Arshi, I am sorry I am unable to fulfill your expectations of a couple that "communicates"
She told him she didnt want him to go, he told her he will, she also told him she cant go with him. I am not sure what else is there to "communicate"?
Trying to keep this tale going after 500 chapters without using any of Ekta's formulas is a feat in itself. Perversion, creepiness, punarjanam, look alikes, incest, female lead marrying two sometimes three brothers. Male lead sexual with multiple women. Writing such a story is a piece of cake
Writing one for 500 chapters with no dirt or grime is next to impossible.
Communication is important I understand, but a couple that constantly communicates does NOT make a good story
Since u seem like a IPKKND fan, I will try and explain it in those terms
If Arnav sat down and explained to Khushi he had no plans of marrying that innocent dusky girl he ruthlessly ditched AFTER promising to marry her... IPKKND would have come to an end in two episodes.
Khushi was fair and "pretty" so I guess she deserved Arnav😳 The dusky girl LOVED Arnav😭, Khushi pretended to be her friend and back stabbed her 😭
If Shyam had sat down and told Khushi he wanted to rape her, then there would be no story either
If Arnav sat down with the aunt that cracked lame jokes and explained to them why his sister needed a "helper" (who he will fall in love with later pretending to hate😆) they would have had to pack up
If he had sat Khushi down and explained why his brother needs to marry her "poor abandoned sister", the story would have ended RIGHT THERE
How ever illogical Shyam's hide and seek was the story kept dragging so Khushi could fall into Arnav's arms and the aunt could mercilessly insult her
The writers could have incorporated a round table meeting with all the characters and they all could have communicated and Shyam could have apologized...
My leads talk just enough, they dont talk every evening for a couple hours like married couples do, because this is not couples therapy its just a story.
If I keep resolving every issue, in a week or two, then I will have to do leap or incest like Ekta, I am not a big fan of either unfortunately. I write as a pastime, I am a full time employee mother and a wife, part time goof ball. I dont want any reader to use my tale as marital advice or communication therapy or anything
I have the pleasure of writing 10000s more chapters😳
So in order to keep the intrigue up the next 1000 or 10,000 chapters, they will communicate only when I make them
I know of no other non creepy, non documentary way of doing it
An example of "mature communicating" couple is as follows:
"A pregnant II went to the Doctor, R&B accompanied her, the tests went well, the Doctor was happy R&B was taking such good care of her. Chachi sent dinner every night. Marliese called to check on II's health every weekend. R&B was happy Marliese and II were becoming such good friends When he was alone he thanked God that he chose to send II as his life partner, so understanding and mature, wow!!
Appa and R&B went to Malai Mandir every Friday to pray for II's safe delivery, afterwards R&B and Appa chatted about politics and weather
R&B sold his stake in Argent and returned to India, and manages Excelsior for Dad, he's is ashamed he accused Dad, Manya and II are friends because they talked.
If they trust each other and talk about every goddamn thing then conversations would be as exciting as a wet noodle
II: "Lets look for a good school for admission"
R&B: "I was hoping you would say that my love, I have the rest of the week off, lets go together and find a school I know how important education is, to Iyers"
II: " I am happy I didn't go school hunting on my own, I am glad we discussed this together. I was thinking you were busy. U are never too busy for our kids are you?
R&B That's right...Not too busy for my aankhon ke tare II
II:I am so lucky we have such a good understanding
Lets say R&B likes School B, II likes School A
Instead of II deciding on A, she will "talk" and it will sound like this
"I like school A, but I can see why you like School B, U are right, Mrs Jones is a great teacher, I am glad u reminded me of her."
"Always II, I am here to help, we are raising these kids together. It's a joint effort my love, lets sit down so I can convince you why I like school B. Its important I clear all the doubts in your mind"
"Let me tell Mahavir to watch the kids so I can devote my full attention to our communication for the next two hours"
Communication is FANTASTIC I fully agree
I wouldn't waste my energy writing a STORY about it, SORRY!!
I dont think even one of my existing SoSy readers will want to read chapter after chapter of above
IF you happen to have any thrilling CLEAN and NON DOCUMENTARY like way of writing, share some themes I would be happy to craft scenes around it
I am sorry my talent is extremely limited😃
Edited by Nisha0604 - 8 years ago
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