ArSh FF Badmaash Dill #6 Chap 60 Page 132 (28 NOV18)

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MopuriMadhuri

@MopuriMadhuri

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Hey Sam can u mention about ArSh and others age sometimes it's really confusing regarding their age .

Someone mentioned that Shilpa is being egoistic but I don't think so being bought up in a know nuclear family her way of approach is different and if she have been egoistic she would have never changed after talking to Nidhi it is just that she is little immature and it's just that she is not comfortable in wearing duppatta.

Waiting for update

Edited by MopuriMadhuri - 8 years ago

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@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#492

I never say she won't change or she born in a nuclear family is the only factor for her behavior she is the only child of their parents so u know laadli and given most stuff all the time no struggles so she is that is why like that.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#493

Hi Sameera...

I am a new reader for this story...

Well I was recommended this one by Riddhi...don't know if you know her or no😆

I started reading it and quite enjoyed..

Well there are 6 long threads about which I can't give reviews in details but a small one I will try.

Your one liners and fun stuff was so good that I actually laughed out loud so many times..

It was fun story nice until Armaan Nidhi truth came out...

At that point I thought this was needed...but I was at such a point where I wanted to read more and stop also😆

But I can't leave a story midway unless the writer decides to stop😆

So I still continued,

It was a nice read..

I liked Armaan sometimes and sometimes not at all..

And the way he behaved I still don't understand when he loved her so much why didn't he go ahead and had that relationship.. and same for nidhi y dint someone take a step... coz at a lot of places I felt why Armaan did go ahead with shilpa if he had feelings for someone else..

Anyways then I thought it's your story and your decision how to go about with the characters..

I agree that nobody is perfect..and same goes with Shilpa too..

All characters have their own importance and well written...

But throughout the story I felt that even shilpa was a side character sometimes...😆

Piya is another confused character sometimes and I see little selfish too.

I always thought till this last update that Rahul and muskaan were highly ignored..

But muskaan story in the last part made so sad and emotional..

I hope you bring about a track for them soon..

Also Arsh story is developing nicely...

I liked to read this story...

And hope you continue regularly...

I see this is going on since dmg was on air...😆😆

Phew itna lamba comment Maine aaj tak kisiko nahi likha...

But I like your super long updates so ye to banta hai boss.

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..preeti..

@Preet123456

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#494

Hey Sam,

When will u update this?

Please try to update this fast..really waiting for the next part...

If update not possible in few days at least give some precap/teaser.

Waiting...

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Sammy

@sammy4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#495

sorry for late comment

wow arsh are married it was so nice the whole 1st night thing

but armaan went back to mauritius...shilpa ko kab leke jaa rahe ho

omg control freak is no more under control

nidhi loved armaan tooo..omg

armaan is allergic to shilpa's family hahaha

the whole dress issue of shilpa ...you wrote it so well

shilpa changed everything back in her room ...why?

the whole muskaan issue about her being in malhotra house and dadi's behaviour towards her is so bad..so annoying

who is behind shilpa...thank god armaan came back and she told him about the whole problem

everyone's asking vikas to shift back to mumbai...oh no dont do that

that prince is crazy i suppose..aliya toh ainvayi problem mei padh gayi uss prince ke wajahse...she is so disturbed

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@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#496

Any chance of diwali gift???

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..preeti..

@Preet123456

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20
Any chance of diwali gift???

I am also thinking the same...

Can we get the update today?

Waiting"...

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@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#498

Happpy Deepawali... Wish you a happy and prosperous new year!!

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@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: sameera_12
NEW IDEA..

Imagine BD's background and Shilpa's character replacing Piya!

Khaabon ka tha makaan...

Her breath stopped feeling his tight grip over her wrist.. He has stopped her in the middle, between all these people...

jo dehta chalaaa...aaa

Gulping down the hard lump under her throat, she gathered her courage to turn her face around and look at him.. "Hhh.." Trying to take a breath, she turned her face only to find that intense angry gaze digging deep inside her..

Bezubaan kab se main raha

With a hard force, he pulled her towards him and like a wind she landed up in his arms hitting his hard rock chest with her face over his shoulder... The world stopped!! Even to lift up her eyes was made difficult by him...

Begunaah sehta main rahaa

She felt his angry hot breath on her cheeks and side neck, he was holding her tight by her waist in the middle of this high society business party..

"Huhh.." Aliya breathed deep clutching the side of a chair.. What she was witnessing was enough to take her breath away.. "Innka khud ka to pata nahi ajj kya hoga? Meri sagai pakka torrwa deinge yeh ajj.." She gulped down the hard lump under her throat looking at Rohail who was standing on a side along with the whole gang witnessing his brother doing hell unusual thing on the dance floor..

Bezubaan kab se main raha
Begunaah sehta main rahaa
Bezubaan kab se main raha
Begunaah sehta main rahaa

Twisting her hand, he was now making some hard core dance moves bringing the hell out of her.. She was feeling lifeless in his hold, weak and like a puppet in his hands.. "Bohat dill kar raha haina tumhara dance karne ka!!" Gritting his teeth he said out angrily near her ear as he pulled her back to him now capturing her in his arms from the back..
"Main karwata hun tumhe ab achi tarah se dance.." He spatted out angrily and pushed her away for another twirl..

Khwabon ka tere qissa hoon
Tera hi toh main hissa hoon

One moment, she was in his arms, next away from him, the other moment near his face and then in the tight cage of his arms.. His words hurted her deeply, she can feel the tears building up in her eyes but she just couldn't fight.. She was weak and helpless at the moment..
"Kya hua? Ajj bolne ko kuch nahi hai??" His fire gaze met hers..

Mujhko na kar yun juda

Pushing her away again, he caught her hand before she will fall off and then twirl her around hard making her fall over her back but not on floor as his hands her tight on her waist... They were now looking deep in eachothers eyes..

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Hit the like button if you think you want to read this kind of a small story..
Sameera😊