaisey..?? Arrey tujhe pata vi hain ki uss galti ki wajah se kya kya hogayaa hain..

V: jo kuch vi hua hain m sure its really smthg thats none of my concern.. So jst let it go..

M: Jab teri yeh tedhi medhi baatein saaf saaf bataa rahi hain ki uss raat aur vi story hain jo hamey nahi ptaa.. Toh tu saaf saaf kyu nahi bataa detaa..

V: Dekho mere paas tum jaiso k liye muft ka waqt nahi hain so its better ki u guyz jst leave..

C: Hum kahi jaaenge.. Jab tak tu humey sab sach nahi bataa tah tab tak hum yaha se kahi nahi jaaney waaley samjhaa naa..!!

V: Ooo..!! Trying to threaten me.. Dar gaya mein.. Nahi seriously m scared.. Koi bachaao mujhe ...!! Haa.. Jst cut this drama n leave warna i guess mujhe guards ko bulaaney mein jada waqt nahi lagegaa..

C: Arrey jisko bulaana hain bulaale.. Hum nahi darte.. Sach jaaney bager toh hum yaha se jaaney se rahe..!!

M: Cabir lets go.. Yeh humey bataaegaa..!!

C: Par manik..!!

M: Cabir...!!

C: Thik hain lets go..

They were abt to leave bt were stopped by a voice..

V: Wait..!! Manik malhotra ko kuch janna ho aur woh aisey hi chalaa jaaye aisaa toh ho nahi sakta.. Main kuch bataau yaa naa bataau sach toh tu jaan kar rahega toh y not frm me.. Main hi tujhe sab bataa detaa hu warna kya pataa baad mey main akele fas jaao..!!

Mujhe pata nahi tujh se kisne kya kaha ki today u r ready to listen everything unlike that day.. Its gud to knw ki finally aaj tu puri baat sunney k liye taiyaar hain..

Tu toh jaanta hi hai ki teraa yeh cousin jo hain woh canada main akele rehta thaa.. As u knw ki my parents r no more toh i had to look my financial condition myself..U must even knw ki main gambling jaisey cheezo mein kitna involved thaa.. One day i lost badly.. Mujhe paiso ki jaroorat thii so i contact nyonika n u must knw ki nyonika k liye iss duniya k kuch vi cheez free nahi hain.. For her everything is give n take.. Woh mujhe paisey dene k liye taiyaar toh hpgayi bt she wanted me to do her work in exchange so i agreed.. He started to tell them frm start...

Flashbck;

Vivaan came to mumbai n went to meet nyonika...

N: Toh vivaan so as we decided i will give u money if u do my work..

V: I knw that.. N i will do it..!! Par mujhe karna kya hain..??

N: Jadaa kuch nahi bas manik aur nandini ko alag karnaa hain...

V: Nandini?? Who is she..??

N: She is manik's gf.. Uski wajahse i m losing control over manik.. Jis bad manik ko mainey raise kiyaa thaa she is changing him into good.. Aur main aisaa honey nahi desakti.. This grl is hving more power on manik.. Issey pehle ki things get worst mujhe in dono ko alag karna hogaa...

V: Watever.. I m on... Plan kya hain...!!??

N: According to my plan u hv to make nandini fall for u... Mujhe manik ko yeh dikhaana hain that this grl is similar to every middle class grl jo rich ladko ko unke paiso k liye fasaati hain.. N once she gets a person more rich toh woh uske paas chali jaati hain..

V: Bas itna saa kaam..??

N: Yeh koi itna saa kaam nahi hai..!! Nandini waisi ladki nahi hai.. So how will u make her fall for u..??

V: Don't worry nyonika vivaan malhotra ki hotness ko koi jaadaa dino tak resist nahi kar pataa so she will fall for me for sure..

N: Woh toh pataa chal hi jaayegaa.. Anyways mainey tumhe space mey in classical section as a new entry admission dilaadi hain so that u can spend more time wid that commoner...

V: Okay.. So will see u tmrw in clz..

N: okay.. N i hope u won't dissappoint me..

V: ofcourse... Nxt day came..

Vivaan made a super cool entry in his new black audi A8 which was given by nyonika to show him more richer..

He came out of the cars..

Every girl passing around him were ogling him.. Their jaw drops seeing such a hot hansum hunk in the clz while all the boys were jealous seeing him...

He went inside the clz n went to canteen ..

Fab5 n nanvni were sitting together..

Vivaan went toward them..

V: Hey guyz wassup..??

Manik: Vivaan.?? Wat r u doing here..?? R canada se wapas kab aaya..??

V: Bas kal hi.. N rahi sawaal yaha honey ka toh i hv joined space so i will obviously be here around..

Manik: But y didn't u told me b4..??

V: Arrey main vul gaya thaa.. Actually i was so bzy coz of shifting so waqt hi nahi milaa..

Manik: Okay..

V: Waisey who r these two pretty ladies..?? Inke baare mey to tuney mujhe kavi nahi bataaya..

Cabir: Vivaan.. They r our new frn nandini n navya...

N navni he is vivaan manik's cousin n our frnd..

3 of them greeted each other..

C: Waisey vivaan in which section did u joined..?? Rock right..??

V: Actually it's classical..!!

Mukti: Wat..?? I mean i nvr thought u were interested in classical..

V: Yaa actually its my new n latest interest...

Cabir: Waisey navni r also frm classical so they can help u..

V: Thats grt.. Waisey as per routine i guess we hv a classical class to attend right now.. Right nandini..??

Nandu: Oh haa ... Main vi naa tum logo ki chakarro main vul hi jaati hu..

V: Toh shall we guyz leave..??

Navya: Tum log jaao humaara tabyat kharaab hai toh hum ghar ja rahe hain..

Nandu: Thik hain.. Take care..

Nandu n vivaan were abt to leave bt was stopped by manik's voice..

M: Nandini..!!

N: Hmm..!!

M: Hmm kya..?? Idhar aao..

Nandini came toward him..

Manik: Will miss .. Pata hain tumhe vi naah rock lenaa chaahiye thaa toh it would hv been more fun..

C: Haa.. Fun toh hota hi.. Tum dono ko saath mein rehne k liye waqt jada milta naa..!!

M: Cabir...!!

C: Wat cabir..!! Main jhoot bol raha hu kya dosto..

Dhrlyati in unison"No..!!"

C: Dekha..!!

M: Haa..!! Now stop it...

Manik kissed nandu's forhead n said will miss u...!!

N: Miss u too..

C: Guyz humey plz tum dono kaa romance nahi dekhma so avi k liye plz stop here..

M:Cabir..,!!!

C: Kya har waqt cabir cabir karta hai.. Main toh jo fact hai wahi keh raha hu.. Tu toh maukaa nahi chodta naa romance kaa..Aur manik thodaa toh saram kar matlb kahi vi suru ho jataa hain..

Nandini was blushing listening to them..

M: Hogayaa tera..!!

C: Yeh toh mujhe puchna chaahiye thaa ki hogayaa tum dono kaa..!!

M: Cabir bas yaar..!!

Vivaan: I guess i m missing smthg.. Scene kya hain dosto.. I could sense ki nandini aur manik k bich..!!

M: Yaa.. She is my gf.. So class mein do take gud care of her..

V: Sure dude.. Then see u later.. Chaley nandini..??

N: Haa..

They left for the class..

As nyonika's plan vivaan n nandu were paired up together as vivaan was new entry so vivaan need some guidance n nandu was the bst guide anyone could hv... Vivaan was giving all his bst to impress nandu.. Finally the class got over n they were walking in the corridor laughing on some joke vivaan cracked... Fab5 were also passing by.. Finally they all met each other.. Nandu was still laughing..

C: Lagta hai nandu pagal ho gayi hai..?? Sirf hasey hi jaa rahi hai..!!

N: Woh vivaan nah he is really fun..

M: Lagta hai kaafi achi dosti ho gayi hain...

V: Woh nandu is my guide.. She is helping me in classical ...

M: Ooo guide hai.. Thats good.. Waisey nandu mujhe tumse baat karni hain chalo yaha se... Saying this he dragged her...

The day went... Some more days passed... It was same.. Manik was being more n more jealous seeing vivaan n nandu bonding..

So he asked her to maintain some distsnce as he was not liking it n nandu used to calm him by saying that vivaan n she.. They r jst frnds...

Nowadays manan get less time to spend together as vivaan use to make nandu bzy wid music...

Slowly vivaan started to flirt wid nandu.. Some time while practice he use to come near nandu n try to seduce her... He tried his bst but nandu was no such grl.. He couldn't affect her...

He was in nyonika's office..

V: U were right.. Nandini aisi ladki nahi hai.. She loves manik alot... She can't be seduced..

N: Wat do u mean ki tumse ye kaam nahi ho paayegaa..??

V: Arrey nandini waisi ladki hain hi nahi toh ye sab kaisey hogaa... ?? Its not possible.. Aur waisi vi aaj kal she is trying to maintain distance as m flirting wid her more n more..

N: Okay then lets do it in a nxt way..

V: Nxt way..??

N: hmm.. Saying this she gave him a devil smile... Flashbck ends...

V: I must say this girl nah manik she really loved u...

Arrey jis vivaan par saari girls marti hain she was ignoring him...

M: Agar aisaa thaa toh later on jabvi mujhe nandini tumhaare saath flirt karte kyu dikhti..??

V: Nyonika's evil plan u knw.. Listen..!!!

Flashbck...

Nyonika asked the peon to send nandini in her office..

As per plan when nandini reached near her cabin n was abt to open the door she stopped due to vivaan voice...

V: Don't worry nyonika nandini bohot jald mere jaal !e faseygi.. U jst relax..

N: How can i relax... Its been almost 2 week aur u r not able to seduce that commoner..!!

V: I said na don't worry.. Meri hotness ko koi jada der resist nahi karsakta.. Aur nandini vi bohot jald mujhse impress ho jaayegi... N kuch hi dino mein manik ko woh meri baahon mein milegi..!!

N: I hope so.. Coz mujhe kuch vi kar kar undono ko alag karna hain..!!

V: Ofcourse...!!!

Nandu was listening everything..

Nandu pov;

So this is their plan.. Ab dekhna how will i expose u.. Main manik ko avi kuch nahi bataaungi i will expose him infront of fab5 wid full prove coz mein bina evidence uss par ilzaam nahi lagaa sakti...

End of pov;

N: Okay then i will be waiting for the day u separate them..!!

V: N i will be waiting for the money...

After listening all this nandu went frm there..

V: Aur waise vi... He was cut off by nyo

N: She has left...

V: I hope ki jaisaa aapne kaha waisaa hi ho.. N u don't regret ur decision of exposing our plan in front of her..

N: Don't worry jitna main iss ladki ko jaanti hu woh avi manik ko kuch nahi bataaeygi.. U knw she is kind of bhaaratiya naari jo har problem khud hi solve karna chaahegi.. So i knw nandini kisi ko vi kuch nahi bataayegi... Infact she will try to expose u jiske liye she will do tit for tat.. Ab dekhna nandini vi tumhaare saath flirt karegi n oneday tumhe fasaa kar expose karna chaahegi.. Ussi flirting ka faidaa uthaana hain.. Jab vi woh tumhaare saath flirt karey we hv to make sure ki manik woh dekhle bt she should be unaware abt his presence.. N finally after 1 week hum humara akhri daau khelengey.. Bechaari nandini apney hi jaal mein faseygi..

V: I hope aisaa ho ho..

N: Don't worry sab aisaa hi hoga coz ab humaari planning sahi hain..

V: Okay then see you later.. Saying this he left..

As per their planning nandini was doing the same..

She was also trying to flirt wid him...

He texted nyo to send manik..

Nyo asked peon to send manik to practice room..

He stopped at the door seeing the sight..

Nandu's arms were around vivaan neck...

N: Waisey i must sey vivaan u r really hot..!!

V: Accha...!! Saying this he pulled her more closer to him...

N: Hmm..!! Itna hot student ho toh practice mey man kaisey lagegaa..!!

V: Toh kis cheej mein man lagegaa..??

N: U really want me to tell it...

V: Hmm..!!

Manik was fuming wid anger he left frm there widout saying anything...

Nxt day also he found them on staircase on same way.. Nandu was flirting wid him...

Same happens for 3 days.. Manik was fuming wid anger he had no idea wat should he do..?? Y was nandini behaving in such a way..!!

Manik pov;

Nandini yeh sab kya kar rahi hain.. Aur kyu..??

Ho kya gaya hain usse?? I need to talk to her...

End of pov...

Saying this he left to meet nandini.. The nxt moment he freezed on his place seeing the sight infront...

Vivaan was sitting on chair n nandu was sitting on his lap...

V: I must say u r really hot.. I would love to explore this body..

N: Accha...!! Par manik..??

V: Don't worry abt manik main ussey kuch nahi bataaunga.. N yaa i will pay u for every night u spend wid me..

N: Thats like my boy.. Manik ko toh main chod nahi sakti.. Aisey soney ki andey dene waali murgi mujhe aur kaha milegi... Bt ya main tumhe vi upset nahi karungi.. So kal raat 10bajey hotel blue diamond room no.305.. I will make u enjoy..

V: Okay.. Will love it.. Aur haa tumhe jitney paisey chaahiye jst tell me..

N: Woh toh mein tumhe baad mein bataaungi.. Prepare urself.. M sure kal raat meri hotness ko tum resist nahi karpaaogey..

V: Mujhe karna vi nahi hain... I wanna enjoy u..

Manik was all numb listening this...

He quitely went frm there..

Flashbck ends... Kitni bewakoof thi woh ladki yaar.. Kitni jaldi humaari jhaasey main aagayi.. I really pity her...!! Vivaan said wid a devil smile on his face..

Toh iskaa matlab nandini she was not cheating on me..!! Woh sab she was doing to expose u..!! Asked manik in a low tone..

Hmm..!! Replied vivaan

Arrey aagey vi toh suno.. Saying this he again started...

Flashbck...

The nxt day came... It was 6 in the evening nandini came to hotel room n fixed a camera in the room wid the help of a servant...

She returned bck home.. She dressed up ...

Vivaan was on his way to the hotel

Vivaan pov;

Manik toh aaj aayegaa.. Bt main baaki sab ko kaisey bulaau.. I mean fab5.. Ek kaam karta hu.. Mainey uhne party ke bahaaney yaha bulaata hu.. Thats right.. He texted everyone..

End of pov..

Kyunki tumlog 10 bajey aane waale the.. Toh scene to set karna thaa nah so i called nandini at 8 aur woh maan vi gayi.. She came at 8...!!

Vivaan reached the hotel room...

Nandini was already there...

N: Ooo..!! Aaj lagta hain garmi kuch jaadaa hi badh gayi hai right..??

V: Ofcourse.. U r looking hot..

N: Par main toh tumhaari baat kar rahi thi..

V: So r u ready to excite me tonight... I want to see the wildest site of urs..

N: Ofcourse.. I would love to show it. Bt usse pehle thodi drink ho jaaye..

V: Ofcourse bt u will hv to drink it wid me..

N: Bt i don't drink..

V: Haa toh ek kaam karte hain lets hv a glass of juice..

N: Okay.. Saying this she ordered juice..

In no time juice was brought..

N: I will serve it for u..

V: Ofcourse..

Nandini turned around n was pouring the juice in the glass..

Usney chup ke se nasey ki goli vivaan ke glass mey daaldi..

Par kehte hain nah dusmano ki aankhon se kuch nahi chupta... Vivaan saw it..

Nandu brought both the glass..

N: Take it..

V: Thanx...!!

Vivaan pov;

How do i exchange this glasses.. Kaisey karu..!! Yaa this will be better..!!

End of pov;

He some how spill some drops of juice on nandu...

V: Oh god.. Mainey yeh kya kar diyaa..

N: Its alright..!! Main saaf kar kar aati hu...

V: Okay.. Jaldi aana.. Jada intezaar nahi hotaa..!!

N: Ofcourse...

Saying this she went inside the washroom..

She returned bck in no time..

Vivaan passed her the glass bt it was exchanged.. Both finished the juice..

In few minutes nandini fainted down...

I made her lay down on bed n called a lady servant n asked her to change nandu's dress... I made her wear my shirt...

Kuch hi der mein tumlog vi aagaye

Flashback end...

Uske baad kya hua i guess u remember it nicely..

Listening all this manik frozed at his place.. He started to remember...

Flashbck...

All of them were totally shocked.. Manik was freezed on his place.. He was totally numb..

Finally mukti geared up the courage...

She went near them n shouted.."Get up u cheaters.."

Listening her voice vivaan woke up...

Slowly nandu also started to get conscious...

Mukti again shouted.."Toh yeh thaa tumhara party haa..!! Yeh sab dekhne k liye humey bulaaya thaa tumne..!!"

Nandu got up catching her head n saying" ahh..!! My head it hurts..!!"

Mukti now started to shout on nandu" Tum mey sharam naam ki koi cheez nahi hai haa..?? How dare u cheat manik..??

Wat..?? Yeh kya keh rahi ho tum..mukti..?? She said still holding her head

Oh really.. Tumhe sach me samajh nahi aaraha.. Jst stop ur nonsense... Mukti yelled back..

Nandu looked around n realized the situation..

She went near manik n said" Manik tum jaisa soch rahe ho waisaa kuch vi nahi hain.. I can explain..."

Navya take her to washroom n get her dress changed..!! Manik said in low voice Navya took her to washroom.. Nandu had spare dress in her bag so she changed in a white kurti n jeans n came out in few minutes..

She directly goes near manik hold his hand n says" Manik u trust me right.. Ye sab jo tumne dekhaa na yeh sach nahi hain..!!"

Manik freed his hand frm hers.. This left nandu shocked..

Now nandu questioned him" U trust me right..??"

Ab rehne vi do nay baby.. Yeh sab kaa kuch faida nahi hain.. So let it be naa.. Waisey vi in logo ne sab sach dekh hi liyaa hain toh ab tum kya kar sakti ho.. Said vivaan trying to come near nandini..

She pushed him away n shouted" Dur raho mujhse"

Arrey kuch waqt pehle toh mujhe chod nahi rahi thi aur ab dur rehne ko keh rahi ho..!! Said vivaan

Bakwaas band karo apni.. Yeh kya kuch vi boley jaa rahe ho.. Aisaa kuch vi nahi hua thaa.. Shouted nandini

Oh common nandu baby.. Ye humaare frnds hain.. Ab in sey kya chupaa naa... Waisey vi i must say u r really wild...!! Said vivaan naughtily...

Shut up.. Tumhaare aur mere bich kuch vi nahi hua thaa...!!

Trust me manik yeh sab iska aur nyonika kaa plan thaa.. They wanted to separate us.. Agar tumhe meri baaton par yakin nahi hain toh wait i will show u the camera which i fixed to expose him...

She went near a vase where she fixed the cam bt it was not there..

Arrey yahi toh lagayaa thaa kaha gaya...??

Stop fooling me nandini.. Band karo apna yeh dramaa.. Said manik looking away frm nandu..

Manik mein sach keh rahi hu.. Plz trust me..!! Pleaded nandini..

Oh common nandini plz jst stop this drama.. Arrey they all hv saw us.. Aur yeh kya nyonika aur camera kaa naya drama lagaa rakha hain..!! Jst admit naa ki u did all this for money... Said vivaan

Tum plz bich mein mat bolo.. Yeh jo kuch vi horaha hain naa tumhaare wajah se hi ho raha hain samjhe naa... She yelled at vivaan

Accha u meant to say ki i forced u for this.. Tum yaha khud ko marzi sey nahi aayi thi kya..?? Asked vivaan..

Tum baat ko kahi aur lejaa rahe ho.. Baat yaha mera honey mein marzi thi yaa nahi iss baat ko nahi ho rahi.. Said nandini..

I jst want one answer nandini tum yaha apni marzi sey aayi thi yaa nahi.. Aur haa jhoot toh bilkul vi mat bolna..!! Said manik

Manik its jst ki main woh..!! She was cut off in btn

Haa yaa naa nandini.. Asked manik

Wohi toh mein explain kar rahi hu..

I don't want any explanation.. Jst say me yes or no..

Manik woh..!!

Haa yaa naa nandini..!! This time he shouted..

Haa main yaha apni marzi se aayi thi bt..!!

She was again cut off..

Bas ..!! That's enough.. Ab issey jada kya bologi..

N:Manik plz give me a chance i can explain... Plz mujhe mauka to do..!!!

M: Kaisa mauka nandini.. Firse kuch jhoot bolne kaa mauka..?? Firse mujhe apne baaton mein fasaane kaa maukaa..?? Firse mujhe dhokaa dene kaa mauka..?? Bolo naa kaisaa mauka chaahiye tumhe..??

N: Manik how can u not trust me ..?? How..??

M: Kaisey trust karu jab khud mainey sab apne aankhon se dekhaa hain.. From last 1 week sab dekh raha thaa mein how u were flirting wid vivaan.. Aur kal u were talking wid him abt money for spending tonight wid him...

N: Manik its nothing like that..!?

M: Accha toh fir yeh kyaa hain.. He said throwing a paper on her face.. It was a bank statement which hv written that 30 lacs rupees has been transferred to nandu's account frm vivaan's account..

Yeh sab vi kya jhoot hain..

N: Manik in sab ke baaremey mujhe kuch nahi pata..

M: Really kuch nahi pata par mujhe toh sab pata hain.. Kaisey u deal wid him for some money.. Tum aisi ladki ho naa toh thik hain i would also like to spend a night wid u.. N yaa i wanna see ur wildest sight... Dont dissappoint me... TohBolo na kitne paisey logi.. Tell me..!!

N: Manik yeh tum kyaa keh rahe ho.. Its nothg like that.. Tum aisaa soch vi kaisey sakte ho.. Aur rahi baat toh me flirting wid vivaan toh i can explain.. Joh kuch vi tumne suna kal woh sab i can explain..!!

M: Arrey nahi sunni hain mujhe tumhaari koi vi baat.. Kyu ki tum ab jo vi bologi naa jhoot hi bologi..?!

N: Aisaa nahi hain manik plz ek baari let me tell u everything..

Dhruv: Plz nandini ab aur nahi... Mainey kavi nahi socha thaa ki tum aisi niklo gi... How can u cheat on my buddy.. Haa how can u..??

N: Dhruv tum sab ko galat faimi huyi hai.. Yeh sab sach nahi hain..

Mukti: Really..!! Do u knw wat m toh surprise ki itna karney ke baad vi how r u able to stand infront of us..!!

Tum jaisi ladki ko naa main acche se jaanti hu..

Alya: Exactly.. Don't u hv any kind of shame in u..?? Mainey toh kavi nahi socha thaa ki tum aisi niklogi.. Kuch paiso k liye khud ko..?? Chee!!!

N: Plz yaar for god sake ek baari meri puri baat to sunlo.. Plz..!!

She was pleading badly..

Mukti: No manik don't.. Yeh tumhe firse apni iss maasoom se chehre me fasaana chahti hain..

Alya: Yaa manik.. She is trying to win u.. Plz tum firsey iske jhaasey mein nahi aasakte..

Mukti: Alya is right.. In jaisi ladki ko toh naa mar jaana chaahiye.. Bloody bit** ... How dare she do this to u.. Shakal se toh kitni voli vaali lagti ho par kaam aissey..

M: Don't worry guyz ab naa iss kaa kisi vi baat ka mujh par koi fark nahi padegaa..

N: Plz koi toh meri puri baat suno.. Navya.. U believe me right.. Tum toh mujhe samajhti ho naa u knw i can't do this right...

Na: Huh..!! Tum par believe karu woh vi itnaa sab kuch dekne ke baat.. Kavi nahi.. Agar mujhe pata hotaa ki tum aisi ladki ho toh i would nvr hv made u frnd.. Kavi tumse dosti nahi karte.. Pata hain tum mein aur harshad mein koi fark hi nahi hain... Tum sab ek jaisey ho.. Nich kisam ke...

N: Guyz plz give me a chance to explain everything.. Jaisa tum sab soch rahey ho waisa kuch vi nahi hain.. Plz let me speak my words.. Let me clear everything..

M: Ab in sab chijo k baad bolne k liye kya reh gaya hain nandini.. Haa kya bologi..??

Mukti: Aur waisey vi kuch bolne ka vi faida nahi hain coz we knw ki tum jo vi bologi na sab jhoot hi bologi..

Alya: Exactly.. Manik yeh tumne firse apni seedhi saadhi baaton mein fasaana chahti hain.. Don't listen to her..

N: Nahi manik aisa kuch vi nahi hain.. Yeh sab jo vi tumne dekha i can explain.,

M: Just shutup.. Don't utter a single word frm ur mouth.. Mujhe kuch vi nahi sunna hain.. Waise vi sab sach toh saamne hi hain toh wat will u explain ha.. I had enough of it.. So ab chup chap yaha se niklo..

N: Manik plz aleast give me one chance to speak..

M: Enough nandini.. Mainey kaha na i don't wanna hear ur voice..

N: Cabir tum toh hamesha kehte ho na k main tumhaari behen jaisi hoon.. Toh tumhe to apni behen par yakin hain na ki woh aisaa kavi nahi karsakti... Plz tum insab ko samjhaao na yeh baat.. Agar tum kahoge na toh yeh sab jaroor maanenge... Plz cabir kuch toh kaho..!!! She was holding his hands n pleading infront of him very badly..

Cabir removed her hand frm his n turnec his face to nxt side..

N: Cabir..!! She called his name really helplessly.. Par sayad aaj nandu k aansuo se kisi ko fark hi nahi par raha thaa..

Cabir was still standing facing to opposite side.. Aur issi k saath nandu ka last hope vi khatam ho gaya thaa..!!

Nandu was on her knees pleading to everyone

N: Plz guyz trust me.. Yeh sab inkaa plan hai..,plz maano meri baat plz..

Manik: Mujhe nahi lagtaa ab yaha kuch aur vi baaki hain sunne k liye so lets leave guyz.. Aur haa nandini aaj k baad mujhr apna sakal vi mat dikhaana coz it may not be good for u okay..!!.!! From now on main vool jaaunga ki nandini murty naam ki ladki mere life mey vi kavi aai thi... U r jst a bad dream jo kal subah k saath khatam ho jaayegi... Good bye forever..!!!

They all left frm room leaving a cryng,pleading nandini...

Manik sat in his car n drove in full speed...

Main dhoondne ko zamane me jab wafa nikla

Pata chala ke ghalat leke main pata nikla

Main dhoondne ko zamane me jab wafa nikla

Main dhoondne ko zamane me jab wafa nikla..

(Manik was remebering the scene he jst saw before.. His eyes were red due to anger n also coz of tears he shed... He was fully heart broken...)

Aa.. Aa.. ha.. aa.. ha..

Aa.. ha.. aa...

Jiske aane se muqammal ho gayi thi zindagi

Dastakein khushiyon ne di thi,

Mit gayi thi har kami

( He was remembering each n every he spend wid nandu.. How happy they were.. Their fight.. Their romance.. Their confession everything was roaming in his head...)

Kyun bewajah di yeh saza

Kyun khwaab de ke woh le gayaa

Jiyein jo hum lage sitam

Azaab aise woh de gayaa (Azaab: pain)

( He again remember the room scene.. Nandu in vivaan shirt.. N then he remembered nandu in his shirt few days ago wen they made love

He remember nandu flirting wid vivaan)

Main dhoondne ko uske dil me jo Khuda nikla

Pataa chala ke ghalat leke main pata nikla

Pataa chala ke galat leke main pata nikla

Main dhoondne ko zamane me jab wafa nikla

Main dhoondne ko zamane me jab wafa nikla aa...

He stopped his car wid a jerk.. He closed his eyes and a lone tear escape frm his eyes.. Kyun kiya nandini tumne mere saath aisaa kyu..?? U toh knw naa ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta thaa fir vi.. U cheated me... Main tumhe iske liye kavi maaf nahi karungaa kavi vi nahi..

Flashback ends...

A lone tear escape frm his eyes remembering this..

Teri wajah se sab barbaad hogaaya.. Kyu kiya tum logo nai aisaa y..?? Y..???? Y..??

Saying this he started to punch vivaan... He was beating him badly.

Btn his punches he was shouting.."Kya mila tujhe yeh sab kar ke..?? Paisey chaahiye the toh mujhse maang letey y do u hv to do all this..?? Kyun kyun"... He was continuously beating him...

Cabir tried to stop him...

Manik chod ussey.. Mar jaayega...!! Said cabir..

Isska nah mar jaana hi better hoga.. Today i won't leave him.. Nahi chodunga main...

Manik plz..!! Its not the way...!!

Finally cabir dragged him out of the house...

Kyu laaya tu mujhe waha se..?? Shouted manik

Plz manik ... Gussa mujhe vi aaraha hain usspar.. Bt iss waqt nahi.. We hv to sort out this mess..

Yaa u r right.. Bt wat should we do..?? Asked manik..

Vivaan ko toh hum baad mein dekhlenge.. Avi we hv to return bck to delhi...Hum sab ko nandini se maafi maangni hogi... We hv to tell her ki hume sab pataa chal gaya hain..

I guess u r right..!! Chal lets go... Said manik

They flew bck to delhi...

It was 7 in the evening when they were at delhi airport..

Both sat in the taxi n left for the villa...

Nandu watched few movies all the day while fab3 n navya were bzy on their own...

Finally nandu was tired watching movies so she closed it n came to the balcony...

She was once again remembering her past..

Nandu pov; wid bg song

Dil-e-nadaan tujhe hua kya hai

Aakhir iss dard ki dava kya hai

( Y.. Kyun aaj vi uss raat ko yaad karke utna hi dard hotaa hain..?? Kya hua hain mere dil ko..?? Itna dard... Iss dard ki dawaa kya hain..?? Kaisey thik karu iss dard ko..?? )

Dil-e-nadaan tujhe huaa kya hai

Humko unse wafaa ki hai umeed

Unko unse wafaa ki hai umeed

Jo nahi jaante wafa kya hai

Dil-e-nadaan tujhe huaa kya hai..

( Uss raat i thought u would trust.. Bt main kissey wafaa ki umees kar rahi thii.. Arrey uss insaan ko toh wafaa ka matlb vi pataa nahi hogaa..?? Kyun trust nahi kar paaye the uss raat.. Kyu..?? Manik..!!)

Jaan tum par nissar karta hoon

Main nahi jaanta duaa kya hai

Dil-e-nadaan tujhe huaa kya hai..

( Main apni puri zindagi tumhe dene k liye taiyaar thi.. Tumhaare liye toh mein apni jaan vi de sakti thi bt u...)

Dil-e-nadaan tujhe huaa kya hai..

Dil-e-nadaan tujhe huaa kya hai...

( Plz nandini samhaalo apne dil ko.. Aaj itni dur aakar u can't be weak no...)

Scene shift...

Manik asked the driver to stop the taxi..

He came out of the taxi... He was standing on the road wid a blank expression..

Cabir came out n asked" Kya hua..?? Ghar nahi jaana..??"

M: M scared.. Nahi ho rahi himmat nandini se nazare milaane mein.. How will i stand infront of her..?? Kya kahungaa main ussey ki kyu trust nahi kar paaya apne shinning star pe..??

C: Manik plz samvaal khudko.. Tu iss tarah se haar nahi maan sakta..!!

M: Arrey main toh usi din haar gaya thaa jis din nandini par aisaa ilzaam lagaaya..

C: Manik plz..!!

M: Cabir woh mujhe kavi maaf nahi karegi.. Arrey kahi na kahi hamaari wajah se she lost her family..!! She is in a big guilt bcoz of us.. Tujhe nah dekhna chaahiye thaa woh dard jo kal raat uske aakhon mein thaa.. She is damn hurt.. Kitni badi galti hogayi hain.. Iss galti k liye toh mein khud saayad khudko maaf na karpaau.. Nandini ko vi mujhe maaf mahi karna chaahiye...Aur pata hain yahi hi sahi hain..I dont deserve forgiveness.. Galti nahi gunah kiyaa hain mainey aur gunah ki maa koi maafi nahi hoti...Do u knw wat i want her forgiveness..!! I really want it..

C: I knw manik... Lets try till our last breathe.. Hum haar nahi maanege..

M: Hmm..!! Chalo lets go..

Saying this both sat in taxi n once again taxi got started..

Manik was staring out of the window...

Manik pov ; wid bg song

Sapna mera toota toota

Mujhse mera saaya kyun chhoota hai

Aaa...

Sapna mera toota toota

Mujhse mera saaya kyu chhoota hai

Ke Rab mill bhi gaya toh kya

Mujhse mera Khudaya rootha hai

( Sab kuch bikhar chukaa hain.. Mainey apne haato se sab barbaad kardiya... Sarey sapne jo hum dono ney dekhe the tohd diya mainey... Aaj toh ye bhagwaan main mujhse rooth chukey hain.. Jo nandini inpar aakh bnd kar kar varoosa karti thi meri wajah se she lost her trust on him.. Sab galat kar diya mainey)

Bas ek hi dafa ek hi baar kar

Mere yaara tu mujhko baawra

Bas ek hi dafa darkar kaa

Mere yaara tu mujh se pyar kar

( Plz nandini m sorry maaf kardo muje plz.. Plz accept my love plz..!!)

Bada nadaan nikla yeh dil

Mohabbat ko samjhe manzil

Ab tanha siyaah sa safar hai mera

Zara sa kehne ko darna

Zara sa milne ko marna

Ab saanson dilaason pe asar hai tera

(Pata nahi kaisey mainey yeh sab kar diyaa.. Tum par itnaa bada ilzaam lagaa diya.. Kis muh se tumse maafi maangu m toh scared to face u... Yeh safar vi kitna lamba hai.. Kab milungaa tumse.. Kab sab kuch kahungaa..??)

Bas ek hi dafa ek hi baar kar

Mere yaara tu mujhko baawra

Bas ek hi dafa darkar kaa

Mere yaara tu mujh se pyar kar

Tera yun chhup chhup ke rona

Mera yun tumse num hona

Donon ke dilon mein lagi hai jhadi

Aaa...

Tera yun chup chup ke rona

Mera yun tumse num hona

Donon ke dilon mein lagi hai jhadi

Tere bin tapte hain yeh din

Hai thandi raatein namumkin

Donon ke dilon mein lagan hai laggi

( Tum itney waqt tak akele itna dard sehti rahi.. Itna roti rahi aur main ek pathar ki tarah heartless bangaya.. Ek baari tumhe dhoodne ki kosis tak nahi ki how could i...? Kaisey main tumse num ho gaya..?? How could i do this to u..??)

Bas ek hi dafa ek hi baar kar

Mere yaara tu mujhko baawra

Bas ek hi dafa darkar kaa

Mere yaara tu mujhse pyar kar

Sab kuch mainey bigaada hain toh thik vi main hi karungaa.. M ready for it.. Tum jo sazaa do gi mujhe manzoor hogaa.. Wada karta hu tumhaara saraa dard main mitaa dungaa.. I will do my bst to bring my shinning star bck...Wada hain mera yeh khudse...

Precap: Manan talk n many more...

Ohh.. So finally done wid the !most awaited chp i.e past revealation..

I don't knw ki mainey kya likha.. It was upto the mark or not bt i tried my bst.. Jada emotional vi nahi likh paayi coz pata nahi iss baar ho nahi paayaa.. Sorry...My schedule were so bzy due to navaraatri aur fir avi nahi likti toh toh time hi nahi miltaa coz kal maasi ke ghar jaana hain aur parso raat ko wapas aaungi...ab monday se clz hai ..

So bzy schedule issilye avi likhti.. Pata nahi kaisaa niklaa coz it was the imp one...

Chalo jaisa vi thaa plz cmmnt karke bataana... I will try my bst to reply to ur cmmnts...

Criticism is allowed... N suggestions r also heartly accepted..

Oh god manik ki waapasi ki excitement mey main pagal ho gayi huu.. 😆😆

Will be waiting for ur cmmnts n likes..😉

Nxt update kab dungi i don't knw.. Agar jada response huye toh sayad jaldi update kardungi..😉😉 M not sure naa coz clz is re opening so updates kab milenge no idea.. Tab tak tata bye.. Take care..

Stay blessed

Loads of love

Myrah ...!!!

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Tum ghalat time p kyun update krti ho??😡

I really want to read this or past bhi jana hai

Or tum ne itna lamba update bhi diya...

But mere pas time nai..😭

Ghalat timing...

Mere comment main time lage ga..

Wait... Till I'm free

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: dua_arafat
Tum ghalat time p kyun update krti ho??😡
I really want to read this or past bhi jana hai
Or tum ne itna lamba update bhi diya...
But mere pas time nai..😭
Ghalat timing...
Mere comment main time lage ga..
Wait... Till I'm free

Opps wrong timing😭😭 sorry..!!

Par kya karu aaj nahi karti toh sayad it would take more time..

Jab time miley tab padhlenaa.. Eagerly waiting for ur cmmnts..

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Swagatika

@sws2

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Poor suffered so much.

Hope Manik can heal her.

Thanks for the update.

😊

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: myruh

Opps wrong timing😭😭 sorry..!!
Par kya karu aaj nahi karti toh sayad it would take more time..

Jab time miley tab padhlenaa.. Eagerly waiting for ur cmmnts..

I will try to read soon... may be aj hi parh lon... control nai ho raha😆

Bohat updates pending hain...

Agr main ne apna aj nai update kia to aj hi parh lon gi.

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#377

I had an idea ki what will be the problem but still when I read the update I cried

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millie

@millie17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#378

A vry emotional updt...
I ws about to cry thinking about nandu's condition whn no 1 believed hr...I can't evn imagine hw c must hv felt at dat tim...
feel like kilng nyonika n dat bas***d vivan... they r so evil...vivan hs no regret at al...evn after so much tim... he ws so cool in tlng manik evrythng... disgusting...

But u wrote d chp vry well...
n xprsd d emotions vry wl through wrds...

Although sad...but d chp ws grt in its own way...

Plz continue soon...

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

I will try to read soon... may be aj hi parh lon... control nai ho raha😆
Bohat updates pending hain...
Agr main ne apna aj nai update kia to aj hi parh lon gi.

I would like ki tum aaj hi padhlo bt i want ur updates too.. U knw the promo u gve it was damn interesting..👏

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: millie17
A vry emotional updt...
I ws about to cry thinking about nandu's condition whn no 1 believed hr...I can't evn imagine hw c must hv felt at dat tim...
feel like kilng nyonika n dat bas***d vivan... they r so evil...vivan hs no regret at al...evn after so much tim... he ws so cool in tlng manik evrythng... disgusting...

But u wrote d chp vry well...
n xprsd d emotions vry wl through wrds...

Although sad...but d chp ws grt in its own way...

Plz continue soon...

M glad u liked it...n thanx for appreciation..😊

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