Comment kya karu kuch samaj mein nahi araha seriously
I am amazed astonished I am speechless totally
amazed by the fact that your every update every story is so wow and you amaze me daily by giving such beautiful stories... and whenever I feel this was THE BEST you prove me wrong that nahi bhai watch out this one this is even more amazing... actually it's not good to compare your stories with each other as it will be a tough competition and ghar ka mamla hai no competition no ladai
you always put every emotion in your writing in such a beautiful way that the person unconsciously say wow man
Your writing skills are really wonderful bhai aapki age kya hai
you will do marvels if you will think of writing book
you will think I keep praising like crazy but really I do it from bottom of my heart
Well what to say about OS... it was outstanding in every way
the start ishita teaching kids the value of father how much he works hard for them and is always there and how he sacrifices for all of them
then there was a cute sa moment when ruhi kisses raman and he embarrasses ishita in return
romi's confession was lovely each and everyone's contribution in that moment was awesome
ishita was being a spectator but making his day special was really lovely
Icecream moment and theatre moments were cute raman's thinking process was written wonderfully when he saw his sweethearts laughing at his expenses
raman's chotu sa sacrifice when he saw ruhi was getting bored he thought to drop the movie even if he was enjoying
it was really awesome to see adi ruhi went with their father and romi simmi with their
forgot to mention loved the ananya wala part raman concern consoling and at the same time getting angry that was cute and even when raman was ogling ishu 😳
most important adi's confession that was awesome oh that was heart touching you made me cry so much yaar but it was worth it truly...
Raman's jokes to lightened the mood
And last but not the least Ishra moment that was really touching awesome buddy
Loved it thoroughly enjoyed it
laughed with it cried with it blushed giggled
was contended after reading it
thanks for such a wonderful update on father's day
actually I read it by afternoon but didn't post anything as I really wanted to comment with my heart
see what have I done I started it with like I don't have words and ended up writing an easy 😆
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