nice start...
looking forward...
what destiny store for them...
continue soon if possible...
nice start...
looking forward...
what destiny store for them...
continue soon if possible...
Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Start Ashiππ
I really can't get wats happening in d storyπ1st I read in between n thought dat Zoya is a cheater n evil woman. Then I read again n it luks like Asad used her. I will have to wait for Part 1 to understand it properly.Zoya is right in her place as no one can tolerate someone using themStill, I feel dat Asad actually loved her but did sumthn which is making Zoya think dat he used her. Lets see how Asad makes up for his mistakes.Update soon n PM meπIs dis d same story which u, Heenu n AsYaManeet(dunno her real name) planned to write 2gthr a story in which girls r treated like commodities?
Originally posted by: MayurChan
Salaam Ashiii..
Thanx for the PM...& the Spot*...
Well a new story from You...well Iam excited as well as cautious ki Now how you will take class of our AsYa*...in a way it is your style of writing ...and I like it..
AsYa* are happily married for 6 months..both loving eachother...like their Zaroorat' and Zidd' but wants to be each others Zindagi*...will look forward to it...how this will happen...
From the looks of it...AsYa marriage was an business arrangement... but both fell in love...and now only Zoya came to know aout it...and their happy nest is scattered...
How will they reconcile...?
Interesting start..
Continue soonish...
Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
i am here!!!!
reading u for the first time...and so sweeet of u to include me in ur friends
prologue was awesome...from love n longing to anger n hurt! what was all this??
curious to know the reason...
loved the song too!!!
and yes! thoughtful title!
cont soon
Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing at the same time very confusing
would love to read moreplease continue soon π
Originally posted by: ASYAaishu
love it dear.. quite intresting path..
but i'm confused. May be, next update would sort out it,...i'm really looking forward to this new ss...keep writing and update soon...
Originally posted by: rabiamunawar
Hi dear
Love to see u back
The story concept is so amazing
So asya are already married and loved each other alot
How zoya became his zaroorat first
Then may be after sumtime they love each other
Who is on the call that zoya change in seconds
Love the last dailogue of asad
So many questions
U have to update soon dear
U start such an amazing story and its just prologue
Love the prologueand poetry so much
Thanks for pm
Pm me of ur all next updates
Update soon
Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice prologue
Seems interesting
Looking forward for an update soon which is after 15 June. Enjoy ur time
Thanks for pm
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