Aasmano Pe Likha.. || [Part 14 PG. 28.] - Page 3

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Meanwhile..
"Chalein Bhai? Derr ho rhi hai." Ashim spoke to his wife and daughter. "Chaliye Baba." Adhira stepped out, fixing her dupatta. Geetanjali stepped out too. "Chaliye. Chaliye." Geetanjali spoke as she adjusted Her Saree's border over her head. "Dada kahaan hai?" Adhira asked abt Arnab. "Woh baahar intezaar kar rha hai. Chalo Beta." Ashim replied and the Three walked out.. After a Few Minutes, There was a knock at the Iron Gates of The Khan House. "Jee Aayein." Syra replied as she walked slowly and opened the gate.. She was met by A Pleasant Suprise.. "Kaka-Kaki?" She smiled. "Asalaam Walaikum Kaka." She greeted Ashim. "Walaikum Asalaam Beta. Eid Mubarak." Ashim blessed her. "Eid Mubarak." She wished him back. "Asalaam Walaikum Kaki. Eid Mubarak." Syra greeted Geetanjali. "Walaikum Asalaam. Jeeti Raho! Sada Suhagan Raho! Allah tumhe chaand si aulaad dein.. Eid Mubarak" Geetanjali blessed her lovingly. "Baajiii...!!!" Adhira hugged Syra. Syra smiled, hugging the Younger Girl..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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After all the greetings were done away with.. Syra took them to the Courtyard where Nusrat was sitting.. "Amma? Dekhein kaun aaya hai." Syra spoke, happily. "Asalaam Walaikum Bhabhi-Jaan. Eid Mubarak." Ashim wished her. "Walaikum Asalaam Bhaisahab. Eid Mubarak aapko bhi." Nusrat greeted him fondly. The Ganguly's And Khan's Were More Than Just Neighbours.. They Were Family.. "Asalaam Walaikum Chachi. Eid Mubarak." Adhira wished her politely, Bending down a little. "Walaikum Asalaam Meri Jaan. Jeeti Raho. Khush Raho. Eid Mubarak." Nusrat blessed her by kissing her forehead. "Aur yeh tumhari Eidi." Nusrat took out sum Cash from the knot in her dupatta and gave it to Adhira. "Yeh takleef kyun ki aapne Aapa? Aapki Duaein bohot thi." Geetanjali spoke. "Takaluff kaisi? Adhira meri beti hai.. Aur aaj Eid wale din isspar uska poora haqq hai." Nusrat replied, fondly caressing Adhira's forehead. Adhira thanked Nusrat politely.. "Aap hi ki Beti hai Aapa." Geetanjali smiled. "Zain kahaan hai?" She asked..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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"Kissi ne Iss nacheez ko yaad farmaya?" A voice came from behind, Making all heads turn to that Direction.. There was Zain, Standing with a Goofy smile on his face.. "Asalaam Walaikum Kaka. Eid Mubarak." The men greeted each other Gale Milke as per the Muslim Tradition. "Asalaam Walaikum Kaki. Eid Mubarak. Mashallah! Mashallah! Aap toh din par din aur khoobsurat aur Haseen-Tareen hoti jaa rhi hain! Kya baat Hai?" Zain spoke to which all chuckled. "Walaikum Asalaam. Eid Mubarak. Aur apni Kaki ko chhed raha hai Shaitaan?" Geetanjali spoke, gently chiding him. "Aree! Aree! Tauba Istakfaar." Zain held both his ears cutely, making others chuckle again. "Meri kya Majaal jo main aapko chhedun? Main toh aapki tareef kar raha tha. Mashallah! Aapke saamne to Jawaan Khoobsurat ladkiyan bhi paani bhare." Zain replied, goofily. "Shaitaan!" Geetanjali gently twisted his ears a little. Making everyone laugh again.. "Kaise ho Mere Dost?" Arnab-Zain hugged each other. "Main Theek. Khuda ka shukr. Tum Batao yaar." Zain spoke..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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"Asalaam Walaikum. Eid Mubarak." A Gentle voice, fell in Zain's Ears. He lukd around and became concious of Two Ocean Blue Eyes on him.. It was Adhira who wished him wid a polite smile. She lukd Enchanting in her Red Salwaar Kameez.. Her Bangles Tinkled Beautifully along wid her Anklets.. Her Bindi shone in the gentle sunlight and Her Maangtika glowed.. She had covered her head wid her Dupatta making her luk Heavenly. "Walaikum Asalaam. Eid Mubarak aapko bhi." Zain spoke as words seem to get stuck in his mouth. She was Heavenly Beautiful.. Syra nudged her Brother making him look away from His Enchantress. "Syra Beta? Yeh aap logon ke liye." Geetanjali handed Syra the sweet boxes.. "Iski kya Zaroorat thi Geeta?" Nusrat spoke. "Zaroorat thi Aapa. Jaise Adhira aur Arnab aapke bacche. Waise hi Zain aur Syra bhi Mere.. Aur isme maine Zain ki pasand ke Sandesh bhi rakhwaye hain." She spoke. "Kaki? Love You Baby!" Zain blew a flying kiss to Geetanjali. "Chal Hatt Besharam." Geetanjali smacked his forhead..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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Everyone Chuckled Again.. All sat down making themselves comfortable.. "Zain? Aur batao padhayi kaise chal rahi hai?" Ashim asked. "Sab Khairiyat Kaka. Agar aap logon ki Duaein rahi toh Inshallah yeh aakhri saal, Acche Numberon se kamyab ho jaunga." Zain Replied. "Inshallah! Inshallah! Beta tum zaroor kamyaab hoge. Bhabhi-Jaan, Humara Zain sach mein bohot laayak baccha hai. Rabab ne jo isko Engineer banane ka khwaab dekha tha. Zain ussi bakhoobi poora kar raha hai.." Ashim praised him. "Bas Bhaisahab. Sab Allah ka Shukr aur aap logon ki Duaein.." Nusrat replied, making Ashim smile. "Accha yeh toh batao Barkhurdaar? Kitne dino ke liye aaye ho?" Ashim asked. "Bas kal ka din aur Kaka. Parso meri Lahore ki train hai.." Zain replied. "Itni Jaldi? Thoda 2-3 aur rukk jaata beta! Pichli baar jab tumne khat likha tha toh kaha tha.. Ki Kaki hafte bhar ke liye aaunga. Aur aapke haath ka Aalu Poosto, Maach Er Jhaal aur Mishti Doi khaa ke jaunga.." Geetanjali spoke. "Meri Pyaari Kaki." Zain held her hands, lovingly..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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"Mera yakeen karein. Mera iraada hafte bhar ki chutti lekar aane ka tha, yahi baat maine Amma se bhi kahi thi. Par kya karun? Padhayi ki itni masrufiyat hai ki lambi chutti lekar aa nhi saka. Par koi baat nhi.. Jab agli baar aaunga na tab aap mujhe khila dijiyega.. Aapko pata hai Amma ke baad mujhe aapke haath ka khaana sabse zyaada azeez hai." He explained it to her, lovingly. Geetanjali gently caressed his forehead.. "Aap log baithein. Main Sharbet laati hunn." Syra spoke getting up. "Baji main bhi aati hunn aapke saath." Adhira volunteered. "Aree nhi. Iski zaroorat nhi. Tum baitho." Syra insisted. "Nhi Baji. Main bhi aati hunn." Adhira spoke, getting up. Syra lukd at her mother who allowed her to take Adhira.
In The Kitchen..
"Kitni acchi khushboo aa rhi hai Bawarchikhaane se Baji. Bilqul waisi jaise humare Rasoi se aati hai Durga Pujo ke waqt." Adhira spoke, stirring the Sugar. Syra smiled at her cuteness. "Hmm. Woh toh hai. Durga Pujo ke waqt toh Kaki ke haath ka khaana.. Lazeez!"Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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"Moong Er Daal, Luchi, Sandesh, Mishti Doi Sabkuch." Syra spoke. "Aur Nusrat Chachi ke haath ke Kabaab, Biryaani aur Firni." Adhira spoke and both girls laughed together.. "Accha Baji? Zahid Bhai aaye the kya?" Adhira asked her. Instantly, A Red Blush stained Syra's cheek. Adhira was quick to notice that.. "Batayein na Baji? Aayein the kya?" Adhira asked her teasingly. Syra smiled shyly. "Oye Hoye! Main Vari Jaavan.." Adhira hugged her from behind. "Iska matlab aaye the! Kya kaha?" She asked. Syra shook her head, blushing. "Batao na?" Adhira insisted. "Keh.. Keh.. Rahein The, Ki woh mujhe bohot yaad karte hain. Mere bagair unka dil nhi lagta." Syra spoke and hid her face in her Palms, Blushing. Adhira laughed at Syra's Innocence. "Oye Hoye! Matlab kaafi pyaar bhari baatein hui. Hain Na?" Adhira teased her further to which Syra nodded, shyly. Adhira smiled but didnt probe further as It wudnt be Appropriate.. "Main aapke liye bohot khush hunn Baji. Allah Aapko Chaand si Aulaad dein." Adhira let out a prayer..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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Adhira And Syra walked out wid Two Trays of Sherbet Glasses.. They served the cool liquid to everyone.. Adhira presented the tray before Zain.. He took a glass luking at her. She gave him a polite smile and walked forward. She never had been too friendly wid Zain.. She hadnt ever even talked to him once. Just wid polite smiles and formal greetings on Ocassions.. "Mashallah se Adhira ko toh bohot roop chadha hai.." Nusrat spoke as she saw Adhira serving Sharbet. "Haan Aapa. Mashallah!" Geetanjali spoke. "Bohot Pyaari aur Saleekamand bacchi hai.. Jis ghar jayegi, Khushaali layegi." Nusrat added as she was fond of the Beautiful Young girl. "Aapa, ab main soch rhi hunn ki koi accha sa ladka dekh ke Adhira ko uske ghar ki kar dunn." Geetanjali spke. "Bilqul! Ladkiyan Maa-Baap ki Amanat hoti hain. Aur Apni Adhira toh Mashallah se 20 saal ki hai." Nusrat added to which Geetanjali nodded.. Precap- Adhira's Marriage Proposal..Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
yay..woohoo.. me first!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
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Awesome start di 
loved it!
the family bondings are beautifully portrayed.. so close, sweet n warm relationship👏😳❤️
Idd ka jashn.. wow.. really interesting to read!!
everything was so pure, serene n peaceful!!😳😃
Syra, Nusrat are really lovely ladies!! Zain ke to kya kehne😉😆
loved Zain-Syra's childish antics.. bachpana nahi gaya dono ka😃 but their bond is really strong!!❤️
Geeta-Adhira are so sweet!!😳 Ashim-Arnab are real gentlemen😃
the Bengali delicacies.. yumm..My mouth is watering reading the names.. roshogullo,sandesh, mishti doi.. di..sirf likhne se kaam nahi chalega.. mujhe khana he.. pls parcel me these all things!!😛saare charges aap pay karna..me sirf khaungi😉
Adhira n Syra share a beautiful bond!! 😳
Zain bahot shaitaan he.. kaki ko chhed raha he wo bhi kaka ke saamne.. dekhna pitaayi na ho jaye😉😆
the small Adhira-Zain scene was beautiful..he was lost in her beauty😳 well she is that pretty😉
the teasing session was cute😃😆
So ab Adhira ki shaadi ki baat hone wali he.. 
kiske saath???😉😉
precap is interesting😳
do continu soon
thanks for pm
p.s. - Beautiful banner Proteeti👏😃
Edited by Godly_Affection - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it Shanu 
Awesome update & Love you lots 🤗
I must say what a start to a wonderful story 
It was just beautiful 
both Families share a wonderful bond 
Its true that Love, Friendship & Humanity are above all religions 
& that you have very well shoen here 
Zain Flirting with her Kaki was too cute 
& I too just loved the entire warm & positive enviourment of this story 
waiting to read how things turn 
Thanks for the PM 
Continue soon  😊