MaNan FS: ROLE..CAMERA..ACTION..!! Chapter 4 pg 17 4/01

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: diyamanan
awsm story
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I WON'T TALK TO YOU YAAR!!!! YOU MADE ARU MANIK'S FAN... CHAL NEVER MIND!!! THE UPDATE WAS FULL ON BOMB!!!! DON'T MAKE IT SS... KEEP IT FS ONLY... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... LOVE YOU...

Hehe dear that was the bouncer nandu's friend is d crazy fan 😆
Told u before that its different
We don't know na when their will b another bouncer
Its FS only i have planned it as a FS only

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nice concept ...update soon

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It's really nice .. looking forward for the update. .

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Rock Star Manik Malhotra Nice topic i like it and update is Good but waiting 4 manan 1st meeting Plzzz PM me.

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its really interesting
i m superduper excited fr manans first meet
bt u hvenot updated frm so.long
plz update soon

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Rock Star Manik Malhotra Nice topic i like it and update is Good but waiting 4 manan 1st meeting Plzzz PM me.

Thank u dear
U liked d concept
Wait will b worth it 😉

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Originally posted by: mananneetu
its really interesting
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CHAPTER 2 A

SHIMLA MORNING

Its a new morning new day new place new identity new job...very first day nd everything was new to them except one thing being same that both were old soul sisters only but couldn't show it.

New sunlight was peeping through window brighter sunlight showing day had started but in their room for one of them day had started long back nd now she was shouting on other one to come out from dreamland its morning.

Aaru: wth...!! Get up nandu m calling u for d last tym m telling uh get up or else...or else...she stopped abruptly not getting anything to speak further

Nandu: or else...she continued repeating her words opening her one eye raising her eyebrow with a smirk

**thud**

Just then a pillow came hitting on her face

Nandu: wth..is wrong with u aaru..

Aaru: or else this...got it...now get up i don't wanna be late on d very first day

Nandu: ohh yeahhh...afcourse u r d most important person there na she said snapping back

Aaru: Haan toh...what if m not imp but uh know this place where we r its not that easy to reach she replied

Nandu: oh really bdw i don't want to here its just bcoz of u m here...i was way to happy at my dream place rather than this

Aaru: now getting irritated
Listen na nandu now enough of our argument we'll continue it later now i can't wait to see me rockstar plzz get ready fast nd no more words now just get up she said pushing her to washroom not giving her a chance to speak.

IN AN HOUR

Nandu nd Aaru both were ready nd left where shooting will be taking place

Nandu: Aaru babe uh only said we need to pretend as if we don't know each other than why their is need to come together

Aaru: Areee i know but uh also know na i can't go anywhere without u...today its a very imp day of life how can i go without u nd yeahh we'll go nd pretend we met today only

Nandu: Aaru she shouted as aasru was so excited she was walking past her

Aaru turned listening her shout raising her eyebrows gave her what look

Nandu came running covering d distance flung in her arms nd said i luv uh

Aaru: luv uh too...now get off me u'll spoil my dress

Nandu making an irritating face breaking their hug said nd ur back

Aaru: whatever come we r almost there she said getting all excited

EVENING IN THEIR ROOM

D atmosphere in d room was not at all good

One of them was fuming in ager nd other was doing nothing but adding fuel nd was happy from inside that finally she'll be out of it

Aaru was none other then d one who was fuming nd ready to put world on fire

Nandu was doing nothing just increasing her anger so that they'll b out of this mess

Aaru: what..d..hell..!! What..d..f...!!
How could they do this m gonna sue them...yeah..!! M gonna sue them Nandu just pass me d phone right now m gonna call our lawyer m gonna put them behind bars

Now it was going out of control which brought some sense in nandu who was till now igniting d fire rather than acting mature

Nandu: Areee whhat...r u saying babe we can't sue them it'll backfire us uh know na what we have done...we have hidden our identity then they'll put us behind bars in case of fraudulence...so this putting behind bars is not a good idea...i..i..i think we should go back to mmummbai...yeah thats d nice solution umm she said d last part knowing her reaction as well as answer but still trying her luck looking for her reaction which was anticipated though still having some false hope...through corner of her eyes.

As anticipated Aaru: what...no not at all m not going anywhere till i get for what i had came

Nd as she expected from past half n hour she was increasing her anger so that she'll forget for what she came here nd go back but everything in drain

Nandu sitting on d bad putting hand on her forehead cursing d person who landed them here who helped Aaru in arranging everything

Nandu: so now what we'll do here...yeahhh will handle that tantrum queen what..what was her name...ohh..m..playing..d..lead..m..senior..most..experienced..most..talanted..actress..in..bollywood...go to hell what does she think of herself do uh see how she behaved today

Aaru: yeah if u haven't intrupted i would have smashed her face..huh..!! Already it started with d bad news nd that bit** made it worst day

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CHAPTER 2 B

**FLASHBACK FEW HOURS AGO**

As Nandu nd Aaru entered d place while Aaru all excited super happy face in the other hand Nandu all sulking face

There were hustle bustle indeed d shooting place was damn beautiful btw hills all around greenery plus the props were arranged enhancing d beauty more

They entered showing d fake identity pass they had made in Mumbai

No one caught it nd let them in

While they meet d head coordinator who were managing nd assigning d work showing around assigned nandu to be with d lead actress as she knew some make up skills so she was assigned to be with her nd do her make up n all not having another option she nodded while Aaru whose eye were just searching his Rockstar said instantly as he assigned Nandu her work

Aaru: I'll b with Manik i mean lead male actress he too needs some attendent na she said with lot of hope excitement

While d coordinator snapped back in stern voice if u all can decide what work u need to do then m d fool here being all worked up since morning coordinating everyone haan..

Nandu's anger rose seeing him talking to her best friend her soul sister in that way but she controlled it not to make any seen as it can be harmful for them as they need to pretend they don't know each other meeting for first time

Aaru didn't reacted she chucked it nd said sorry

Coordinator told her to check on other background girls getting ready nd its her duty to manage them till d first shoot was done she noded but being all curious she couldn't hold herself nd asked him who turned to go about Manik as when he'll b there

He again in stern voice answered he'll come when he'll wish too nd as per schedule for d coming week he's not needed here its about female intro so he's not needed nd why d hell m giving u explanation u seemed to b very interested in him he said raising his right eyebrow then continued listen just focus on ur work or in hero heroine k chakar m na padho it'll b better for uh as finished reprimanding Aaru his gaze fell on Nandu who was still standing there with god knows what expression anger was high surprised too after getting recent info. He snapped on Nandini too aur tum kaise ghur rhi hoo aur kbse yhi khadi ho didn't i tell u ur work now move both of u he said last part loud glaring them nd went.

Nandu: wth yeh smjhta kya h khud ko kahi ka teesmarkhaa hai didn't he have any manners how to behave with employees oh forget it didn't he know how to behave with girls such a jerk listen Aaru i can't handle such jerks...iise acha toh hum humare peon s baat krte h but look at him he's like he's d producer or director such a dumbass she was non stop blabbering just then realised that Aaru was quiet she didn't reacted what she said

Aaru was too disheartened to what he just said d only wish for which she came too far wasn't fulfilled seems lyk who's sitting calmly in heaven was in full mood testing his patience level. She was standing their numb it was lyk she'll cry any moment...yeahhh it was hard to believe by anyone who knows her very well that she was a lioness nd here she was sad coz she can't meet her Rockstar whom she adores..big fan..didn't i tell not only a big but crazy fan...only someone crazy who'll do such crazy thing leaving her dream job on stake which she owns can bark orders here listening to somebody's orders hidding her identity who can't even stand before real her...ONLY AN EXTREMELY CRAZY PERSON CAN GO TO SUCH AN EXTENT...don't u think so.

Nandu being an all time soul sister just dragged her in corner where no one can see them nd cupped her face

Nandu: hey baby..!! Don't be sad sweetheart what if he's not here today...but he'll be here that jerk said na he'll join after few day plzzz sweety don't be sad ur sad face will make me sad too tell me do u want me like this she said holding her chin up making her face her nd she made d saddest face lips curved downwards 😔 but that was really cute Lol which made her smile nd hugged her whispering a sweet luv u to her as Thank U didn't existed in their dictionary

After some tym both soul sisters seperated as per assigned to them

Nandu was having really bad tym no actually worst in real she wasn't less then a lioness like her bff but here she was tolerating everything just for sake of her

But to her bad luck she didn't knew today she'll break her own record of tolerance...yeahh that was true she broke her own record

Miss Riama yup she was d girl who'll b testing her tolerance level today she was d female lead of d film whose make up nd other things were to be looked by nandu

Riama was just a tantrum queen treating herself not less than miss universe

Nandu had shut her mouth keeping herself away to not say something really lyk really bad to her

Nandu was busy doing her eye make up where else she was just couldn't be lyk that she was buzy in her phone n just lyk that as her phone beeped showing new text she opened her eyes due to which some of liquid was in her eyes which was itching her nd she was lyk someone stabbed her

She made a huge out of small thing though mistake was her only

Everyone was gathered there nd as soon as liquid was wiped from her eyes decreasing her almost negligible pain she was back making a big deal out of nothing

Riama: Who d hell is she..u b****y b***h don't u know how to do it..tell me who send u here uh purposely harmed my eyes i..i just knew this uh nd she was about to slap her when from no where a stone came nd next thing everyone saw made them face palm some were giggling

Riama ohmg she was like some terrorial attack yeahh she was just hit by not so big stone which just formed a cramp on her forehead...but she reacted lyk some terrorist group was so much free to attack her that to what a weapon isn't it A Stone

She was lyk it harmed her nd fainted without a single drop of blood this proved she was an amazing actor...ahh let me correct overacting queen 😆

Nandu exactly knew who was behind this so as soon as everyone gathered near Riama she managed to escape nd caught The Terrorist in Miss Riama's eyes

Soon they heard PACK UP

Nd managed to get The Terrorist out of that place who was ready with a bigger one this time as previous attempt was fail according to her who was none other than Aaru who couldn't bear a single word against her bff nd she she tried to slap her that was really out of world she'll let happen infront of her eyes.

**FLASHBACK ENDS**

AFTER A WEEK

Its been a week since they were there in SHIMLA. After that incident Nandu escaped from being attendent of Riama it wasn't difficult for them as Riama ordered she shouldn't even come 100 metre close to her no doubt she tried to throw Nandu out but due to lack of crew members coordinator requested they can't afford nd its just a matter of some time as they'll go back they will remove her.

Nandu was now in decorations department to see through all set up was upto mark which was her left hand work nd she enjoyed it now nd she use be all cheered up so that her baby her friend cum sister didn't feel guilty for forcing her to accompany her nd she cheered her up to as till now she haven't even get a glance of her Rockstar for whom she came so far nd was tolerating this much working under somebody following orders while till it was they who gave orders nd leads it can be called Craziness but it was ALL DESTINY

As usual one fine day they were at shooting place which was on top of a hill too beautiful but too scary as it was on top nd if anyone fall from there a small flesh could be found it was at hill top only few crew members were present their with people who perform stunts

Scene was to be shoot lyk heroine will b in danger hanging on railing nd afcourse most awaited entry of D SUPERSTAR itself

Aaru was way to excited as she got d news in morning she was too happy

Nandu with her new made friends were working on hill top putting some items across railing to show it perfect when suddenly there was hustle bustle all around as D SUPERSTAR had arrived after a week he was their being very famous everyone was excited to see him from that close he was surrounded with his guards nd some people who were welcoming him

When from nowhere they heard a loud noise of falling something nd next was scream they heard HELP..!!

Which made everyone turned to see from where noises came

As everyone moved to have a glance of Manik Malhotra D SUPERSTAR some girls near railing to got excited nd walked past at faster pace in all this d railing which was afcourse not real but was planted for scene half fell off from other corner where nandu was working along with her.

But somehow she managed to hold it nd d otherside with was still stuck on ground saved her...still she was hanging nd screamed hell out of her heart...as any moment it can fell

While everyone were still in shock what happened were frozen while one of them just ran pushing off d people

He managed reach on tym as d otherside was coming out of ground nd held it before it fell off while others rushed to him not to save d innocent one hanging but behind him as they were his protector his bodyguards. They tried to make him move nd said they'll handle but his one look nd everyone was shut...God knows where were they when it was about to fall a sec diff nd everything was over if he hadn't held it on tym

He eyed them to hold it ad it was too heavy coz she was hanging on it

They obeyed nd held it while he moved a little down giving her his hand to hold which she gripped after some struggle as she was horrified too

The screen froze on their faces...screen divided in three one side MANIK's face who was now lost in her eyes which were scared second one was showing there entwined hands both gripping it tighter third one Nandini's hell scared face looking at him while her mind had stopped working.

Done after being super late
So tell me hows it lyk seriously true opinion i want
So many things in one nd yeahh full on drama waohh man kya enrty h ekdum filmy..!! Giving full justice to d title LOL..!!
Mjh bh ni pta kya kia mne bus i penned it
Enough long haan hope uh won't sleep
Eagerly waiting for ur feedback
Now m hell sleepy..!!

KEEP LOVING

GUD NIGHT

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