Manan ss Yeh Hai Aashiqui TEASER Ch 30 B pg 126 - Page 57

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Love it, he knew just what she needed, so sweet and romantic...just lovely... who cares bout the rest, he will be there for her- wonderful...
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IT WAS BEAUTIFUL... SOMETIMES SILENCES SPEAKS!!! LOVED IT... SORRY I AM NOT A REGULAR READER...
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Nice update but little i wana big wala update.
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Chapter 27 B


In Car

It was again a very silent ride...even though she was very curious to know what was the surprise where they were going she didn't tried to know it didn't even did any gesture that could show him her impatience coz she trusted him.

She was really feeling on top no one ever did this much for her that happiness can be seen on her face that smile was not leaving from her face.

Manik has been stealing glances since they had left the place. The time he told about one more surprise he saw shocked expressions rather being surprised she was shocked but she didn't took any time she held his hand instantly that brought some confidence nd a feeling that his plan will work.

They were here after 40 minutes drive. She unintentionally fell asleep which made his work easier otherwise she would have been known about it much earlier.

He was adoring her baby face while sleeping she was looking very cute according to him...he didn't wanted to wake her up but having no choice he called her name ever so sweetly

Nandini opened her eyes rubbing them d sight infront of her made her concious as he was waking her up he bended to her calling her d moment she opened her eyes he was lost in them not realising how close they were but she realised as soon as she opened her eyes finding him so close she instantly sir straight which made him go back to his seat. Nd their was silence she was removing strands which were falling on her face looking here nd there.

MANIK: we have reached u were sleeping so i was just waking you up...come lets go he came out as he finished nd opened for her to come out.

She was so lost in her own world that she didn't even realised were she was standing till d moment he broke her trance called her name nd asked to come.

She stopped in between d moment reality hit her as soon as she looked up her eyes were filled with tears some of them even escaped from her eyes...she was numb at her place.

Manik knew this would be her reaction but she had to face it of she had too move on.

He stood by her side kept his hand on her shoulder...she looked at him with teary eyes nd next moment she hugged him crying bitterly he hugged her back...she tightened her grip nd her tears were not stopping

They were lyk that for more than 10 minutes...when Manik realised her sobs were less he caressing her hairs said hey...uh need to be strong uh had to face it nd breaking d hug he cupped her face nd continued i brought you here so that it'll be easy for you to start a new life...i know this place had lots of memories of you some bad some good but now it'll only make u remember of your mother woh jha p bh hngi hme dekh rhi hngi aur abi woh bilkul khush ni hgi tumhe aise dkh k so plzz don't cry its ur home i brought uh here so that u can relish ur old happy memories nd not this one which makes u cry I understand ur missing ur mom but unke liye hi uh need to b happy na so plzz smile

He again said smiling this tym with sugary voice plzzz

She smiled a little wiped her tears seeing him making efforts for her she was really feeling lyk she had someone besides her she's not alone

Manik: seeh it looks gud on uh keep wearing it he said seeing her smile a little but atleast she smiled

After a cute sa chotu eye lock he said lets go in to which she nodded in agreement nd guided him

She was sad as well as happy at the same time sad as this place reminds if her mother happy for the beautiful memories she had made with her mother

She opened with the spare key kept outside

Moving in every corner reminds her of her it was a small house but was very close to her

Manik: Nice home he genuinely said it as d house was not so big but was enough for two people it wasn't decorated with expensive decorating stuff but was cute as only some home made things were used to decorate it making it very different.

Nandini was roaming in with mixed emotions excitement plus emotional she was clearing things which had dust on it keeping things at proper places

Manik was happy as expected he can see a calmness on her face

Manik: u can spend as much time uh want here i won't mind he said happily settling himself on small couch.

Her smile grew listening to him. She was living all her beautiful moments spent but most important person who made this pure relation.

They spent lot of time there its been evening. They had fun its not necessary to chit chat everytime...she was busy with her work clearing house he was bzy admiring helping her sometime when it comes to some heavy thing he was protective. He brought some food from outside they had some light food. She showed her house and a little garden area outside

They left the house in evening past 6. It was really emotional for her to leave that place (normally its traditional that girl has to leave one day nd move with his life partner but atleast that time its done like a big function its celebrated she leaves but with a happy smile too) but she was leaving in such a condition that no one was there to bid her shedding tears for her.

Still manik knew this will be her condition but after having a lot debate with his mind he put forward his plan coz he don't want her to regret it that she'll leave without even for a last time see her place where she grew up according to him little did he knew about her past.

He consoled her nd settled in car still her tears were not stopping.

Manik took out something from his pocket nd forwarded his hand to her . She clinched her brows wiping her tears looking with surprise asking him through eyes. He smiled at her antics which he found cute nd said wohh..!! I was prepared listening him speaking his words confused her more.

Understanding her expression he continued umm...generally jb bhi girls sad feel krti h i have seen they ate more chocolates...yaaa i have seen aliya she toh eat more whenever she feels low so i bought it for uh i knew u'll fell sad at this point of time so i bought it for u after a pause he said its ohkk if you don't wanna have i can understand kitni calorie hai na diet concious nd all i can understand he further said to make d moment light taking back his hand.

Nandini was overwhelmed with his gesture he did so much for her she was thinking if this is her dream which will break once she get up. Listening his talks his actions making sure it is reality happening in real she stopped his hand took d chocolate unwrapped it starts munching it making him relaxx

They had a blissful day together not for her only but for him too it was an amazing day.



So guys here it is big one this time dare u say its short this time its big enough
I added lots of new stuff on manan hope u'll like it do tell me did you liked d surprise no one guessed it correctly. Don't forget to like md coment it motivates yr nd if I didn't get expected response i'll try like other writers who pm d chapter nd m not saying i can do that so last time silent readers open up aur u'll definitely regret

Guys don't forget to have a look of first chapter of ROLE..CAMERA..ACTION..!!
CHAPTER 1
Edited by Kritika_05 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome. . Manik is such a sweetheart. ..
Loved it
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nicely written update.
Very nice to see nandini beginning to trust manik
And manik's gestured a very adorable.
Waiting for the next part.
Hope you continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Loved the surprise
Awesome
amazing
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow..



love the surprise .


I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
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.



Stay blessed

Love Geet

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