MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152)

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: Danny92
Nice update
The most awaited update their past is revealed nyonika nd maniks cousin they r soo cheap they planned like this to break manik and nandini I so wonder no one trusted her felt so bad leave all manik nd navya they didn't trust her
Nandini has gone through so much watever they do get her forgiveness is less wen compared to her pain
Continue sooonnn

Thanx for appreciation..😊😊

I will try my bst to update soon..

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#392

Amazing update...
That was just awesome..
Past was very heart wrenching...
But at some point i feel manik was not completely at fault...
Ya he should have trust her but itna sab hone ke baad koi kaise kisi pe trust karta...
Manna padega nyo aur vivaan ki planning mast thi...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: aarohi_angel98
Amazing update...
That was just awesome..
Past was very heart wrenching...
But at some point i feel manik was not completely at fault...
Ya he should have trust her but itna sab hone ke baad koi kaise kisi pe trust karta...
Manna padega nyo aur vivaan ki planning mast thi...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

Actually u r right.. I will try to raise this point in the story..

Thanx for appreciation

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meenakshiverma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#394

Really realty osm
Mza gya padd k
Nxt ff Ka wait rhega

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#395

Dear...thanks for pm.

Chapter was very emotional and most of shocking.

It was a big plotting and planning by nyo...😡.

Vivaan was a greedy dog.🐷.

But I think nandni se bhi thori galti ho gai.

Jab ose vivaan ki kartoot pata chal gai thi tou. .ose

Be careful rehna chahie tha. ..

Flarting nahi karni chahie thi.

Malik bhi apni jaga sahi tha.

Osne 1 month se jo dekha and us raat tou sab bhut bhada shock tha.

I think both are at fault. ..at some point.

But again both are innocent because this was their bad destiny'.

Nyo. .was a big vamp. .😡🤢.

But very sad happen.

Now manik will do everything for her forgiveness.

Don't know she will forgive him..😲 or not.

The songs was very nice match the situation very well.

You penned all the scenes very beautifully.

You are a awesome writer.

Please continue soon can't wait to see what will manik do now.

Thanks for sharing this emotional chapter.

Stay blessed dear.

Love. .

Jyoti.

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NiyaJaiswal

@NiyaJaiswal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#396

nyc update n emotnl one...
plz update d nxt part soon..

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: bhagupur
Dear...thanks for pm.
Chapter was very emotional and most of shocking.
It was a big plotting and planning by nyo...😡.
Vivaan was a greedy dog.🐷.
But I think nandni se bhi thori galti ho gai.
Jab ose vivaan ki kartoot pata chal gai thi tou. .ose
Be careful rehna chahie tha. ..
Flarting nahi karni chahie thi.
Malik bhi apni jaga sahi tha.
Osne 1 month se jo dekha and us raat tou sab bhut bhada shock tha.
I think both are at fault. ..at some point.
But again both are innocent because this was their bad destiny'.
Nyo. .was a big vamp. .😡🤢.
But very sad happen.
Now manik will do everything for her forgiveness.
Don't know she will forgive him..😲 or not.
The songs was very nice match the situation very well.
You penned all the scenes very beautifully.
You are a awesome writer.
Please continue soon can't wait to see what will manik do now.
Thanks for sharing this emotional chapter.
Stay blessed dear.

Love. .
Jyoti.