Salaam Ashii...
Hope you are doing good...
Coming to the update...this was a very good and well written part...
Saaachi boloun toh meko toh aisa kuch yaad bhi nhi tha ki iska epilogue baki hai...and jab last update yaad karne ki koshish ki toh Zoya ka hospt wala scene yaad aaya...then phir thoda dimaag pe zor dala aur phir dhayan aaya ki haaan epilogue ke baarein mein baat hui thi...๐
AsYa ko as a mature couple padhna with grownup kids is still a rare thing to me...
But the way U portrayed their Love for eachother...even though Asad is more expressive than Zoya...still Zoya answer summed it up all..
Actually yeh aapki pehli story thi joh maine padhi thi...๐ณ...aur aaj finally yeh apne ek alag mukaam pe aake ek tarah se tham gayi...๐ค
Very good to read this one...
Continue soon with other stories also...๐
Take Care...๐
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