I Need You Now (Song Os ) Abhigya

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<font size="2">Hello everyone, okay please don't laugh , this is my first attempt , sorry for the mistakes
okay im ready for the red tomatoes ..
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Oh just a suggestion play the song =)😊
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He went closer to her , she can see the anger drawing in his eyes .. But when he laid his hand her hips she saw something else ,she closed her eyes , she couldn't be so weak she needs to stop this before she.. She took a long breath ..

- How many time should i repeat this.. I don't love you.. I'm leaving this house for good

He stepped back , he kept his fists tightly clenched

-Pragya.. How can you be so indifferent?

-She is pregnant Abhi ! You are the Father ! Why can't you understand ?! You have responsibilities!

She was shocked she never shouted him like that

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- Tell me .. How can i marry her when ..

- She is your gilrfriend ??Pragya quickly replied you always wanted this hai na ? Now she will come to this house .. And I .. I just don't care anymore . She said bitterly


Picture perfect memories,

Scattered all around the floor,

Reaching for the phone cause, I can't fight it any more.

And I wonder if I ever cross your mind.

For me it happens all the time.


She took her luggages and step out the room , she looked a last time at their rooms , so many memories flashed in her mind, she turned her heels .. She stopped in the corridor , shejust burst out sobbing.
She needed this , after all he doesn't love her how can she stay with him , and .. The baby he needs his father , she perfectly knows how is a life without a father. It's extremely hurtful , the pain follows you all your life. No she .. She can't be selfish .. She , then remembered the look Abhi gave her.. The way he was looking at her it was it was different for the first time she felt lo..
"NO ! Just go Pragya , you .. you have to be strong" she rubbed away her tears
"You will struggle Pragya you will come over this Pragya"

It's a quarter after one, I'm all alone and I need you now.

Said I wouldn't call but I lost all control and I need you now.

And I don't know how I can do without, I just need you now.


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Abhi was sitting on the floor , many bottles of alcohol were scattering in the room, all his pics were down, The room was a in a bloody mess.
Thank God Dadi wasn't here , she was gone to Ludhiana for a week ..
How can he face the world ? Why was it so hurting him ? She just rejected him , she played with him he thought she loved him , this girl was not his Pragya.. How a rejection can be so painful .
She just left.. Why ? He wanted to hate her but he couldn't his heart was telling him how good his Pragya is . He was crazy in love with her... It's impossible .. She was always here for him she can't let him like that. The feelings he felt when he touched her he was damn sure that she felt the same ..

<i>Another shot of whiskey, can't stop looking at the door.

Wishing you'd come sweepin' in the way you did before.

And I wonder if I ever cross your mind.

For me it happens all the time.

It's a quarter after one, I'm a little drunk, and I need you now.

Said I wouldn't call but I lost all control and I need you now.

And I don't know how I can do without, I just need you now


He took another glass of whiskey .. He then thought about Tanu . How can he marry her ? How can he spend the rest of his life with her ? Is she really pregnant ? His mind wasn't thinking straight , he had a lot of questions , he was confused , he was sure that he never went closer to her after his marriage" What should I do ?" he questioned himself ,
He seethed of anger and throw his glass at the wall.

Guess I'd rather hurt than feel nothing at all.

It's a quarter after one, I'm all alone and I need you now.

And I said I wouldn't call but I'm a little drunk and I need you now.

And I don't know how I can do without, I just need you now.

I just need you now.

Oh baby I need you now.

He passed his hand through his hair and managed to go to bed , he was drunk and really tired. Tears were coming out " I need you Pragya.. I need you now"


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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's fantastic Asma!! You have explored their emotions so beautiful. A powerful dose of angst. And I could hear the song playing in my mind as I read. If it's a TS there's another part coming right? Yay! Thanks for posting!!
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Asma, I can picture this with the scenes that are to come! Thank you, great job!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous!! Love that song to :)xx
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Thanks everyone :) I'm really glad you liked it :)
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Wow Asma! So so powerful, very emotional, heart breaking! Nicely written! <3
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Asmaaa ..this is just fabulous ..your first attempt is perfect , the scene, the feelings , the lyrics and the end ..every thing is well chosen and well done ..I loved it so much ,really
Shukran Hapipti ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simsim25

Wow Asma! So so powerful, very emotional, heart breaking! Nicely written! <3




Thank you Simmi :)
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Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Asmaaa ..this is just fabulous ..your first attempt is perfect , the scene, the feelings , the lyrics and the end ..every thing is well chosen and well done ..I loved it so much ,really
Shukran Hapipti ..

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Aww thank you so much habiti <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved ur updated asma
First impressions is best impression.
Nice asma

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