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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

nice start...
looking forward...
what destiny store for them...
continue soon if possible...


thank you πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Interesting Prologue
BRING IT ON


thanks πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Start AshiπŸ‘πŸ˜Š


I really can't get wats happening in d storyπŸ˜•

1st I read in between n thought dat Zoya is a cheater n evil woman. Then I read again n it luks like Asad used her. I will have to wait for Part 1 to understand it properly.

Zoya is right in her place as no one can tolerate someone using them

Still, I feel dat Asad actually loved her but did sumthn which is making Zoya think dat he used her. Lets see how Asad makes up for his mistakes.

Update soon n PM meπŸ˜ƒ



Is dis d same story which u, Heenu n AsYaManeet(dunno her real name) planned to write 2gthr a story in which girls r treated like commodities? 


thank you juhi

i'll surely pm u

and its not the same story... its a new one πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Salaam Ashiii..
Thanx for the PM...& the Spot*...
Well a new story from You...well Iam excited as well as cautious ki Now how you will take class of our AsYa*...in a way it is your style of writing ...and I like it..
AsYa* are happily married for 6 months..both loving eachother...like their Zaroorat' and Zidd' but wants to be each others Zindagi*...will look forward to it...how this will happen...
From the looks of it...AsYa marriage was an business arrangement... but both fell in love...and now only Zoya came to know aout it...and their happy nest is scattered...
How will they reconcile...?
Interesting start..
Continue soonish...


w. salaam mayur

thank you so much for the beautiful reply πŸ˜Š

i'll reconcile in my own style
but i can assure you that its not a sad one
so you can relax πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

i am here!!!!
reading u for the first time...and so sweeet of u to include me in ur friends

prologue was awesome...from love n longing to anger n hurt! what was all this??

curious to know the reason...

loved the song too!!!

and yes! thoughtful title!

cont soon


thank u so much for coming here srash πŸ˜Š
it means a lot

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing at the same time very confusing

would love to read more
please continue soon πŸ˜Š


thank u dear πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu

love it dear.. quite intresting path.. 

but i'm confused. May be, next update would sort out it,...i'm really looking forward to this new ss...
keep writing and update soon...


thank you πŸ˜Š
hope u got clear in next part

or else u can ask me
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice
Interesting
Plz update soon


thanks πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar

Hi dear
Love to see u back
The story concept is so amazing
So asya are already married and loved each other alot
How zoya became his zaroorat first
Then may be after sumtime they love each other
Who is on the call that zoya change in seconds
Love the last dailogue of asad
So many questions
U have to update soon dear
U start such an amazing story and its just prologue
Love the prologueand poetry so much
Thanks for pm
Pm me of ur all next updates
Update soon


thank you so much dear πŸ˜Š

hmm these lines are from my fav song πŸ˜³
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice prologue
Seems interesting
Looking forward for an update soon which is after 15 June. Enjoy ur time
Thanks for pm


thank you dear πŸ˜Š