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Posted: 9 years ago
Sh-its not gud but apne itni mehnat ki hai to mai..kha leta hu...ek aur do na..
Nk-yes yes...he gave food to him...now its enough...nd he have also..omg whats dis ..it is so bad...but i made first time...tumhari mom ke liye banau..plls tumhe bolni hai khane ko...
Sh-ok..but wo nhi khai to..dost apke hand mai jalan ho rahi hai kya..kitna pain hua na..dekho mark aa gaye hai..
Nk-nhi..i m fine..ak ke liye bana du bas...nd he made for her...put it on side..now nk was tired so much...than all ladies came ...nd saw to kitchen. .
Ak-ye kya hai..sab ..dev also...than shivu came...nd told about all...but burnt nd all nhi...baisaa dev felt hpy but ak felt cry so much..because he is rich did first time all dis...
Dde-kitne aache hai..aaj mai bolti hu..nk jaisa ladka kahi nhi mil sakta hai...tunhe ak..
Ak-with terry eyes..haa..maa...than ..she ask for nk...wer is he..
Sh-wo bhut tak gaye na...maine unke sath kela bhi to rat ho gai to wo so gye...than dev baisaa went...shivu said to ak...mamma apko pata hai dost ke hand burn ho gye hai..mark bhi aaye hai...unko na cold bhi lag raha tha..maine unko bhut tangg kiya phir bhi wo mere sath kele ...bhi..nd unhone apke liye khana banaya hai...nd went...
Ak-she felt so hpy...nd cry also ...tears came but happiness wali...than she saw food which was not so gud..but she put in table nd start eating...pehli bar nk ne mere liye kuch banaya apni kushi se...nd crying. ..maine kitna galt bola na...kitna pain ho raha hoga na...mai kha ke jati hhu..eating madly...with crying. ..nd went in room...
He was sleeping. ..nd didnt wore blanket . ..felt cold...she sat in floor ...firstly she wore to him blanket. ..saw his hand..nd marks...so much...dis pain malted her so much...
She is applying med on his hand...but carefully didnt disturbed to him...
But he holded her hand...she tried to free but unable. ...
Nk-ak..smile in sleep..maine tumse pyar ki hai..tum bhi karogi pyar i know. .mujhe jaggani hai..pyar tumhari eyes mai...i saw love..nd turn than she was top on him...
Saw to him...felt nervousness so much...
Nk-i love u...so much...nd kissed on her cheekss she felt dis touch..because now dis time he was in sence...now she went in other side...nd he was holding her hand wholle nyt..
In morning. .he wokeup nd saw to her...he was holding her hand..she was peacefully sleeping. ..he admire to her..
Nk-kitni sweet lag rahi..hai na...but ye sari rat yahi soi ..omg..than he stood take her in arms nd put it on bed...nd went in kitchen. .wer was dev...he told for tea..nd put near bed nd went...here ak wokeup nd saw she was on bed...nd tea also...der was latter also...
She open that latter nd read..
Thanku rat ko mujhe med lagane ke liye..maine promise ki hai apko tang nhi karni hai so ye tea pi lena pls...she felt so hpy nd happily took tea...
Now she made breakfast according to nk test...he came for breakfast. ..nd sat...she gave to him...he saw to her who was passing smile nd giving food nd tea ...
Nk-all r here..but..ak apne khana bhut aachi banai hai...thanku so much..
Ak-smile. .wife ko thanku nhi bolte in low voice nd went...
Nk-ye smile...change ho rahi hai..means she showed love to me now.. 😃 ...
Now she came in hull wer all sat but she told for med to him...nd apply...
All r seeing that cute couple. ...now baisaa saw to both...
Bai-jamai saa ap ak ke sath ja ke mere liye wo chori jo chok ke pass dukan hai waha se mithai lade ..khane ko man ho raha..both said yes...shivu mann tere se kam hai tu aahi ruk...than both went...lo ji dono ko time na mil pawe kkitne din ho gye jamai saa ko aaye ab bat kar lewege...
In road both r walking but didnt say anything. .she want to tell but she was also stop because. .he was silent. .dis was so strange felling. .
Ak-wo kal apne khana mere liye means thanku bhut aacha tha..
Nk-smile amm..wlcm..but pati ko thanku nhi bolti..nd both had eye contract. ..now some men stood nd saw to her..nk suddenly saw to them...
Nk-what haa...what is ur problems. .ak pls side aaye...she came other side...
Men-ye wahi chori hai dusare jat mai shadi ki hai...are hum marwadi ke kam pad gaye the..jo ye kiya chori..
Nk-shut up oki..dont tell anything. ..just shutup...how dare u said all ...
Ak-ap sab ko kya hai kisi se bhi shadi ho meri..
Men-paisa bolta hai ji...itna vora chora aur paise...tu to itni sundar hai mujhse bolti to mai hi kar leta..
Nk hit him...now..ak feared..
Ak-nhi ap chaliye nk..pls bolne dijiye...now two boys also came near..
Nk-was in anger...how dare ..haa..she is my life my wife..kya haa kyo boli...
Nd fighting with them...ak protest that dont do...but dey all r in so much anger...
Nd nk is fighting. ..dey got injury. ..now he was pitofy to one men ..but another men came nd hit wood from behind...ak saw to nk...she was away..he put hand on his headd...aaa...all run from der..
Nk-akk...blood came.. ak gave hand to him nd he holded her hand nd her face touches from him...nd all blood wiped on her face...he went in floor. .
To saw him she was shivering so much..vry loudly. .nkkk... 😭 ..
Nk-ak...she put his head on her lap...nd hhug to him...
Ak-nk...i love u...pls mujhe chodke kahi mat jaiyega...
Nk-smile. ..i lll ovve u ttoo...nd put hand on her cheeks. ..she kisses on his face..nd badly..
Ak-nk...?????
So guys this is next part hope u all will like this part too...i will wait for comments. ..pls press like button if u like this part waiting. .. 😊 ..
Sry for mistake. .
Precap-nk ko kya hua...?? 😲
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyccc Part Ruchi dear well done mind blowing...plz Cont next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

Nyccc Part Ruchi dear well done mind blowing...plz Cont next part soon


Thanku so much sameera fear for liking this part nd gave comment. .i will update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
omggg pehle tqqq for the lovelyy surprise...
m sooo happpyyy..
nd coming to update it wa fantabulous...
loved each nd every line
naksh ki love
ehsaas
phir marwaadi tareeke se shaadi..
nd phere nose pe sindorr... awww
nk made roti for ak nd shivu 😭
mast mast update ki...
nd finally naksh ki proposal...
but but but
nk ko kya hogi/???????
do update sooner se bhi sooner se bhi soon... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

omggg pehle tqqq for the lovelyy surprise...

m sooo happpyyy..
nd coming to update it wa fantabulous...
loved each nd every line
naksh ki love
ehsaas
phir marwaadi tareeke se shaadi..
nd phere nose pe sindorr... awww
nk made roti for ak nd shivu😭
mast mast update ki...
nd finally naksh ki proposal...
but but but
nk ko kya hogi/???????
do update sooner se bhi sooner se bhi soon...😃


Aww dekhi fot u i gave surprise i told na for u i prepared somthing 😃 ...
Than u liked dis part aww ..he made nice na ... 😊 ..u liked that idea waaw...i willl soon se bhi soon wali update dungi... 😊
Story without twist to aachi nhi lagegi na 😳
Thank u so much princy 🤗
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww di amzng part
nk got hurt bt pain ak ko hua aww
thn their marwadi wdng nd nk ka ak ko god me uthakr phere lena so cute nd their vachan lovely
thn nk shivu scene so cute nk made roti for ak nd shivu aww
bt finaly ak ka anger khtm ho gya pr ye kya isse phle wo kuch kehti nk got injurd hope he is fine
waiting for nxt part eagrly do update asap:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deepshikan

Wowww di amzng part
nk got hurt bt pain ak ko hua aww
thn their marwadi wdng nd nk ka ak ko god me uthakr phere lena so cute nd their vachan lovely
thn nk shivu scene so cute nk made roti for ak nd shivu aww
bt finaly ak ka anger khtm ho gya pr ye kya isse phle wo kuch kehti nk got injurd hope he is fine
waiting for nxt part eagrly do update asap:-)


Aww vishu u liked dis part. .thanku so much yr...loved ur comments 😊 ..u liked his love for her...aww so sweet...twist ...pain na ho to pyar hota hi nhi...pain express felling well 😃 ..i will try to update sooner soon vishu 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyccc part Ruchi dear finally...Akshara feel the love of Natik ...plz cont next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing part gappu..
a pure and beautiful love of our naksh...
naitik akshara's love...in ur ff...I love it...
naitik ka akshara ka liye khana banana is so sweet...
and unki shadi...awesome yaar..
their cute and sweet dialogs are totally admirable...
very cute update...
do update next part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
naksh ki wedding in marvadi style awesome.. naitik and shivu ki masti in kitchen was so cute.. poor naitik bechare ki bahut buri halat hui akshara is touched with naitik wow hope naitik jaldi se fine ho jaye

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