Father's Day OS - Giving Back to You - COMPLETED - Page 5

Originally posted by: florine_20

Awww that was soo heart touching.
Raman has trully been a father figure to his siblings and a wonderful father to the kids.
You wrote everything just so well

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Comment kya karu kuch samaj mein nahi araha seriously 

I am amazed astonished I am speechless totally 

amazed by the fact that your every update every story is so wow and you amaze me daily by giving such beautiful stories... and whenever I feel this was THE BEST you prove me wrong that nahi bhai watch out this one this is even more amazing... actually it's not good to compare your stories with each other as it will be a tough competition and ghar ka mamla hai no competition no ladai 

you always put every emotion in your writing in such a beautiful way that the person unconsciously say wow man 

Your writing skills are really wonderful bhai aapki age kya hai 

you will do marvels if you will think of writing book

you will think I keep praising like crazy but really I do it from bottom of my heart 

Well what to say about OS... it was outstanding in every way

the start ishita teaching kids the value of father how much he works hard for them and is always there and how he sacrifices for all of them 

then there was a cute sa moment when ruhi kisses raman and he embarrasses ishita in return 

romi's confession was lovely each and everyone's contribution in that moment was awesome 

ishita was being a spectator but making his day special was really lovely 

Icecream moment and theatre moments were cute raman's thinking process was written wonderfully when he saw his sweethearts laughing at his expenses 

raman's chotu sa sacrifice when he saw ruhi was getting bored he thought to drop the movie even if he was enjoying 

it was really awesome to see adi ruhi went with their father and romi simmi with their 

forgot to mention loved the ananya wala part raman concern consoling and at the same time getting angry that was cute and even when raman was ogling ishu 😳

most important adi's confession that was awesome oh that was heart touching you made me cry so much yaar but it was worth it truly...

Raman's jokes to lightened the mood 

And last but not the least Ishra moment that was really touching awesome buddy 

Loved it thoroughly enjoyed it 

laughed with it cried with it blushed giggled 

was contended after reading it 

thanks for such a wonderful update on father's day 

actually I read it by afternoon but didn't post anything as I really wanted to comment with my heart 

see what have I done I started it with like I don't have words and ended up writing an easy 😆

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Oops forgot to wish... happy father's day dear ...

this os was really a beautiful gift by you to your father

Originally posted by: Rkbgree

Purrrfect gift @FATHER'S DAY . Tanx for pm. Emotional 1 though.

Originally posted by: Veeann

what a beautiful story. thank you for this 👏 👏

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Very beautifully written and full of emotion!!!!!⭐️

Originally posted by: smilesforever98

Haila Isha! What is this?! I am so overwhelmed by this comment! I will actually cherish this one! I am so so grateful to have readers like you who love my writing to this extent that you find each one better than the last! Really just a huge 🤗 for you for even saying you find me worthy of writing so well that I could write a book. Baki I'm 15 right now. And I don't think you are crazy, in fact I adore each and every one of your comment that you write so genuinely, honestly and from your heart. They really mean so much to me.😳

And about the OS, a huge thank you again for liking this one and everything about it, right from ishita teaching the kids to the small IshRa moments where he embarrasses her to looking at her to the last moment! I really feel that Raman has been a father figure to his siblings and wrote the part with them thanking him for that reason! I wanted to show Raman bonding with the kids and spending time with them like most dads do and then he would feel slightly emotional since he has both his kids with him after a long time. As far as his small sacrifice is concerned, dads do those all the time without us knowing like Ruhi didn't know. And glad you liked the kids spending the day with their own dads. And I always wanted something to be talked about how Simmi feels raising Ananya as a single parent and added the small Ananya bit there. I really badly want Raman and Adi to have a moment where Adi talks about those 6 years where he didn't treat Raman the way he deserved to be treated, but since I haven't seen anything like that I added it here. And we needed Raman's jokes to lighten the emotions! Am super happy to know you felt all the emotions of the OS as you read it! The biggest compliment of all! Thank you for this beautiful comment!