MANAN A TEENAGE OBSESSION - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 8
Recap: Nandini wakes up by her mom's call
Nandini: hi mom itna subha everything is fine na
Mom: Y cnt I Cl u in mrng
( manik comes to knock the door but he by mistakely here their conversation)
Nandini: mom aisa Kuch nahi hai vo.. Bas...
Mom: were Vr u yesterday
Nandini: I was in freshers party mom
Mom: Y didn't u inform me
Nandini: vo.. Mom... I frgt to inform u...
Mom: vaha jaka Kuch din bhi nahi hua n u started changing urself
Nandini: mom aisa Kuch nahi hai... Plz try to understand ( she was crying)
Mom: Ohh... Plzz... Nandini now stop ur crying drama plzzz
Nandini: mom plz... Plz... Listen to me...
Her mom cuts the call
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
PART 9
RECAP: Nandini s mom cuts the call in anger
Nandini was crying she started throwing things around her
Manik heard this He was knocking the door as fast as he can nandini realised n opens the door
Manik saw her eyes red n still tears filled in it
Manik: hey
Nandini: tum yaha
Manik: voo... Tum.. Kal apna hair pin giradiya so I thought il return it to u
Nandini: koye tuma yaha dhaklaga adhar arvo
Manik cm in saw all the things thrown down everything shattered everything
Manik: ur room is...
Nandini: is...
Manik: is... Clean yah clean
Nandini: u making fun of me srsly
Manik: I didn't mean to
Nandini: it's ok thanks again
Manik: mention not
Nandini: so... Byeee
Manik: yah bye
He goes to the door n again stops
Manik: voo...
Nandini: voo... Kya... Manik
Manik: I want to tell u smthng
Nandini: ya Tell me
Manik: vooo...
Nandini: manik not again
Manik: ahmmm... Gud mrng
Nandini: guuuddd mrng now leave warna koyi dheklaga
Manik went out n she left to washroom to fresh up
Manik thinking: common manik be a man cmn propose her
N he turns but close his eyes n says
Manik: Nandini I love you no srsly I really love u
N slowly open his eyes n sees dt nandini is nt there
Manik thinking: dts it Manik chal leave yaha sa

NANDINI freshen ups n goes to classes
DURING LUNCH BREAK
Nandini mood was so of bcz of her mom phone call N she didn't hv any frnd in clg she was not a person dt would easily mingle with every one she took a burger frm canteen n sat on a table
She was so lost in her own thoughts manik finally made him self free from fab 4 n rushed into canteen n saw her sitting alone
Bfr he could go n meet her a staff worker came to her
Staff worker: mam Ap hi nandini ho na
Nandini: ji ha
Staff worker: mam aap sa milna koye aaya hai
Nandini: mujsa aap jayiya ma aarahe hu
N she goes behind the staff worker he pointed her towards the main gate of S.P.A.C.E.
Manik also goes behind her
Nandini goes near the main gate n sees a man facing the other side
She tapped his shoulder n he turned back he was her child hood best friend AYAN (AYAN was a +2 student of science stream n nandini was his best friend she was imp part of his life)
Nandini: omg... AYAN is this rly u...
Ayan: u cn pinch me
Nandini hugs him tightly n he took her in his hands by making a round
Manik was left stunned the girl who was so shy who didn't mingle easily with others went n hugged a guy
Manik thinking: who the hell is he is he her friend or boyfriend
Boyfriend nahi aisa nahi hosaktha hai he can even be her brother but wt if...
He cm out of his thoughts n bcm so jealous so angry dt he started walking fast towards them to kill him right there but he couldn't as fab 5 were standing right back of him
Cabir: ohhh teri ya kya hogaya manik
Manik: cabinet not now I cn burst anytime on u
Cabir: ha vo toh dikhrahahai but jo mai dhekrahahu uska kya

Nandini n ayan broke their hug n nandini took ayan in the academy to show him Nandini was catching his hand n took him in
Dts it Manik didn't control he was just abt to move but
Aliya: manik Vr r u going
Manik: I hv sm work to be done
Mukti :we hv Mr imp jamming to be done chal aaja
Cabir :ya mukti is right chal aaja

IN JAMMING SESSION
Manik just couldn't concentrate on jamming session he was lost in his thoughts he wanted to go out n see nandini
Manik: I think it's enough fr today
Dhruv: manik it's not even half an hour
Manik: I got a call frm nyonika so I hv to leave byee
Cabir: nyonika iska kam toh aye atleast
Aliya: wt
Cabir: nthng chalo well continue
They started practicing
So frnz u must be knowing dt i posted many parts today as u all wished so plzz do gv me more feedback Feel free to comment share ur views on my Story il rlyyy be happy
With lots of love
Preethi
Nxt part tomorrow evening
Till then hv gud time

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
U rocked ! Wow it was 👏
jealous manik is a treat and yes waiting for next fab and long update 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Very nice updates.
I liked it.
Now it's time for volcano to burst.hope Nandini also starts to have feelings for manik soon.
I appreciate your efforts to post quickly.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Awesome update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Story is amazing
I loved it
Plzz dont complete the story in few part
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
PART 10
RECAP: Nandini bcms happy by ayans cmng visit to clg but manik is so angry with their both closeness
Manik moves out frm the jamming session to check out Nandini n ayan
Manik walking in the corridor seeing around
N thinking: goddd... Ya dono kaha pa hai.
MEANWHILE IN BARISTA COFFEE SHOP
Coffee shop was opposite to S.P.A.C.E. Academy
Nandini: so yaha aana kaisa hua
Ayan: vo mein... Aisaaa hi..
Nandini: Sach bol
Ayan: tujhe bohot miss karrahatha
Nandini: Acha kiya tumna I'm just nt liking this place
Ayan: Y wt happened
Nandini: I Dont even hv one friend over here n sab log bohot mean hai
Ayan: Matlab madam ka mood karab hai
Nandini gvs a sad pout
Ayan: chalo let's go
Nandini: go Vr
Ayan: ur favourite
Nandini: my fav bowling right
Ayan: yes
Nandini: chalo let's go ( she says in full of excitement)
Manik cms to the clg gate n sees them in opposite coffee shop
He saw them going smwr n followed them in car
They went to a mall
Manik wanted to know Vr they r going so he was slowly following them
They went to the bowling section
Ayan: Nandini tu yaha chair pe bhait me shoes leka aatha hu
Nandini: ya sure
Manik was just seeing her frm aside
By the time ayan was back he saw nandini sitting on the table
Ayan: Nandini yeh kya hai baby
Nandini: kya kya
Ayan: chal peher upar kar
He removed her heels n made her wear shoes
Manik entered in between
Manik: ahmmm... Hi...
Ayan: aap kaun
Nandini: ohhh... Hi... Ayan he is manik Manik he is ayan
Ayan: hi..
Manik: hi bowling..
Nandini: ya even u
Manik: yes..

Precap: manik proposes nandini while bowling n many other questions to be revealed

Frnzzz I'm rlyyy sorry fr the late update actually yesterday my bday so couldn't post rly sry nxt part tomorrow after 5:00 am pacca
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
super sweet n awesome update loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
awsum... update soon... want some romantic secens... plzzz write some romantic things... nd Happy birthday... enjoy ur day... have a rocking day...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dea. .
Continue soonnn

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